This Defeated Dog Comes from a Foreign Country

The book is very good. The main body is daily writing. It would be great if there were more pictures. Then it will appear in the review. Disadvantages: There is too much Japanese in Kong Er, and the word "Xikasi (but)" appears too much, which affects the interest in reading. Advantages: The author is very obedient, corrects mistakes quickly, and is very active. The protagonist's IQ is okay, but his emotional intelligence is hard to say, because he can see the love of others very clearly, but he can't always see it for himself. This aspect is a bit... Poisonous point (in my opinion): The protagonist gave his first kiss to Himemiya Kare by accident. At that time, Himemiya Kare was not the first kiss, and she was still someone else's girlfriend. (Some readers with mysophobia may not be able to bear this.) Both Lao Ma and Ellie like the protagonist. I feel that it would be much better if the first kiss was accidentally given to one of them.

There are already a lot of manga and manga fans who have a world view, except for the Japanese homophony that suddenly appeared... This may be understood as a feature [thinking], and I want to watch the Tiansheng Tsundere and the sneak master fight in the ring.

It's good-looking, but sometimes a construction site Japanese sentence pops up. It's really a bit overwhelming, and it feels like it will affect the viewing experience [face covering]

The writing is quite good, and the characters are also good, but it would be nice if it could be less empty-headed. After all, it is impossible for people who read this to not understand these few sentences.

Sure, I don't know if there will be an if line in the future [Thinking] After reading more than a dozen of them, I suggested that Wen Shui should be the heroine, and that there was no need to include those scenes in the original work that were disgusting to the audience.

Although I don't know what the process is, Lao Ma can't lose this way.

In fact, I want to know how the author arranged the multiple female protagonists. According to the author's previous statement, the main plot and Lao Ma are together, and the remaining female protagonists are the if lines. Although this is indeed very good and understandable, I still want to ask, should it be done in one piece, or should it be separated [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

The male protagonist is well written and has a sense of immersion. One star is given to the Russian language that appears in large sections, which somewhat affects the viewing experience. I feel that it can be omitted as a note (Russian). All in all it's a good novel, I want to see Shura Field [laughs]

It's pretty good, but it won't be updated.

Give me five-star support

Yes, remember one life and realize one life

Please take me in, too.

It looks great. The old horse must win! ! !

Okay, it looks much better than some without an outline.

It looks good. Does the heroine have a boyfriend?

It's not bad. The characters speak and the Japanese pronunciation is hard to hear. I hope to speed up the progress.

Today's chapter review did not pass. Please forgive me, readers. I will post 2 chapters later.

Not bad, people look forward to it

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It looks good, but I don't know why no one is watching it [face covering]. It's OK if the author doesn't stop updating, and don't let it be unfinished. Come on.

Apart from the homophony, the plot is pretty good [thoughts]