The Green Crown Above the Yellow Sands

I feel that the author has a very strong literary quality, and has a very scientific and profound knowledge reserve about desertification prevention and control. It should be the best novel I have read on Tomato, but there are too few. Come on, author, come on, hurry up and update more

Complaint point 1: The end of each chapter is like the end of a volume🤔🤔Open the chapter, open the road, and kick off the prologue. Always on the road of progress, it makes me feel that there is a lack of precipitation. The rapid progress makes people worry that they will be unable to succeed in the future. Complaint Point 2: There are too many deep and grand emotional depictions. The protagonist is not like a living person, but like a god descending to earth. Each article is like a drama, magnificent and arousing emotions, but too many of them can be a bit boring. 🤔🤔Model feeling Love Point 1: Fried Chicken likes the technical imagination of alchemy and windproofing and sand-fixing to build an oasis. It has a sense of solidity and immersion like the ancient Western fantasy. Love Point 2: Fried Chicken likes intense crises and battles. Amidst internal and external troubles, Oasis manages to deal with them in an orderly and parallel way. It looks very cool. Love point 3: I like the down-to-earth struggle of idealists!

I feel that the author must have written traditional literature before, and this is his first time contacting online literature. The narration is long and the pace is slow, which is very inconsistent with the spirit of online writing and makes people want to sleep. But the writing is indeed quite solid, the writing is very good, and the plot is of high quality.

It looks good, hope rises in the desert, there is no particularly big golden finger, it is the power of everyone, and they solve the problem step by step, moving towards better harmony and prosperity. It is a special geographical location. Every step of effort and planning is an infrastructure document, with water as the cornerstone and ecology as the overall goal.

Both the writing and the plot are impeccable. The special thing about this book is that the heroine does not blindly control desertification, but pursues harmonious coexistence with nature, advocating balance and guidance. This has completely exceeded the entertainment value and can already provide some inspiration for human development and harmony with nature in our modern world. This is also more of a group portrait, focusing more on win-win cooperation. It is not the development of one party that leads to the destruction of the other, but symbiosis and the common pursuit of world harmony. I also like the heroine very much. She is like the sea buckthorn in the desert, tough and vital.

The writing is very good, and the sand control process progresses step by step, making it very immersive. The plot setting is also very good, consistent with realistic logic, and allows readers to see the grand possibilities. For example, in the development process of the oasis, the author omitted some repetitive and cumbersome processes and directly wrote about important nodes, such as the establishment of diplomatic relations and conflicts. This made me very comfortable. I can foresee that if the author keeps writing, it will be a good article of high quality. The following is just my personal opinion: The only drawback is that some plots are repetitive. For example, if the oasis is infiltrated, we just removed the warehouse defense. As night falls, someone does bad things, and then we remove the defense later and lure you into a trap. I don't know if the author forgot about it or what. This kind of repetition is not much, but it is very abrupt when it exists. I hope it can be changed. In the latest chapter "Black Blade's Trump Card", I didn't see any description of Black Blade's death in the Berserker. It was mentioned earlier that Black Blade retreated injured from the battle with Ren, and later he also wrote about Black Blade's arrangement (sending out berserkers). However, when showing that this conflict was acquiesced or even promoted by the empire, he wrote, "These clues are completely connected with the fragments of standard equipment he discovered before, and Black Blade's words before his death." This is very baffling to me. Is Black Blade dead? When did it disappear? So I went back and rewatched it, and there was no explicit hint of Black Blade's death at all. The most likely thing is that Red Scorpion attacked the main tent (perhaps killing Black Blade), so how did Ren know Black Blade's dying words? Again, I prefer that the author forgot what he wrote, or it was just a clerical error. Overall it is a good book, but the details need to be polished. I hope the author can work hard and I will continue to follow up with updates.

It looks good, like reading a scientific research report, but it doesn't feel boring. I am looking forward to how the desert will develop next? Who will like-minded people join in?

The complete desert control legend. Free and fair. Coexist. Sustainable. The earth will not yield to any force. It is the right thing to coexist with it. The beliefs of other worlds merge with the realistic values ​​of this world. The values ​​​​of teaching people how to fish and teaching people how to fish are the successful choices of the heroine.

It's really beautiful and elegant, and it doesn't contain too many other people's voices. There are some group portraits, but the subject is clear, and the story line and direction are clear and clear. This can only be said that this writing method is the author's style. I just hope the author can work hard! More updates!

It is a very good book, filled with awe and touching feelings about life and nature. Man and nature should coexist in harmony. This awareness should be something that all of us should keep in mind and practice!