Blue Files fanfic
Life simulation starts!
Come on, don't ask for any invincible magical power, at least a physique that can rival the halo!
"Simulation Reward—My Wife Hoshino's One-Day Limited Time Summoning Scroll"
"Simulation Reward—My Girlfriend Alice's Three-Day Limited Time Summoning Scroll"
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This, isn't this right? Yes, who put this simulator inside my body? !
Buhao! My teaching resources! ! !
Reader comments
Shennong has finished tasting, Rabbit Head is loading...
Overview: The plot is complete and the writing is good. The plot is mostly original, at least this aspect is better than most fan fiction. There are some private facilities.
It can be seen that the author wrote this book with premeditation. It is obvious that some parts have been modified and optimized, and some care has been put into the plot.
Disadvantages (this paragraph is mainly addressed to the author):
① It is relatively stream-of-consciousness. There are many places where the writing is unclear and you have to think for yourself. This does not meet the needs of most readers who just want to read and relax.
②The plot segmentation is not obvious. I guess the author wants to write the plot with the students and at the same time optimize the way the plot is handled in the game according to his own ideas, which is at least more reasonable than the game. The normal situation should be: relaxed daily life/main line with a more depressing atmosphere, alternately, but the current situation is daily life and main line, and even the boundaries between reality and simulator are very blurred due to the author's stream of consciousness. It should be relaxed or not, serious or not, but it is inexplicable.
The loading of Rabbit Head is completed, the plot is medium-high, the writing is medium-high, the stream of consciousness is small, and the new author dares to think and write very big, the summary is medium-high.
Oops, taste the saltiness [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]
It looks good, but give it a low rating to avoid being banned.
Shennong has finished tasting, Rabbit Head is loading... Overview: The plot is complete and the writing is good. The plot is mostly original, at least this aspect is better than most fan fiction. There are some private facilities. It can be seen that the author wrote this book with premeditation. It is obvious that some parts have been modified and optimized, and some care has been put into the plot. Disadvantages (this paragraph is mainly addressed to the author): ① It is relatively stream-of-consciousness. There are many places where the writing is unclear and you have to think for yourself. This does not meet the needs of most readers who just want to read and relax. ②The plot segmentation is not obvious. I guess the author wants to write the plot with the students and at the same time optimize the way the plot is handled in the game according to his own ideas, which is at least more reasonable than the game. The normal situation should be: relaxed daily life/main line with a more depressing atmosphere, alternately, but the current situation is daily life and main line, and even the boundaries between reality and simulator are very blurred due to the author's stream of consciousness. It should be relaxed or not, serious or not, but it is inexplicable. The loading of Rabbit Head is completed, the plot is medium-high, the writing is medium-high, the stream of consciousness is small, and the new author dares to think and write very big, the summary is medium-high.
Oops, taste the saltiness [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]
It looks good, but give it a low rating to avoid being banned.