Miss Witch, I Really Didn't Cheat!

The writing is very good, and the protagonist finally looks less greasy. Why did it stop at the end? At the end, I feel that the protagonist is either the main character or a fool infected by Shirou. He is always talking about being a righteous partner, so it is not as good as the front.

It's a very good book. I can see that the author really wrote the outline. The first one may be a bit difficult to read because the explanation is too complicated, but it will be much better in the following chapters. It's very interesting. As a magical world view, it's really good to put Xingyue's ability in it without being obvious and obtrusive.

It's a classic formula, but the writing is good. I personally think it's above average. Nika, an ignorant fool, no one likes such a person, full score out of 10, my evaluation is 8 points, Nika deducted 4 points for this plot, now 4 points, invincible buddy, really, here comes another person who thinks he is good for others, you are the only one who can step on my fault twice in two days😅😅

It's a good book about strength, but it's a pity that the label is a little short. You could add fate or heroic spirit. Otherwise, who would have thought that there is an element of heroic spirit in this title?

It's still a good book, and it's a familiar Shirou, although I think the name is a bit too dramatic in Western Fantasy. But overall, it does look good.

A very good Western fantasy novel, with logic and brains that does not overwhelm combat capabilities, a coherent plot and literary talent No way, this Nika makes people want to vomit, but in the end, they even joined the protagonist group... When will he end up [laughing awkwardly] Don't the author think this character is very impressive? Let's give it a three-star rating first, and then we'll talk about this after B is out of the game. . Well, the author listened to the advice and made changes very quickly. Now this Nika has gone back to study. Leave aside Nika This is a high-quality grain

The protagonist is not the traditional invincible, nor is he the type who pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger. He shows whatever strength he has, and he keeps saving those who have the ability to save. The whole thing doesn't look fake, fake, or annoying. The heroine is not the kind of lady who is gentle and homely, or the arrogant lady who ruins her life. You can say whatever you want about your personality and characteristics. Even if you like or hate someone, you will say it directly. Dislike of others lying can be said to be the finishing touch. It is a small characteristic of the character and has a sense of freshness. I hope the author will continue to work hard and not stop updating. It is already one of the few good-looking books in Tomato.

It's well written, each character has a distinct personality! The protagonist and the heroine look really good together! If possible, have a single female protagonist or no female protagonist! The harem will definitely ruin the character of the protagonist! Author, you must stick to your own ideas and do not write according to the comments of readers who put yourself in the role! Every reader who assumes the role of the protagonist will have various obscene thoughts, thinking that the character is not good or something, or that the protagonist is like this or that! For those of us who see God's perspective, it's as if the novel is a TV series! There's a main plot and daily life, and there's nothing wrong with showing off from time to time. It's very relaxing to watch!

I feel that it is rare to say that the male protagonist in the author's works may be felt by some readers as the righteous partner of the Holy Mother. He is not a stingy person, otherwise he would not be "just". I hope the results of this book will get better and better. Come on, author.

The Shirou written by the author is definitely of a high standard. Although he is not a real Shirou, he can basically be regarded as a real Shirou traveling through another world. His character and lines are so well grasped, his awkward ideals, and his sweet tongue-in-cheek speech. Especially paired with the awkward and poisonous woman who can semi-read minds, it is simply Zhao Zilong riding Zhou Cang, a super perfect match. The dialogue interaction between the two people is really interesting. I can feel that the author has put a lot of thought into this aspect of the dialogue. It is very interesting. Overall, it feels more interesting than the previous books. I really hope I can keep writing it. I feel like the title, cover, and introduction of the book need to be changed. The witch is quite attractive, but not as attractive as the setting of "Shirou" traveling through another world. Although he is a fake Shirou, the author made the fake Shirou very "real" and can make people get involved, and more labels can be added, such as "non-harem", "single heroine", "heroic spirit system" and so on. Let these tags filter readers out from the start. I've seen this recommendation several times before, but I wasn't interested in reading it. If I hadn't seen a familiar author, I really wouldn't have planned to read it.

The writing is good, it is a standard light novel text, and the content is also good. It can level up, fight monsters, and have emotional interactions. The content is also quite clear, but the Japanese comic flavor is too strong, which is a bit unaccustomed. How can I put it, it can be a fan or the same genre, but I am not used to reading Japanese light novels. Whether it is grammar or speaking habits, it is very awkward. There is always a feeling of being artificial, a little goosebumps, and it is very rigid! I can't say it's not well written, it's just not suitable for me. The summary is well written! It would be very interesting to make it into anime or comics! Come on!

Come on, the big brother who writes about hyenas [crying] (I have read this book several times, but the cover and the name do not tell anything about Shirou. I clicked in and read the introduction and found out it was Shirou [almost crying])

It's not bad. It's a very cute Japanese western fantasy novel with a more everyday feel. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is super cute. Both the male and female protagonists and the supporting characters have very three-dimensional personalities. Everyone's bickering is also very cute... But it's a bit boring if there are too many bickerings. I can tell that the author must be a newcomer. The connection between chapters feels weird, and there is a sense of deja vu that something is missing in the middle.

