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After reading a few chapters, I feel that it is okay. There are just some minor problems, such as the frequent use of different pronouns and the expression of the characters' speeches. Personally, it is quite uncomfortable to watch, but it is not unbearable. Overall, it is highly recommended. I also hope that the author can read the comments and correct the problems found by readers, so that the book review may also be improved. (Personal opinion, if you feel it is not good, you can delete it, thank you) I will read it again later, and if I think it is good, I will review it [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] I originally thought I could hold on for a little longer, but I'm sorry, author, I felt a little uncomfortable reading this book. Except for the previous ones, I won't say much about the characters and writing style. After all, I also write a book myself, so I can better understand. Author, you are indeed working very hard on writing, but I still hope that you will stop updating for a few days and revise it, especially the previous ones. After all, everyone who clicks on your book mainly reads the previous ones. In a few chapters, there are a lot of problems in the first few chapters. For example, there are often "she and I" situations often occur, and character dialogues often lack punctuation. These are also one of the red flags for some people. In addition, there are also many people who don't like "Jiaohe". The same is true for me. It sounds a bit uncomfortable, and the plot is also a bit embarrassing. Well... Anyway, these situations can't let me continue reading. This is what I see so far. Author, you are indeed writing this book well. I also see that you love this book. If you really want more people to like this book, it is better to listen to the opinions of readers and make appropriate changes. Otherwise, many people will be dissuaded by the "minor problems" in the first few chapters (just like me) Finally, I hope the author can continue writing. After all, it is not easy to write so many words.

It's really beautiful! Very sweet! But I still want to ask weakly, is it okay if I want to see a picture of a sick little fish with a stomachache [sending my heart]

It looks great, but can the teacher put quotation marks around and around when people speak ಣ

I really like this kind of article. If you like Anqingyu, I recommend reading it.

Although he is gone, his love will remain with him for thousands of years. The characters in the book are as vivid as life, and this love story makes people still remember it long after reading it. Every sentence is balanced and every word is beautiful, moistened by spring water and wet flowers and smoke. The author's writing style is exquisite, and the love and hatred in the book are deeply engraved in the book. After reading it, I couldn't put it down for a long time. A piece of romance becomes an obsession after being penned down. The love between children in the book has entangled the world for half a lifetime and made me drunk with time. The pen and ink are woven with the lingering charm of ancient times, and the ups and downs of love and hate are all deeply rooted in people's hearts. When the book is closed, it is still hard to calm down. With mountains and rivers as the curtain, and lovesickness as the string, the love here is gentle, and every word is tender to the bone. There is a love affair in the book, and countless emotions in the world are difficult to reconcile. The writing is exquisite, and you will be addicted to the love in the world at a glance. The writing is as deep and profound as the writing, and the ink painting is full of encounters in troubled times. The whole article is full of character and tenderness, and I can't bear to put it down. You use your pen and ink to spread out the world of troubled times, describing the excitement of meeting, the enthusiasm of staying together, and the sorrow of separation. The bond between the male and female protagonists develops layer by layer, and deep love is hidden in every word and deed. The righteousness of family and country envelops the love between children. It warms my heart when I read it. After a long time, I am still addicted to the tender love between the two. A scroll of paper captures the romance of the ancient dynasties; a few love relationships capture the infatuation of the world. There is no exaggerated accumulation of love, and all the heartbeats and rushes are consistent. Against the background of the beacon smoke of the rivers and lakes, and the grievances and grudges of the world, the two protagonists redeem each other and rush to each other in the ups and downs of the world. The writing style is elegant and ancient, the charm is long, the love and hate are traced, the affection is deep and well-founded, and every plot twist affects the mood. It is a rare masterpiece of ancient romance. The book hides the romance, and the pen and ink express the lovesickness. This ancient love softens the years in the writing and traps the reader's mind. When we meet in troubled times, we fall in love with each other, and we stay together for half a lifetime. The author blends the lingering love among the ancient mountains and rivers, and tells it in a eloquent way, which is touching. After reading the whole book, I feel like I have experienced an ancient love. The joys and sorrows are real. The writing has ancient charm and endless aftertaste. The writing has its own ancient charm, the words and sentences are in line with the times, the love descriptions are subtle and heart-wrenching, the story structure is full and smooth, and the whole process of reading is enjoyable. It uses ancient scenery to describe deep feelings, and human affairs to describe infatuation. The writing style is gentle and elegant, and the plot is relaxed and restrained. It is a good ancient romance novel that you won't be able to put down once you read it. Reasonableness, restraint and enthusiasm intertwined between the lines, vividly depicting the romance and sadness of ancient romance. The diction is gentle and elegant, describing the ancient people's affection delicately and implicitly, the pampering section is not cliché, the ancient charm and sweet atmosphere are perfectly blended, and the whole reading process makes the body and mind comfortable. It uses ancient scenery to highlight the lingering love, the interaction is warm and natural, the preference is hidden in every word and action, the sweetness is warm and long-lasting, the writing style is full of ancient charm, and it is very healing to read.

