Elf: There Seems to Be Something Wrong with My Contract Position

Let's talk about the advantages first: the writing is good, the daily life is very warm, the setting is also very novel, and the description of the elves is also quite good. It is a rare masterpiece in elf literature. Let's talk about the shortcomings: The combat power is severely suppressed. No matter how many adventures the protagonist has, his peers will always be refreshed to the same level as the protagonist next time they appear, giving people the feeling that if there are no adventures, the protagonist will be kicked to death... Then there is a setting problem. The protagonist's parents were trapped in order to save the Federation. Not only did the Federation fail to rescue them, they even swallowed the secret realm that the protagonist's parents left for the protagonist and planned to use it as a reward for the competition. The protagonist had to hide his talent in order to save his life. On this point alone, other novels would be in a situation where it would be a fight to the death, but judging from the author's description, the Federation is good elsewhere, except that the protagonist is a pure villain, and it feels like the left and right brains are fighting against each other. Also, can anyone tell me why the protagonist has been climbing the Tower of Wind for so long but still can't break through as quickly as Yun Yun and Cui Haozhe? Then what's the point of the protagonist climbing this tower? Isn't it to speed up the breakthrough? I don't see any opportunities for the two of them? Overall, the flaws outweigh the flaws, and it's worth a read if you like elf literature.

This book is quite good. Although I haven't read many beast-controlling novels, all I have read are excellent ones. This novel is very comfortable to read. I think the settings are relatively new (I personally like the new settings very much). However, many settings can be explained more clearly, but the title is a bit sloppy. It gives me the same feeling as unscientific beast-controlling. It is not about the style and content, but the comfortable feeling. Come on, come on.

Based on the current situation, combined with the general environment of Tomato, I think it can be given four stars. It feels like a smooth and comfortable read without any poisonous points. But this kind of balance sometimes means a bit mediocre. The progress of the story makes me feel a bit slow, the tension of the plot is not enough, and the description of the battle scenes is a bit mediocre. However, the author has been constantly updating, so those who like beast-controlling novels can read it. It is recommended. Okay, I admit, it's a little prettier than I thought. Sometimes, just one or two words can create a very interesting character. For example, the scene where the heroine and the hero have a heart-to-heart talk makes me feel that that scene is as delicate as all the previous descriptions of the heroine. I hope the author can keep at it and grasp the rhythm. It will definitely be a very good book (pure love is invincible).

Too few people have read it. The writing is really good, and the elves are all very unique. The elf battles are detailed and very comfortable to read. The only flaw is that the story develops a bit slowly. The Wind King has written more than 300 chapters, and then the Dark King, Light Love? Mechanical? There are also the elves who upgrade the contract later. It will probably be a long novel with thousands of chapters when it is finished. This data is really worrying that the author will not be able to persevere. In short, the book is a good book. Although the pace of the book is a bit slow at the beginning, the world view of the elves is very well written. It is highly recommended to those who like elven literature.

I watched the previous part and it's very nice. The rhythm is quite comfortable and the melody is mainly relaxing. I hope the author will write less plots about the feud within the Federation (because it's a bit poisonous and external troubles but not internal peace). Come on.

In fact, I think it's pretty good. But there are so few comments. I feel like every time I want to read the comments, I can't see them, which makes me a little uncomfortable. The rating is also a bit low [what][what][what][what]

It's very interesting, the logic is relatively delicate, and there are many unique settings and plots, but maybe not many people read it because it's not a cool novel. It is one of the few elves or beast-controlling texts that can be read.

It is a very, very good elf novel. Everyone is a flesh-and-blood existence, far better than most group portraits. Each character has not been transformed into a facial expression. The protagonist and Qingmei are a perfect match. The language preparation and narration about divinity are excellent. It is more understandable and connotative. The senior brother's feelings about his family and country are very touching, logical and linguistic. It is a good book. This is a completely top-notch beast-control novel. Compared to those masterpieces, it only falls short of the author's reputation. It's very appetizing.

At present, there are more than 50 pictures that are okay. Some of the elf's skills have been thought through. At least the name of the protagonist's elf is not perfunctory (I can't stand the protagonist's elf being called Xiaobai, Xiaohei, etc.) The emotional line is the best I have ever seen with a female protagonist, but I still recommend marking it. When the female protagonist appears, she does not mention the relationship between men and women. This kind of relationship can easily remind people of the kind of literature where all the female characters are ambiguous. I don't know why the rating is so low. I will support it first. I will see if other comments are overwhelming and whether it will be serious in the future.

