Become a Kingpin and Build a Hero Hire Company

It's a very good subject matter, and the writing is pretty good. The only drawback is that there is something called a "Hero Recruitment Card" among the rewards given by the system, but I still don't know how to use this thing after reading it. Apart from mentioning it, there is no news at all. It feels like the author has forgotten it.

It's super cool, but just a reminder, dragons can actually destroy a country. Each of the 24 cities in One Punch Man is equivalent to the size of a country.

So far it looks very good, very rational, and it is a control flow, but it does not belong to the kind of behind-the-scenes control flow, it belongs to the front-end control flow. The early stage control includes these changes, which I find very interesting. But it depends on how the author wants to continue to develop the plot in the middle and later stages.

It's quite novel and interesting. I hope there will be some local Marvel monsters, or some monsters with more realistic settings. The descriptions of the monsters should be sufficiently oppressive. I always feel that all the weirdos in the book are brushed aside, and there are no deep-rooted fighting scenes. I should refer to One Punch Man. Personally, I feel that it is not easy to write this book well. The author needs to have enough understanding of the Marvel world and the One-Punch Man world, and balance the two well. The follow-up should also have a big framework that fits the two worldviews.

There are obvious signs of AI, but it is also written based on long paragraphs of prompt words input by myself, and the creativity is not bad.

What's interesting is that the United States in this book seems to be too reasonable. . .

Very cool! Show your loyalty to Kingpin~ There are too many AI components. There are a lot of words in the lorry. Sandman's daughter has physical therapy to protect Nick Fury's wariness of Kingpin. These two sections were repeated more than five or six times.

It's okay at first glance, but there are some flaws in the first three golden chapters. I didn't read it the first time I clicked it. But the second time I clicked it, I just skipped the beginning and saw the step of creating an association and I was able to read it. Then the association's profit model can refer to the Black Robe Picket's Ultra Group, directly create the IP of "Star Hero", and create a seven-man team in each major first-tier city. Through popularity and traffic, it can make movies, sell peripherals, and engage in support activities. It is easy to make money through the fan economy. Then there is a source of hero talent. I mentioned a recruitment card before. My suggestion is to recruit some characters that other Marvels do not have, but are special and can supplement some plots, as well as some popular foreign movie heroes to join in. The author can select some characters that readers like through voting and recruit them through recruitment cards, so that readers can enjoy it and the plot is not obtrusive.

The content is fine, but if you use AI to expand your writing, you should also check the context!

This book is really good and interesting, and I would be willing to spend money to read it. But I feel that it will be difficult to write later. I don't know if the author can continue to maintain it.

I feel like the hero association of the protagonist is more professional than the hero association in One Punch

It should read like an outline, or AI-assisted writing that has been manually proofread before publication. It is not automatically generated by pure AI. So far, it seems that there are no inconsistencies. The creativity is interesting, and there are no major problems with the content. You can take a look.

I thought it looked pretty good at the beginning, but in the middle section, the author changed the outline. I felt that there were a lot of professional words and the language was not humorous. Later, when I saw other people's comments, I felt it was a bit like AI. I hope it can help everyone avoid pitfalls, and I plan to keep it. In fact, it's okay. The author is relatively modest.

Unique angles, creative thinking, good books, rare masterpieces

Very good, both idealism and realism

The AI ​​feel is more obvious, but the subject matter is novel and the plot is not too draggy, so it's still watchable.

Not bad, just watch it without thinking [laughs]

Pretty good, keep up the good work

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So far, it's quite to my liking. I hope I won't be overwhelmed by the writing. If you're short on books, you can give it a try. Do you have any similar recommendations?

It's cool, it's so cool, this could have made me a god Not enough. Is there anything similar?

A very good book, the characters in it are very real [Adoration]

In this kind of world, where power belongs to oneself, one's own strength is the most important. I have read the latest chapter now. Is the protagonist still so weak? It's time to improve

The book is very good. To be honest, Marvel has many heroes, anti-heroes, mutants and aliens. There is no need to use self-created ones.

What the hell? Why did the content suddenly change?

Come on, this is a great idea✊

This book is good and quite interesting.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Very good-looking, very classy.

As far as it goes, it looks pretty good [laughs crookedly]