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The protagonist has a good self-awareness, and the character has the feel of a shounen manga. Pokémon wants such a protagonist. The original part is very natural and smooth. The author is not recreating the story of "Ash", but the protagonist's own story.

Let me think about how to describe it. The content is not bad, but I feel that the protagonist is a bit awkward. He should grow up slowly in the future. I hope the protagonist will not be too obsessed with the plot of the anime. If he is too obsessed, something will happen. Just show off if you want to, and be passionate if you want to be passionate. Wouldn't it be nice to have some fun...

It is considered to be the best among Pokémon fanfics, and it is also among the Tomato novels, which is even more valuable. After reading it, I feel that it belongs to a mixture of Xiaozhi and Red in the parallel world, but unlike Xiaozhi's "braveness" and Red's "silence", I feel that the protagonist is more inclined to suffer from inferiority. After all, I have always been in the life of an "ordinary person". A "trapped person" who deliberately limits himself to a certain trajectory. I feel that it is more due to the protagonist's own cowardice. It can be seen that the protagonist is indeed slowly growing up. (Why do you feel that if you break the inferiority complex, the protagonist may slowly move towards redness?) Anyway, the author writes really well. Reminds me of the time when I was Teacher Lu's water friend. Different from Teacher Lu's relaxed and cheerful book, this one is obviously more heavy, but heavy is good, so I'm going to fight and kill. Dip beans, cool~

"Growth", "Bond" and "Love" This novel probably runs through the connotations of Pokémon Reading this book is also very good for the senses😋. Reading this book is like a living rat in the sewer who lives in darkness all day long. Seeing the warm sunshine outside, you want to get closer but you are afraid that you will pollute that pure feeling.

It's very well written, even if it doesn't follow the plot. Regarding the issue of female protagonists, the author seems not to want to write too many female protagonists. Then I suggest writing about the feelings in the main text, if you are not sure about the relationship, and then directly open the if line after the end, and just write it once for each heroine. Readers can also watch their favorite heroine [Blow Kiss]

It's very interesting that the original animation, manga and game are stitched together. In fact, I quite like the first person perspective in the previous one... It's a pity that it was changed. This "Red" is sad as the protagonist, but he becomes a trainer in order to shoulder the fate of Xiaozhi he thinks he is. The combat descriptions are not awkward and comfortable to watch, but the combat power of each character is a bit off the charts, and it feels like it is getting closer to a special episode. If there is a female protagonist, it would be better if it is a single female protagonist. There are too few at the moment, so let's keep them for now.

It's a very interesting protagonist. He gave some of Xiaozhi's original characteristics to Little Green and Little Blue, and our protagonist started to move towards Chi. We look forward to the growth of the protagonist in the future [Like]

I think this work is extremely excellent. The protagonist Xiaozhi has the characteristics of Xiaozhi and Chihong. In the protagonist's mind, Xiaozhi's title and experience put more pressure on him than Chihong's name, but he is not Chihong's shadow. He is a new individual, so I prefer to call him Chi. After all, I don't know his name in his previous life, and he is the new Red, a very good person.

Wonderful! It's great. It's a novel suitable for social horror. It doesn't stress the combat power, and it's great to interact with the characters. It doesn't blindly follow the plot. The heroines are also very unique. Personally, I prefer Yui Itaki. I like it even more. The world is not completely white, but there must be white.

In fact, I personally think (it's just a personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it, thank you, thank you, thank you) that it's a little bit suffocated, and it always feels like seeing yourself in life. The protagonist's cold face is very cute. I really like this setting, but being too obsessed with identity and the internal friction of the plot always make me feel that if I suffocate too much, something will explode... I always isolate myself from the world, and there is a feeling of being passive and suffocated. In short, the author's writing is still very good. After all, this kind of subject is very rare, but I guess I won't be able to insist on reading it. I can only wish everyone a happy reading here. See you again.

God among gods, although I don't know if there are multiple female protagonists, but I feel very comfortable getting along with all the female characters. The bond between Pokémon And Bibi Bird is back [face covering]