The male protagonist is very handsome. It is the kind of temperament that comes from the inside out, with a high-spirited and undying idealism color - the most important thing is that he has the power to put it into practice, and he is truly practicing his principles and making good use of his power. The heroine is very special. She has a slightly stubborn, uh, arrogant (?) Character... Well, I can't summarize it. The main thing is "lightness" in the way of doing things, calm and calm, with a face as smooth as a lake. All in all - it's the kind I like

It can be said to be very good. The whole book is relaxed and enjoyable. It is comfortable to read. The ending is decisive and straightforward. It fits my stereotype of the Western fantasy world [laughs evilly]. It is also a rare good book on Tomato.

This novel is quite well written. Whether it is the character of the male protagonist or the female protagonist, there is not much sense of separation, and it is not a double standard. It does not have the performance of being happy just for the sake of being happy like other novels. It is a very decent character design, not positive, righteous, or a virgin. The decency here represents: "From beginning to end, the characters are kept stable and are not modified at will to please anyone." From here, we can see that what the author wants to write, whether it is the outline or some of the details behind it, has been completely sorted out, and the rest is just polishing. If there are no accidents, or if the little black guy comes and causes trouble, this novel will basically be able to end normally. It's just that the characters of the male protagonist and the female protagonist are not what some readers want to see now, but I just want to say that even if the author makes the protagonists cruel and cruel, and kills everyone if they are not satisfied, they still have other dark places. As an author, you need to find readers who really want to read the novel, instead of just trying to please readers. Just trying to please readers will only make your novel look different. As long as you write well what you want to express and sharpen your writing skills, real readers will inevitably come to read the book. I won't go into detail about the male characters, they are very good. As for the heroine's character, isn't it just an enhanced version of "Yukishita Yukino"? What's not to like about Yukinoshita Yukino? There are many people who like Yukinoshita Yukino, and many people don't like it. There are no perfect people or characters in this world, some people like them and some don't. Some people say "I don't like money in my life." Let alone people. Just write what you want to express and leave the rest to time, time will tell everything.

The writing is very good, the dialogue is smooth, and the characters are full-bodied. The shortcoming is that the description of the characters' appearance is not detailed, or it can be said that they have no characteristics. The description of the environment is also a bit lacking, such as how the school environment is, how many buildings there are, how the buildings are distributed, and the social environment is also a bit lacking. The scene is not grand enough. Some more settings can be added, such as the name of the country, its location, and its characteristics. The writing is similar to a light novel, bland and a little passionate. I will write more details.

Beautiful, love watching. The author writes a lot more smoothly later on. Although some plots are not that satisfying, this is also the author's consistent style. No matter what I write, there is a feeling of writing about daily life.

It's a very interesting book. It's worth reading. The main character has a good personality. It's pretty good. The protagonist has a sunny confidence that goes forward without any hesitation.

In Tomato is indeed a very good novel about another world. The plot is not too bad from beginning to end. The subject matter of this book is still very good. Unfortunately, the plot goes by too fast. A book friend said: From this train on, time begins to accelerate. Summary: This book is good but the pace is a bit fast at the end. It's worth reading.

I like this style very much. I like this kind of heroine and hero, as well as the supporting characters. It's as if the author didn't interfere with their lives, but the story would have developed this way. The author is like a medieval bard who just describes the phenomenon. In short, the characters are very to my liking. The whole book is to the point where I can't help but laugh out loud when I think about dying and reading it again. It's a pity that it's too late and the length is small.

This time it's a new theme, and it's really fun to watch [laughs]

I caught up to Chapter 5 of Volume 2 in one go. I mainly like to see the protagonist fighting with heroic spirit templates, so I think it's okay. However, someone in the comment area mentioned the existence of poisonous points, so I gave it four stars. Usually when I see a plot that I don't like, I skip it, so I don't pay much attention to the poisonous points. However, I especially hope that the author can continue writing, even if it is updated once a day, at least there should be a plot where the mentioned templates are unlocked and the noble phantom is displayed.

It's strong. It would be great if you can get the clues inside. I feel that the characters are very good. The male and female protagonists slowly get closer to each other because of their specialness.

Full marks, I don't need to say more about the gold content of the author's first two books. Also, I'm not allowed to send this book. I haven't read it yet! [Anger]

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Everyone likes to learn about writing about the moon, which is totally baffling.

It's good. It just so happens that FGO's male god is the master of single defense, and the second adventure male god has opened an infinite sword system again. I wanted to find a fanfic where the male god is the protagonist, and I just found this one. Although it is a Western fantasy, it can be read as a comprehensive comic. The plot I have seen now includes the shadow of the powerful shadow warrior and the shadow of the deep sea king. It is very handsome. My miracle male god wants to be a partner of justice and save the world. [Like], I hope the male god can draw his bow more often.

To sum up the pros and cons, it's an excellent Western fantasy novel. The male protagonist has the Holy Grail and the female protagonist currently has no fighting power but can read minds. I feel that the character development of the protagonist is very close to Emiya. It is an interesting but unclear main line (emotional line?) And worth watching. The shortcoming is that I use passers-by's reactions a little too often to highlight the male protagonist's appearance... It feels weird if I write too much about it. Come on. Don't have a harem or anything like that, I really beg you.

Justice partner, awesome! Those who want to see the protagonist act selfishly and kill people at will can go away. I was put off by the title of the book, it should be 9.0 Or higher