Maybe it's because I've watched too much of Quanfa. From the end of the Zheng Yang chapter, I felt that it was very similar to Quanfa. Zhao Mingsi and Zhao Manyan in the dark film really put me in a trance. They both called Fan Ge, and then in the later scenes, they fought Kraken and competed with Neon. They all corresponded to the plot of Quanfa. The current national server competition is very enjoyable to watch, and the cheap ones are just right. The naming style of the gods is very cool. The king of sky and wind, the king of light and law, they are so handsome. To be honest. Even though I skipped the Shadow Chapter (I couldn't watch it for some reason), the ending was still predictable, so the foreshadowing was quite good, not confusing or brain-burning, and the taste was just right. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's pretty good-looking. The quality is pretty good for tomatoes. I always thought that the traffic was okay, but I didn't expect that the author was generating electricity for love ┗( ´∧｀)┛ Well, but I believe in the author, come on! ദ്ദി˶>ω<)✧

Yes, although the smell of Pokémon is sometimes really strong, and some Pokémon can be associated with each other just by looking at their names, the overall impression is still good. However, there is a problem. After you come to the Magic City, what about your Pokémon appearance rate? In addition to seeing your senior sister release it, Why did that New Moon run away with you? Isn't it at school? The new elf has new talents. At a glance, it's like the Shadow and the King of Night. I don't know if it's a reincarnation or a descendant. But I still have more support for the new book. I'll give you a full score. I hope the subsequent writing will be better.

It's pretty good. I didn't see the daily tab at first, and I thought it was a bit slow at the beginning. I watched it while playing the game, and then I slowly read it and stopped playing the game. The protagonist in it is not killing people all the way, and there is nothing fancy about it. It seems to be a slow-paced book

It is a well-written novel about beast control, incorporating many plots without any violation, and it is also rich enough about the evolution of elves.

It feels different from other beast-control novels. The writing style is okay and the descriptions are delicate. If you like it, you can give it a try.

It's a relatively normal and good-looking beast-control novel. There are no brainless villains in the face. It has its own ideas. If it can write new ideas and use old routines, it will also be good-looking. Hope to write better. Come on! ! !

The writing is very good, but few people have read it. Maybe the reason is that the book is not attractive enough. I don't know how to describe it. It's just that there is a lot of foreplay. Some of the content is boring and boring, but the exciting parts are really exciting.

The world view is grand and real, and the details are in place. The various principles are very fascinating. The characters are also well drawn, and everyone has their own personality. After reading so many beast-controlling articles, I feel from the bottom of my heart that this one ranks first. Come on, author! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's so pretty. It's more of a daily routine

It's very good. There will be some visual problems in the early stage, but you can understand it later, but the explanation is a bit confusing, but it doesn't matter. This is not the good part of this book. It seems that I didn't see the place. There is still a problem but it has been corrected. If it is my first time to write a long story, it will be fine. Come on! I won't go into details about the good points, you can just calm down and take a look.

It's really awesome, this is one of the few novels I've seen that has a complete world view. Moreover, the level of the god-level elves like the King of Sky and Wind is quite high, and each story is really well drawn. The only shortcoming is that the presence of the protagonist of the beast-control novel is a bit low, and the protagonist's research on the evolutionary route does not have much role. Basically, it is used directly without explaining how it was researched.

The plot design and character descriptions are very good. There are some group portraits, and it feels like the protagonist is gradually growing up. The battle descriptions in the arena are also good. In short, the rating of 7.0 Is a bit low. Good luck to the author.

In fact, it's okay. I read it on and off for a while at first. I felt a little bored at first, but after the world view unfolded, it became a bit interesting. It's not the best, but at least it's not that poisonous. It's a pretty good beast-control story. Good luck to the author!

The number of comments is still a bit low. The writing is actually okay. As long as the plot doesn't mess up, I guess the rating will go up a bit as he becomes more famous. I'm looking forward to the protagonist's dragon-type beast control. Although I just saw the mechanical companion come out, the dragon type is also introduced in the plot. I guess it will come soon.

It's nice to watch, the characters are full-bodied, and there are very few poisonous points in the plot (I personally think there are none). The only drawback is that the updates are stable but not many. I think this book is very good, but why is the data still not ideal?

Not bad, worth a look

It looks great, I like it so much (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

There are too few people here. Let me give you a rating. I think it's okay. It's different from most beast-controllers.

From what I've seen so far, it's indeed pretty. The second volume feels like the quality has dropped, there are more riddles and the look and feel has dropped.

I thought it was quite interesting. I finished reading it in one sitting. I don't know why there are so few people [Thinking][Thinking]