I Am Here***********

Oh, this sexual translation accent. I like this novel, and reading it now fully fits my understanding of the complex characters in these books, especially Dumbledore, a great "kind" wizard, but also a poor stubborn and partial old man. Personally, I quite like Dumbledore because of his complex nature. There is also the protagonist, an imperfectly beautiful, strong and miserable person with a very prominent personal color. Detailed character descriptions and good plot. Very creative. I hope there will be more. Anthracene, in fact, they just hate lovers, yes, yes. As expected, he has a bit of Blake in him, and he has some flaws in his heart and character.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a hp fanfic about children's xp. It's shocking and delicious. The protagonist has his own shaping. It makes up for the regret when he didn't seize the highlights of the three people in the original work (I have always disliked the protagonists who took away the highlights of the three little ones and crazily mixed with the original plot). The writing style is also relatively clean. In short, I hate you couple, 99

In fact, I have watched a lot of pro-age children, and I really like to get a glimpse of the main line of pro-era character development based on the perspective of the pro-era, especially a character like Sirius who is full of conflicts and conflicts from the perspective of Gryffindor to Slytherin. When I peek into the past from the corner of the child era, I always feel emotional that the pro-era is really a generation with extremely charming personalities. The writing is very smooth, the plot is very solid, and reasonable changes are made based on the original text. This is a good fanfic. I really like this kind of article that adds a little emotion to the career as a seasoning. It is logical but not a brainless Jack-Su-Marie Sue. The protagonist will have ups and downs in the plot but not painful, and it has daily life but does not make people feel that the word count is too much. I hope I can watch the ending~

It was so good that I stayed up late to watch it at 4:30 and was so excited that I couldn't fall asleep. It was just too miserable for the protagonist. I felt even worse than the teacher. He deducted Gryffindor points every day for being a double agent. He scolded Harry to relieve his stress. The protagonist didn't even have a friend/family member who told the truth. He was surrounded by people who took advantage of him, doubted him, and depended on him.

The emotional line is really inseparable. It's particularly beautiful. In the early stage, I wished Sirius that he would not be imprisoned as a wife.

The character design written by the teacher is very consistent. The setting of chained mad dog + orthopedic surgery makes me feel very novel. The teacher's writing is also very good, and the update speed is also very fast. I hope the teacher will continue to work hard and more people will come to see [Love][Love]

It really has a sense of originality. The main character is very poisonous at heart. He is worthy of being Sif's roommate. He has the occasional Gedeng, which is in line with the feeling I think. There is no little old man with a pink hairpin like a book that compares AD to a child. He is a principal with strong magic power, some protection against shortcomings (to protect the safety of all students) and rationality. The protagonist Frey's setting is also very touching and sad and paranoid. He and Sirius are really in love with each other and they are a good dog (Sirius) and master (protagonist). And the setting of that sentence is particularly touching, whether it is recalling the experience, but the protagonist has been sick and weak since childhood, I really feel sorry for him. His feelings for Sirius are very complicated, and there are also memories of Lei Gu, my White Moonlight... Overall, it is very beautiful, but there is still a sense of bullying from the previous generation... I feel sorry for the protagonist Sifu.

It's very interesting, I actually really want to see the Black Brothers Triangle ()

Pure hatred, distortion, confrontation between couples is here, a very touching adult setting, why do I feel so few people are watching it [almost crying]

Shockingly delicious! ! ! What I want is this kind of couple who won't admit defeat no matter how hard they fight! ! ! ! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

I don't know why it disappeared. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

Why is my horse taken off the market? It looks pretty good.

It's really good-looking, it's the type of people who fall in love with each other and hate each other. The emotional description is very good and the plot is very coherent. There is just one thing, why has this book been taken off the shelves? ! ! ! ! ! ! ! This is one of the few HP fans I like

I haven't tied it yet and can't wait to rate it. How can such a good book have such a low score! Goddess, I'm here to support you! First of all, this fanfic is really close to the style of the original work, but it incorporates more in-depth things that adults will think about based on the original work. It is not obtrusive at all, as if the protagonist really exists. It does not repeat the plot of the original work too much, but talks about adult things in the world view or fills regrets. It is really creative (I would like to add that it is not like some fanfics written by messy private settings that destroy the worldview and become uncontrollable like a wild horse running wild); Secondly, I am so happy with the relationship between Sirius and Frey! This is how I hate the sea! This is the fight against the road couple! Just this double strength and double madness! Cool! Cool! Oooh ooh ooh ooh ooh ooh Goddess you are so good at writing! Author: Can you see yourself when you look in the mirror? Can't! Because! God! Book! None! Mutually! From the introduction to the setting to the main text, it has been accurately attached to my heart. I beg you for more updates and please keep sticking to it! I have been following too many serials recently for fear of breaking the news. Writing long reviews for every book I like is really exhausting. It is painful and happy at the same time. . ψ(｀∇´)ψ Why is no one watching? I'm really angry!

