After Rebirth, Emperor Jue Si Pinched His Waist and Pampered Him Fiercely

I can't, it's a bit hard to evaluate 😔 There are really not many articles on Tomato that have meat and cars. Moreover, the plot and setting of this book are quite novel. I really like the soft and cute white-cut black heroine VS the love-brained male protagonist who pretends to be a guard. The many psychological descriptions in the article are very engaging, and the interaction between the male and female protagonists is very touching and makes people [shy]. The writing style is also humorous. But... Unfortunately, the plot is not complete enough. The stories of Zhao Shen, Brother Qiao, and Shui Yuntian should be more fleshed out. The female protagonist's emotional changes towards the male protagonist are not reflected, and the male protagonist's past life feelings for the female protagonist are even less reflected. What makes me even more unbearable is that the male protagonist interacts too much with the queen, which is harmful. Even if he is unclean, how can he still give people the feeling of an unclean heart after falling in love with the heroine? Small suggestion: Enrich the plot and reshape the male protagonist. After all, this is a sweet novel! Explain more about the emotional changes of the male and female protagonists, and at least fill in the suspense. You can create more secondary male characters. You can also add more descriptions of scenery to add literary quality. Of course, this is all my personal opinion, and I really want this book to get better. If the plot is complete, the male protagonist has a pure heart and is the only favorite, the emotional changes of the male and female protagonists are reasonable, and the second-level characters are flesh and blood, the book is also emotional and has a certain literary quality, it is simply a fairy among fairy tales! [Crying] Finally, the author should not give up. The setting and general plot of the book are actually very attractive and novel, and the meat is very touching. Come on, [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]