Ark: Walking Through This World

The author writes well. 👍 It can be seen that the author writes with great care. But some small descriptions, such as "On the old locust tree in the yard, a few sparrows were jumping on the branches and chirping" in Chapter 28 can be improved a little, such as changing it to "The old locust tree outside the window" "On the top, a few newborn sparrows are jumping among the branches, chirping. "The words outside the window are in line with the perspective of Xiao Xiao taking the protagonist back to the room. Looking outside through the room can take on the above text and give it a little more atmosphere. The reborn little sparrow represents the new future brought by the protagonist, and can also add a little hope and lively atmosphere. Chirp is a simplified description, leaving blank. The author doesn't have to worry about not being read by anyone. He has to believe that the aroma of wine is not afraid of the depth of the alley. As long as the author writes seriously, there will always be people who will read 😄

Although simulating this type of novel is a bit old-fashioned, the author's writing style is good, there is no cookie-cutter running account, and there is no OOC. The quality in Zhouwen is excellent. I hope the author can stick to it.

Author, your book is not an extraordinary book, but you can see that you put a lot of thought into the words. I didn't understand the last few chapters of yours, and I feel disappointed when I see that you don't update them anymore. But author, I hope you can understand that someone is always looking at your results. Come on, author, don't be angry, I will always look forward to your words.

Yes, the writing style is delicate and the pace is not sluggish. The quality is above average in Zhouwen. It should be better if it continues to be written.

The author's writing style is very good and the output is also very high 👍👍👍

The beginning surprised me, the writing is much more delicate than the previous book

No, no, the author is great

Well, overall it's pretty good.

@ During the simulation, it was said that millet would not be harvested, but the if of millet appeared again. Are you ready to harvest millet 🍉 I want to see the Tianshi group [sending my heart]

Great flavor, no need for too much salt