Monster? a Girlfriend in Fighting Form!

I've finished reading it. I've reached 59 chapters so far. There's nothing wrong with it. It's just that the title hasn't reflected it yet. I still need to continue to work stably for a few thousand chapters. [Laughing] [laughing] [laughing] I read the first two books. There are not many words and I couldn't bear to read them. I hope this can be longer. According to the current development, the foundation is still there, and the subsequent plot can be slowly drawn out [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully]

The book is a good book. Although the scene in the title is only reflected in the last two chapters, I actually care more about the description of the feelings between the "monsters". I left the book after two lines of it that I didn't like, but the author kept me here with his superb emotional descriptions and brave, real protagonist. Regarding the opinion of this book, has the author ever read "Mage"? The zombies' superb physique, the ability to devour evolution, (ahem, there are also various outstanding female characters that can trigger the plot), the plot can be reflected in the passion of fist-to-flesh fighting, and the growth rate as fast as a leap. If combined with a sophisticated and epic narrative (plus a little stingy love flavor), why worry about not being a hit! So, here's a suggestion. For example: the author's description of those two days in Jinding. The narrative seemed to me like I was drunk. I couldn't recreate the battle scene just based on the protagonist's perspective and post-war treatment. The revenge plot of the protagonist is even worse (do you know if Mo Fan becomes a demon? Losing his mind and gaining strength, it feels more authoritative!). The perspective is missing, the fun points are not enough, where is the foreshadowing? The way to progress is pointed out (there is really a shortage of Tomato full-time mage books, not just in terms of genre). In addition, the author has thought about the flow. If the author is not firm enough about the book and the content, how can the protagonist move forward bravely? Therefore, the emotional description retained me, excellent! (Tiantian and Han go hand in hand, but the author says they have no similarities. It's so hard to guess [admiration])

This kind of subject matter is quite rare. It's good and the plot is okay.

It's worth reading, it's not a stupid piece of writing

Come on author, you can write about this kind of subject, single heroine or harem? There's no need to be so stressed. You start to feel stressed before you even finish writing, and it's only about eighty chapters.

It's more than just food and grass. It's a good book. You can check it out if you are short of books. Come and take a look.

It's okay, the subject matter is rare, there's nothing poisonous about it, the plot is quite tight, and it's not too watery.

You must live on [smile]

The writing is quite good, but I also have a very good-looking book. I recommend it to you, White Snake. Don't be fooled by the ratings. After reading the full text, you will find that this book is unprecedented and unprecedented.

Super beautiful, come on

Excellent product, considered as daily literature

A novel with great potential

Relatively capable, looks good [sends heartfelt]

Could fight more

The left fist does more damage, the right fist does more damage

Very good (≧∇≦*) Don't be fooled by his name

Not bad, not bad, pretty good food and grass