A very delicious meal. The writing is very good. It really poked me. Every character is very three-dimensional. I feel that the author has grasped the main anchor point. The love-hate relationship between Frederick and Sirius is really interesting. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Give yourself a five-star rating, hehe

It's very good to read, and it really hit my xp, CP Sirius, the main character is Dumbledore and Poisonous Wei (actually, I am too ^^) (I haven't written a long review, so just read it. I personally think this book is still worth reading. Among the many HP fics I have read, this one can also be ranked in the top few, so come on (＞＜)!! Don't cheat QMQ) @Don't know anything. All in all, Shuang Zhi [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] is very suitable for my xp. In fact, what I said above is not accurate. The protagonist has a very strong personal charm. It is not accurate to say that Dumbledore is poisonous. The article as a whole becomes more and more interesting as it gets better [Adoration] It feels like the characters are gradually filling up, and Xiaotian and Xiaotian are no longer just a couple who hate each other. The emotional line is really wonderful [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] Recommended! ! ! I'm already lying flat in the pit, I hope you can feed me food quickly, ah————

I didn't get the phone until Saturday and Sunday. I was just about to write a long review for the teacher, but I found out that it was removed from the shelves and there were no updates. Originally, I wanted to watch it together after the high school entrance exam. 😭

The Super Invincible Cosmic Thunderbolt Explosion looks great! ! ! The author's description style is very similar to the original work, and the characterization is superb! ! ! The characters in the original work are not OOC, and the author added some settings to change some directions and rewrite some tragedies. Looking forward to completing this book! ! !

After watching it, I didn't finish it, but for the first time I felt that words can convey a lot of things. For example, I felt it was so noisy, I felt like they were screaming all the time, and I felt a bit tinnitus. There was no sound around me, but I felt uncomfortable in my brain due to the noise [face covering]

It's simply the best, why is it being removed from the shelves?

It really pokes my xp, why has it been removed from the shelves?

It's better than expected, with coherent logic and a reasonable plot. The original characters are not OOC, and the characteristics are well grasped. The original male protagonist is a bit paranoid, which is very touching. He and Sirius fall in love and kill each other. Although there are not many emotional scenes, the writing is very delicate and the writing is good. I hope it will end smoothly.

Emotionally: Very cool, in line with me X P 😘😍 In terms of plot: There is a fusion, it is both original and innovative, fresh, and great! ! ! (*＾3＾)/～♡ Characters: distinct personalities, no obvious OOC characters, and well-described characters Article content: Vivid and vivid, but there are some small comments in parentheses that are not needed I think it's really good to read, because the author's writing style is better. She made me feel the feeling of hating the enemy and hating the world. The characters are also well developed and basically not OOC. But Weiyi's only problem is that there are too many words and he doesn't know how to divide them into paragraphs. (Because if not separated, it will affect the sense of perception)

My Le Ge Dou, my Le Ge Dou, my Le Ge Dou, I really like it, and I can see the shadow of the original text in many places, just like reading a real HP, the language is also very good, the plot is also very good, and the setting is also very good. I haven't finished it yet but I like it so much [Adoration], the author promised me not to stop the update and must finish it. I have been heartbroken by the interrupted novel [crying] It's tied, what can you say, NB! ! I like it so much

Shocking! Tasty! I have never encountered such a book that appeals to my appetite. The author is like the Mona Lisa I have never met before, a super goddess level! The writing is great and I really like the plot! I am so lucky to meet such a wonderful wife in the same place!

Good looking! [Adoration] So sad [Crying] Good looking [Admiration] So sad [Crying] Good looking [Admiration] So sad [Crying] Good looking [Admiration] So sad [Crying] Good looking [Admiration] So sad [Crying] Good looking [Admiration] So sad

I think it's really good to watch, the emotional line is quite interesting, the career line is also good, the character description is very delicate and the original characters are not OOC, the main plot advances quickly but there is no omission, anyway it is very good to watch

It's so good, so good that I didn't read the introduction carefully at the beginning. Thinking of Sirius as Severus [face covering] I was still thinking, why do we feel like two people are just ordinary friends? Then I went back and read the introduction, wow, I read it wrong [laughs]

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