A Full-Level Celestial Master Dressed as a Fool and Took His Son to a Variety Show

It's well written, and there is no deliberate creation of negative characters to highlight the protagonist. The story is plain and interesting, and the structure is very clear. It would be nice if it could be a little more scary (the last personal wish, please don't scold me if you don't accept it)

Looks good! ! ! The plot does not develop so fast, but advances bit by bit ~ the characters are very obvious! Moreover, the plot is not that bloody, the characters are relatively sober, and there will be no moral kidnapping.

Five stars for the writing of the fight scenes. The plot is also foreshadowing and suspenseful. The highlight is that there are some supporting characters in it, such as Xie Xie from Xuanmen and Cheng Rui, a familiar big boy. It is really annoying and noisy, and makes people angry. I haven't even read the halfway point yet, so I couldn't help but leave a comment to see if there are any other interesting points. There are a lot of good reviews, and there are indeed good and bad parts. Some people even pointed out that the original protagonist is Lu Chenshu (I haven't seen this part yet, so I'm still suspicious). From the beginning, Lu is relatively sensible and helpful. I skipped to finish reading. The villain is the one from the Lu family, and the supporting characters throughout the whole story are just the mysterious ones. In fact, there is a fragment about why the villain is like this (as expected, he was a warm-hearted saint before being betrayed and turned into a black man). Maybe I saw some too annoying scenes in the past and I couldn't calm down in the end. I read it well, and there are few comments. I wonder if more people will read this article in the future. The foreshadowing of the protagonist's life was revealed later. I originally expected Lin to call Master "father", but I thought too much. Lin actually doesn't show much facial expressions, and his emotional lines account for a small proportion. Star Lovely focuses on the role of a warm connection. The method of Tianshi is a little different from other novels. Lu Chen and Lin Qingyu can be regarded as each other's family in the future, and they will always be happy.

The writing is very good, but I need to write more emotional lines, teacher˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅

I think it's very interesting, but the writing style may be a little lacking (in my personal opinion), but the story and characters written by the teacher are very delicate, which is really to my liking. Come on, teacher! I will always follow you! [Top post][top post]

Why is Lu Chen set to be in his thirties? He and Cheng Rui grew up together. The description of Cheng Rui's brother and sister-in-law is that they are a young couple at the Cheng Che Police Station. Su Chen is supposed to be younger. I think it is more reasonable to be in his twenties, right?

Wow, wow, it's so beautiful, the author's writing is good, and the atmosphere is so warm. Baby Star Baby is so cute, I feel like my heart is melting. Our Master Qingyu is so awesome, I want to learn how to draw talisman. Master Qingyu can teach me. ∧_∧:: (´･ω･`):: /⌒⌒):: /へ_＿ / /:: (＼ﾐ)/:: ｜ `-イ:: /ｽ ):: /／／:: ／／:: (く::: |＼ヽ:::

The overall content is great and the subject matter is very novel, but the writing style and content are still a bit hollow. The protagonist is a bit like a background board. Although the stars are cute, they are also a bit rigid and the sense of interaction is not very strong. The other supporting characters are not very three-dimensional and their sense of presence is too low. However, the character of Qingyu is perfect! It has flesh and blood, it says that it doesn't care but its heart is very soft, and the writing style has also improved in the later period. Come on, the author, I look forward to better works from the author [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

From what I've read so far, I think this article is quite good and the writing style is also very good.

It's good-looking, and doesn't feel like a mindless, cool novel or a special routine.

It's nice to look at, but Lu changed her mind about Lin too quickly. It feels like she just changed her mind after doing a few things. It's a bit weird [Thinking]

Beautiful and well written [Adoration]

This book is very nice

So far so good, nice looking

Nice! Great support from the author ૮₍˃̶ꇴ˂̶₎ა

Lin's speech has an "ancient flavor", and there is always a contrast when talking with other people. It is not abrupt but interesting [send heartfelt]

It's really an underrated book. The author is really awesome [codezhu] [codezhu] [codezhu] I hope the rating will go up in the future [angry] [angry] [angry]

Very well written and highly recommended

Very beautiful, cleansing the mind and body. Forget it, I don't know how to write a review. The author will update it quickly! ! ! Highly recommend it! ! !

Very good! I won't find it boring even half of the time, it's very interesting.

The writing is very good. In the early stage, there are more ghost-catching scenes. After the emotional scenes, it is very interesting. There may be some shortcomings. I really like the characters of the people in it. Come on, author, little couple 99

The character setting is very interesting and the stars are cute. . I haven't finished it yet and I'm looking forward to it. I hope the plot won't disappoint me.

Good, good, so beautiful

It's quite nice to see this. Qingyu, who looks cold but kind, is a cute little star. I like it so much!

It looks good. Lin Qingyu is a bit cold. I like it very much.

It's good to read. It will be a book I want to read again.

It's very interesting, but the plot is a bit slow. The author writes it very well.

It looks pretty good so far and well written.

It's very nice. It's good to keep writing like this.

The foreshadowing is very attractive to me, I like it very much, it's very good-looking, the only thing is that the person named Cheng talks a lot [awkward laugh][awkward laugh]