Traveling through the Tang Dynasty, he became Li Kuan, the second prince Li Er lost among the people. I just want to farm outside Chang'an City, raise chickens, and be the owner of a salted fish farm that is independent of the world. The built-in [Datang God-level Sign-in System] is so incredible that it rewards potatoes, corn, and sweet potatoes at the beginning! I wanted to keep a low profile, but I was spoiled by two old men who called themselves "Lao Li" and "Lao Pei" every day. Until one day, Lao Li saw the jade pendant I was carrying and lost his temper on the spot! Soon after, he brought a middle-aged "arrogant man" and a gentle lady. Wait, why is there something wrong with the way this lady looks at me? When she saw the plum blossom birthmark on my arm, she cried and rushed over! I'm showing off my cards, I'm not pretending anymore, I'm the person you're looking for! Li Er: "You traitor, come back to the palace with me quickly!" Li Kuan: "Go away, don't disturb my farming. The palace is not as comfortable as my farm!"
Reader comments
No, buddy, you alternate between third person and second person. This is understandable and counts as your writing technique.
The second point is how you describe the panic scene "Li Kuan's baby" in Chapter 6. I was confused when I saw it.
When I saw Chapter 11, I really suspected that Ai or read it somewhere else and then rewritten it.
Is the time of your novel correct? At one moment he said that it was the first year of Zhenguan, and at another moment he said that the Xuanwumen sent the child away at the age of 18. Has it been 18 years? The queen is still alive? [What]
No, buddy, you alternate between third person and second person. This is understandable and counts as your writing technique. The second point is how you describe the panic scene "Li Kuan's baby" in Chapter 6. I was confused when I saw it. When I saw Chapter 11, I really suspected that Ai or read it somewhere else and then rewritten it.
Is the time of your novel correct? At one moment he said that it was the first year of Zhenguan, and at another moment he said that the Xuanwumen sent the child away at the age of 18. Has it been 18 years? The queen is still alive? [What]