Dark Immortal Cultivation: Gou Zai's Ascension in the Demon Gate

Listen to books and read. It's very good. The plots where the protagonist and the female character practice together are quite touching, but there are a lot of psychological activities, but it gets much better later on.

I am the author of this book. Please be patient, the rest will be absolutely exciting!

The dark cultivator and prodigal showman.

The magic door portrayed by this author is the real magic door. Cruel

The female character is portrayed with flesh and blood, unlike other novels where the female character is just a female name.

Two updates a day is not enough. Two updates a day is not enough. The author should update faster. The author should update faster.

Two updates a day is not enough! One day is not enough to see it all! ! One day is not enough to see it all!

It's so cool to watch, so beautiful

Okay, okay, it's great to watch

The car is very fast, it is meticulous and it is a skillful article.

The driving speed is fast, the plot is good, the logic is reasonable, and the combat power is not overwhelming. The only drawback may be that the protagonist is not that stubborn.

Not bad, not bad, the car is fast and the plot is interesting

The Devil's Gate is dark enough, without lengthy audience comments or inexplicable provocations. The plot develops very quickly and is enjoyable to watch and listen to. The image of the heroine is also very perfect. When the heroine shines, I hope the author will work harder and work harder. The protagonist's IQ is online, but the protagonist's strength is improving slowly, or it may be caused by driving too fast and too much [face covering]. Comment from a bookworm of fifteen years: There is no poison, so you can eat it with confidence. Better than 98% of novels Miaozhen, who has been in love for ten years, breaks up and hopes that the protagonist will let them get back together as soon as possible.

It's okay. Can you make the protagonist a little more domineering? He can be stubborn when he needs to be, and he can be powerful when he needs to be.

Ambrosia! ! ! ! The logic of the plot is smooth, there are no obvious poisonous points, the speed of the car is fast, and the description of the fighting is wonderful, but it is not all fighting, the author, please do more! !

The Su Geng Demon Sect is a real demon sect, and the heroine is well portrayed. Immortal Grass is updated more quickly.

The fly in the ointment of Xiancao is that the protagonist does not embody the Gou in the title of the book. And the "speed" is too fast, which affects the overall reading rhythm. But the overall shortcomings do not hide the good points

The overall story is good, but the use of language is too exaggerated, and the atmosphere created is too tense. There is a feeling of "what's the matter"? It's just the pressure of the golden elixir, and it's not as urgent as the depiction, but overall it's still good [Like]

Still pretty

It's like watching Dragon Warrior, it feels like a novel from 20 years ago.

I won't change it, whether you like it or not, cheers for the author

Good! ! Good looking... Fast

👌Okay, okay, okay, mine.

Very nice, food

Readable harem stories

Emotional value is full

Good, good, good, good

The plot is okay, but it's been beautified with AI, which gives me a headache.

It's ok. It's pretty good. The protagonist's temperament is also ok. Some of the heroines don't just collect stamps but have a little bit of emotion.

Very nice. Please write quickly. Come on.