Boom! The Sweet Girl Goes on a Rampage in the Infinite Game

It's okay. At first, the description of the heroine seemed a bit interesting, and it would be a very powerful setting. But later on, it suddenly became sensational for no apparent reason. Even though they had not experienced much together, they inexplicably became close friends who could support each other. It was obvious that it was easier to meet kind people in school before, and people who were willing to care about themselves, but the heroine was suddenly moved by the care of the hero. The idea of the whole article is good, but the plot is a bit jumpy. It would be better to add more experiences between each node. The reasons for the character's thoughts are clear and have a logical background. I think it will be a high-scoring article.