Do Horror Movie NPCs Have to Do This Kind of Work?

I finally understand why some people say that the review feels like it was written by two people. . . What's going on with this copy of Lost Handkerchief, ladies? How could she have any of her heartthrob attributes? She was almost framed to death, despised by others as worthless (Zhang Xiaomei), and almost strangled to death and eaten by the kid in a yellow skirt. . . Is this what a heartthrob is, my friend? Look in my eyes!

I have finished watching the first world, and I plan to finish the second world before continuing. The author's writing is quite astringent... But I like it very much. There's nothing flashy about Male Quan Jie, and the horror descriptions in it are quite touching. I hope that the heroine will be injured as little as possible in the future. For example, in the first world, her feet seemed to be bleeding when she ran away. Although it is unavoidable, too many injuries are not right. The heroine is delicate and frail, but she has a strong mouth and curses people all the time.

It's delicious. Baby Zhuxi is just a naughty young cat who loves to blow hair. She slaps people and gets crushed. I love this bite when I come from a rural area. However, the story of breaking through the level is a bit confusing, but it doesn't matter. Just watch how Baby Zhuxi gets sucked in. It's too astringent and so delicious.

The first world is good-looking, but the second one is incomprehensible. The author's strengths are obviously the aunty and the heartthrob physique. Generally, this kind of horror script is dominated by the aunty and the story is weak, but the author feels that he wants to write a story too much, but his writing power is not enough to support the complex story. There are many names and it is difficult to remember. The heroine herself is a eldest lady in the normal world. She is always injured and tortured by the threat of death in the copy. It is very boring and boring to watch, and her life is always hanging by a thread. If you want to focus on her growth but don't have a golden finger to rely solely on dying, or if you just want to simply be a bad-tempered and cute young lady, and there is no high-value love partner for her, the most attractive mother-in-law barrage at the beginning will be squeezed out by the author's increasingly depressing and boring main plot. I hope the author can find the right position for this book. After all, if he carefully studies the plot, he can make the heroine grow up in a slightly easier way. If it is a simple and relaxing story, don't put the cart before the horse as you write.

The first world is better written, but the second world is a bit incomprehensible, and the mother-in-law smell is still strong. I hope to add some people, the kind where monsters are obsessed with the heroine, it will be very fragrant, and I hope the heroine can be less injured.

Congratulations to Mammy Literature and Horror Heartthrob Literature for adding a new hero! What a terrible introduction, and such a fragrant description of the maid. To be honest, the reason why the real book is not popular is because the introduction is too generic. The most attractive elements of the nun, Quan Jie, and the heartthrob are not written in the first line of the introduction at all, and the introduction is also confusing. The descriptions of the maids in the first world are the most fragrant, but I feel that there are so many descriptions of the maids in the second world that I don't like it that much. Moreover, it is really charming to say that she is a heartthrob, but she is not a human species, such as monsters and other non-human species. She is not so fascinated that she only wants to kill her sister. The heartthrobs of the second world have actually been weakened a lot, and the people who are fascinated feel like they are just ordinary people with average strength. It is recommended that the author strengthen the barrage and description of the maid, as well as the heart-throb attribute of the sister, and make the sister less injured. It is really heartbreaking to see her frightened and desperately trying to survive🥺🥺🥺🥺Also, if you really want more people to read it, change the introduction. This introduction is really unattractive.

The first world is really cute and beautiful. The second world is a little less flavorful. I feel that the non-human words are to punish the heroine to death. To be honest, the heroine is really miserable. She lived a good life in the original world and was suddenly pulled into the horror world. She has been injured. Although it is much better than others, it still makes people feel very pitiful 🥺. I haven't read the third world yet. I plan to read it after I finish writing it. Come on👏

The first world is beautiful, with a strong sense of being a nanny. The heroine also has a very unique personality. The male protagonists are all crazy. The next two worlds feel like they were written by different people.

Accepted, what the hell, not a heartthrob, every world is hanging on by a thread, injured, the heroine's character has ups and downs, to be honest, she looks like a madman, and some descriptions of the heroine's fearful demeanor, what kind of talk, isn't the heroine a great beauty? What do you mean by adding these descriptions? The impression is very bad. I am really convinced. You are deliberately disgusting the readers, right?!!!!

Looking at the front, I thought it was the heartthrob crying sister baby again, but I didn't expect the heroine in the back to be so tenacious. The second world amazes me. I feel that the interaction between the heroine and other characters is very vivid. I have been imagining this scene in my mind. The plot is also very good without constant flirting. Of course, the flirting is also very good. It is suitable for a big yellow girl like me. Come on, author baby