I haven't read the original work, but the protagonist's character really impressed me. I can't help but he can't stand up to the mute little boy who is semi-autistic and weak in social interaction. I love the protagonist so much🥰🥰🥰The communication between Pokémon and the protagonist is also very cute. I really like the cute daily routine of Pokémon pampering the protagonist and even secretly feeling a little jealous among themselves www. It's so cute that I embedded my phone in the wall and prepared to watch it 108 times😋😋😋 But there are too many ambiguous emotional scenes between the protagonist and women of the same age😭Although I don't object to Pokémon writing emotional scenes, I would rather it be an emotional scene between the protagonist and Pokémon😭😭😭When I see the ambiguous development between the protagonist and a girl, I I just wanted to die for a moment😭😭😭After all, the author didn't indicate a female protagonist in the introduction, but I had been expecting to read it without a cp. When I saw the note from Yuuki, I suddenly felt bad. I glanced at the catalog and almost wanted to die...🙏🙏🙏 Okay... The author said that there will be no emotional scenes later, so I will continue reading... The author promised me to write about the relationship between the protagonist of Xiuni and Pokémon😭😭😭If I can't watch the protagonist being saved by Pikachu and the others, Wadaxi😭😭😭 Author, I would rather you write about human beings than the dirty feelings between humans (please mess with me🙏) If you really want to write a single female protagonist or a harem, please change the introduction or mark it at the beginning, otherwise it will really ruin the perception of passers-by.

There are currently 55 chapters; the protagonist bears the name of "Ash", so he has a lot of pressure, and is obsessed with the original plot, which makes the previous chapters relatively depressing. But now you can clearly feel the growth and change of the protagonist, and the characterization is no longer limited to the original work. The characters of Sundae are very good. Fan fiction always needs to make some changes, right? The author must keep writing. I hope the protagonist will no longer be obsessed with the name "Ash" and create his own story.

These days, it's really difficult to find a Pokémon fan that doesn't have to pay taxes to the three royal families. Pokémon are divided into qualification levels, evolution stones are also divided into levels, and they also broadcast game routines on live broadcasts. It's really embarrassing [face covering] Does the author regret writing a book without a heroine? That is indeed a pity.

The background setting of the mirror world in xy is very rare (it is the first book I have read [learned] Xiaozhi, a taciturn and self-deprecating protagonist The Pokémon collected are the ones everyone is familiar with. The gym competition is more difficult than the special episode, with hell level difficulty. As of Chapter 85, there is currently no fixed CP, but there are two or three ambiguous lines.

A good book, I think it's top-notch among Pokémon fans. The introduction says it is an original plot, but in fact it is an innovative one, not limited to the original fan plot. Various mixed settings (the "magic modification" mentioned in the introduction) actually make this book more interesting. The writing style is also good. There is no description that would make me complain at first glance. Instead, I can read it smoothly. After reading dozens of chapters (the beginning of the plot of Dead Leaves), I feel that the only problem is that there are a few chapters.

I like it very much. Unlike many Xiaozhi fans, it's not about taking over the body or passing through the soul. I feel more like it's written about Xiaozhi in a parallel world. Come on, the author doesn't want eunuchs anymore As long as he can finish writing, Vadasi will do anything [almost crying]

It seems that the protagonist is taking the red route

Are you feeling well lately? The weather in Siberia has become colder recently, and it has snowed for several rounds, and the scenery is great. Please be sure to update ten chapters every day so that I can read more exciting things. Otherwise, the potatoes that have not yet been harvested in Siberia will become your daily work and basic meals, and the beautiful Siberian scenery is waiting for you to appreciate. I hope to see you soon, my dear comrade author. Here it is: That Lingzu who loves Hainanese rice cakes [stares] [laughs evilly]

It's good to watch, and the protagonist has a growth process

It's pretty good, but I still hope that the protagonist is single without CP. After all, the original Ash Ketchum doesn't have one, so there's no need for him. I'd rather have single arrows, or I hope there are fewer single arrows. I don't want to see so many single arrows.

The writing is very good, but I may be a more extrovert person. I saw humble descriptions such as "I feel suffocated in crowded places" and "lost to Xiao Mao thousands of times." When I think of Xiaozhi's passion in the original work, it's really hard for me to feel immersed in it [Petrochemical]

The current viewing experience is very good. This kind of reversal-like theme is really suitable for derivative movie viewing. If possible, can I write some true movie viewing articles in the comment area🥺 @233

It's very good. It has gone its own way instead of following the plot. The world of Pokémon written is very beautiful.

Except for Ash's character, the description of Pokémon itself and the plot are all very good and very attractive to me. However, this boring gourd character really wants to be changed as soon as possible. It doesn't matter if it is negative. It's okay to talk less, but the social fear of being unable to speak is really too frustrating. It doesn't need to be more cheerful when you grow up, at least you can speak clearly in basic speech [face covering]

That's great. This kind of little boy is my type. He's so cute and feels at ease.

Can you give me an accurate answer if you have CP? Or am I not sure? If so, is it single or multiple? Whether or not CP is available is really important to me.

Except for the characterization of the protagonist which is a bit strange, everything else is fine and well written.

The plot is interesting and the characterization is okay

It's good to read, but not many people read it, but I still hope the author will keep updating it.