The Great Wizard Who Traveled Through the Ancient Times and Changed His Life in the Ancient Times

A very good book, worthy of 5 stars, which can beat 80% to 90% of prehistoric novels. What I am reading is Honghuang novel. I don't want to see the main character cultivating from the beginning to the end. The main character is the only one from the beginning to the end, right? It's boring and grinding.

The content innovation is pretty good, the logic is pretty good, and there is no confusing information timeline. (I read an article and the content creation was pretty good, but the timeline was messed up, which led to many problems. I didn't pay attention to the content, and I didn't modify it, which wasted the innovation.) Later, you can add climax and plot points. There are too few characters, too much creative content, few exciting points, and few IQ showdowns. Let's sort out where in your plot development it would be more fun to add a climax? Just think about it slowly.

The author's ideas are very novel and the logic is very clear. The plug-in you open is even more unique. It uses formations as all-round support for the plug-in, which is more in line with common sense than some system sign-in or critical attack. It is more in line with the basic laws of ancient times. I hope the author can work hard and update it soon~

The setting is good, but the power level is a bit low compared to the real mythical prehistoric era. Da Luo here is the golden immortal of myth. He begins to understand the rules and the single universe The Hunyuan Daluo Jinxian here is Taiyi. He completely masters one rule and begins to expand and master other rules. There is no upper limit and infinite superposition. It is also a multiverse in other worlds. The third level of Daluo Fusion Dao here is still Taiyi, but with one force overwhelming ten thousand Dao or merging ten thousand Dao The fourth realm, the Expanding Dao Realm, is a manifestation of Taiyi. Taiyi itself means infinite and can be expanded and developed infinitely. The fifth realm of mythology finally begins to involve the long river of time and space, and multi-dimensional projection incarnation. It is considered a real Da Luo, extending from the plane to the infinite expansion to the three-dimensional expansion.

Everything else is easy to say, "Father's debt must be paid by son." No matter what, it's not your turn. Sanqing, 12 ancestral witches, etc. Are still alive, and what can I say if they have achieved enlightenment in Sanqing?

I rarely do book reviews, but the logic of this book is online. The story line is slightly flawed, which may be due to improving strength. The fights are basically instant kills. It has more divinity and less humanity, but it is a bit popular. I hope the author will add more weird law attacks in the future, such as space superposition defense, curse attack on the body of the soul, riot cause and effect, fate modification, and time confusion. Death does not mean there is no attack, and anyone passing by may be plotted! And Lao Liu's trump card! Adding to the mystery of the Ancient Times, the Return of the South China Sea, the Devil's Cave in the West, the Underworld in the North, the Eye of the Sea in the East, the source of evil in Buzhou Mountain, and the vastness of supernatural powers, this is the Ancient Literature in my heart! Too many prehistoric novels are based on forced storylines, exaggerating the functionality and destructive power of magical powers, without considering the process of cultivation, the hardening of Taoism, and low energy. They always rely on the treasures of chaos. They rely too much on treasures and fail to realize the power of the protagonist. Strength is generally reflected by the enemy. The representative character Hongmao only cares about what he cherishes. Only by breaking the shackles can the true charm of prehistoric be reflected.

A good blockbuster of a prehistoric novel.

I finished reading Chapter 1/49 in one go! The plot is written very carefully, and the levels of various spiritual treasures and spiritual roots are written very carefully. It's just that the cultivation process is too careful. I don't dare to look carefully at the things like heart, liver, spleen, lungs and kidneys. Every time I see the practice process, I quickly turn the page to the page where the practice ends. Because I am not cultivating immortality. See why he practices so carefully.

One thing that makes me feel a little flawed in this book is that Pangu killed 3,000 demon gods to open up the prehistoric world. There is karma. Is it because he killed 3,000 demon gods? However, the cultivation system is written very carefully and it attracts me.

The author has unique ideas and rigorous logic. It is a rare and good prehistoric novel [like]~ It's great that the author not only defined a cultivation system but also a magic weapon system. What a great idea~

Very good, the logic is clear, the content is novel and has great future. I hope the author can stick to it and never forget his original intention. I will recommend this book to other people I know and support it.

Some of the settings and ideas are great. OK "I almost touched the stars, really, but then it was dawn, the ladder was not stable, and I fell down. After that, I didn't even have the courage to look up at the stars."

It's very exciting. It tends to be a bit invincible, but if you don't expand it quickly when you have an advantage, it's very good. Although the setting at the beginning is a bit different, the great witch should be born from the ancestral witch, here it is changed to be bred by Pangu's essence and blood, but the story is at least coherent and readable. After all, novels have to be slightly changed, otherwise there is no innovation. I support the author. I am very dissatisfied. At least the story written is quite good.

The writing is very good. Now it is written about the battle with three thousand Chaos Gods and Demons, and then the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors. After the battle, it should not be possible to catch them all in one fell swoop, leaving a small part to continue to leave suspense and take over the world opened by the dead Chaos Demon God. Later, you can write down external forces such as the main god space. The protagonist's weak clone lurks in the main god's space.

Very good, the innovation ability is eye-catching, please update it soon!

Old bookworms recommend this book as it is full of creativity and tells a different story about ancient times. The author, Zhutian Projection, wrote the B box like this. His combat power was still so high before. Now he is very good at learning martial arts. If you are not creative, think about it and write it. If that doesn't work, you can write about wizards or Western mythology. Don't write about martial arts, you will lose fans.

It's okay, it's good, it's a very good book in the prehistoric literature, the logic is smooth, it has its own things, the general context is quite good, the structure is grand, and there is no trivial criticism. There is no messy system or golden finger. It is all my own stuff. It is very imaginative. I recommend everyone to read it. You will not regret it. Come on, author!

A sense of self-entertainment and self-pleasure

According to the author's thinking, all creatures and objects in the prehistoric era have great karma. Because Pangu opened heaven and transformed into the prehistoric world, whoever is in the prehistoric world will inherit the karma of cause and effect. The three karma of heaven, earth and people are the first, the second is the three pure, the third is the twelve ancestral witches and the witch clan, the fourth is the dragon, phoenix, unicorn and other ethnic groups, and the fifth is the innate sacred and living beings...

The imagination is very wide open, and some of the ideas are similar to those of heroes [laughing]. For example, Zhu Rong becomes the god of cooking, and Gonggong becomes the god of wine. The same is true in "It Turns Out I am the Great Butler of the Wu Clan". Fellow Taoist, please expand it after finishing it!

Successful cultivation, good luck, and the perfect rhythm of Wudi Wen will keep Wudi Wen invincible. However, despite the fact that there are so many people who are against the sky, there are many enemies who are keeping pace with each other.

This makes me wonder if the author has traveled through time. The plot is so detailed that it makes people feel that this is something the author has already experienced! The best prehistoric novel that I have read about the development of the witch clan in the prehistoric world! It is also the prehistoric world that can grow infinitely without cutting off its growth potential, allowing the prehistoric world to advance to a higher world and lead to the eternal true world!

Fresh, good-looking, new way, new Daluo enlightenment system

This is the best novel about the witch clan that I have ever read.

It can surpass 99% of the prehistoric literature in the country.

It's been a long time since I've seen an author write down the cultivation system in such detail.

I finished reading 76 chapters in one go, and am still in the late stages of the Fierce Beast Tribulation. But the protagonist has found his own way and spiritual treasure, and the plot is not too poisonous, so I give it a full review to see if the subsequent development will be as good as it is now.

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Very good and worth recommending. Very nice [smile][smile][smile]

Okay, it's well written, not overwhelming, and the logic is quite clear.