The writing is very beautiful [Send my heart] [Send my heart] But I want to ask, why does the heroine remember the plot one moment and not the next?

When I first read this book, the name wasn't very good, and then I wasn't interested in it. But then I randomly clicked in and took a look, and then I realized that I'm a bit picky about reading books. This is the only Zhan Shen I've read, yes.

Some plots in this book need to be described in detail, but overall it is not good. For example, after Lin Qiye crashes, you add some action or psychological and mental descriptions. Author, you don't seem to be very good at writing emotional scenes. [Laughing] [Laughing] [Laughing] I still feel that you are suitable for writing fighting scenes, because you have written the most and most detailed fighting scenes.

It's okay, but why do you keep mentioning it?

It's very beautiful, and the whole CP feeling is also very beautiful.

Love it. In fact, the author introduced in the introduction that this is a CP guess from the same class, so if you really can't accept that An Qingyu's CP has been removed, then don't read it! But I still quite like it, after all, it's just my personal taste~ [Shy] So come on, author [Blow a kiss]

Uh, just asking if I don't understand, will Jiang Er appear later?

This book won my heart, it is so beautiful This book is quite nice, and the characters are relatively three-dimensional. However, the names and interactions in the book and some plots made me feel that the heroine written by the author is a bit strange. I know that I want to create an image, but I think this image is a bit too delicate. So this book was given to me because I wanted to read it, but I felt uncomfortable after reading it. I hope the author can take a look at the comment section and see if he can change some of the details of the names and the interactions between them. It is really difficult. Accept (T^T) For example, brother Xiaoyu can be changed to Xiaoyu, because sometimes it feels really embarrassing, and I think the image of the heroine lacks some independence, confidence and strength. When she is in public places, such as the section on the train, it feels so embarrassing and strange. In summary, I still hope that the author can take a look at the comment area and change this article. If you change it again, change the details, I think the score can reach 9.0

I'll eat the little fish

I feel like the protagonist doesn't have as many roles as in the original work

It looks good, but it's a bit boring when you look at the back

It's very nice and pretty, and it's sweet with An Qingyu's cp 😉

Very beautiful and attractive

It's very pretty, but it's too sweet. I'm a bit envious as a single guy [pouts]

It's super nice, although some places are a bit... Wrong, but it's okay

Yes, it feels very CP. I highly recommend it~ The CP who really likes this setting is An Crucian Carp

It's good-looking, the interaction between the heroine and Xiaoyu is very sweet, and the relationship line comes naturally

I like cp, it's so fun. The knife is flat, happy.

It's wonderful, I love it so much. 🥰🥰🥰

Okay but it looks good

Look, look, look, it's so beautiful

It can be good-looking

A lot of punctuation marks are missing

I quite like it, not bad

I like it very much, very beautiful