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The author's writing style is really good, both in the description of the environment and the characterization of the characters. I feel that the author is very good at writing small daily routines and connecting them well with chapters, which makes it quite comfortable to read. Of course, the relationship between Ming Fei and the little monster is also very natural. The author really wants to write about it and dares to write about it. This is a rare and valuable point. Seeing Meiji Shrine, you can feel that the author really has great ideas, wants to innovate, and dares to innovate. Meiji Shrine really fulfills my fantasy of the original work. At the same time, I hope the author can continue to update and present more stories about Ming Fei and the little monster. I believe your book will definitely be popular! Five-star praise sent [like] [like]

To be honest, this is the most enjoyable book I have read after the two novels, "Wind Twilight" and "Grand Escape Against the Sun". I can't find any major problems except for the occasional missing words and typos. I feel that the fans replaced it with their own original characters and so on. Maybe Long didn't finish it three times and just carelessly piled up the strength of their own characters or systems. The world overlaps and the worldview is different from the original. This fanfic is very enjoyable to read. How did Lu Mingfei change from being a young boy to protecting Eriyi? How did he deal with the relationship between Eriyi and his senior sister? Brother Long Si was forgotten by the world, and what Lu Mingfei buried in the future crossed the timeline and other timelines (it should be a surprise to see what the author wrote, and if I remember correctly, Future Lu Mingfei said there will be costs). The timeline is not very different from the original work (the author forgot about Old Tang). If you can't stand the fandom changing the male protagonist, you can read it now I saw 126, and it was quite comfortable to watch. It was much more enjoyable than those mindless ones that pile up the intensity. When I come back after chasing Dragon Five, I will do three brushes [laughing] [laughing] (Can the author discuss it with me when I write the book [shy])

This is one of the best dragon fanfics I found on Tomato. The writing is beautiful, and the character design is very consistent with the original work. It is very, very beautiful. Come on, author, I believe you will be popular [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration] @Caslannaheng

The emotional portrayal is rich, the plot is advanced reasonably, and there is no personal OOC. I am currently my favorite Dragon Clan fic.

The emotional drama about Lue is very well written, especially the description of Eri's movements, language, and demeanor. It can be said that it basically reflects the feeling when reading the novel. It is very sweet and healing. However, Lue in the early stage is still too silly and cannot let go of the senior sister. It is very uncomfortable to watch.

Look at that! Jiangnan. At your advanced age, you can no longer write a follow-up to your youth, but there will always be someone who inherits your regrets and moves on. ————A letter to the author

Lu Hui's love story, I love reading it! [Adoration]

It's pretty, very sweet, I hope Lu Mingfei is strong enough [blowing kiss]

, Jiangnan's book is a fan, this book is the real dragon clan, super super super super sweet, long live Eriyi Lue

This author is so awesome. He can always write the plots we want. I have read a lot of them, but none of them are as good as this author's. Then I ran back to read it again. I was so happy to read it later. Later, Lu Mingfei directly turned into a black man and turned into a wife-protecting maniac. I also read the new book published by the author and it is very good. Anyway, cheers for the author [blowing kiss]

I have read a lot of fanfics, and this one is very comfortable for me to read. It ranks second in my heart. Good luck, author.

The author's writing style is very good, his skills are very good, and the plot and emotional foreshadowing are very rich. It is the best one I have ever seen in dragon fan fiction. I believe you can write more exciting stories!

Super sweet. It satisfied my regret about the little monster. I hope the author can write more and not finish it so early.

It's super, super good-looking, and the author's writing style is also good, which made me feel comfortable reading it!

After reading the first few chapters, the author's writing is not only good, but also very sweet. I hope the author can resurrect Yasha, Sakura and Sakurai Kogure. I hope the Japanese team can be complete and make both Minamoto and Minamoto happy [I'm about to cry]

Jiangnan is just a fanfic writer [smile]

Very well written, cheers

Sweet, very sweet, and the character is very restored. [Top post]

The fullest Eriyi [laughs] It's not the kind of love that purely sells feelings, it's full of love

It's okay, but I feel like Eri is a bit fragile without blood.

It's really good-looking. I've already scored enough points, so I'd like to mention it. But later on, Lu Mingfei was injured because of Eri Yi, like a king snake, which made me feel irritated. It was your fault. Later, he was so violent that he almost disowned his relatives.

The author's writing is very elemental. I think it is the best among fans. I hope the author will keep updating it. It is very interesting.

Overall, it's pretty good to watch, but the author Long 4's writing is average. The emotional scenes and side branches are not as expected. But compared to others, it is indeed outstanding. There are many emotional scenes and the descriptions are good (there are a bit too many emotional scenes).

Mom, mom, mom, mom, mom, mom, please do more. I really want to see it.

Lu Mingfei finally stopped drinking Gao Tianyuan's wine.

A very good fanfic. The daily life of Lu Mingfei and Eri Yi is very sweet. You can eat it with confidence [laughs]

There is no need to comment on the five stars, it is as good as the ones on The Day of Return. But in some ways it's better than coming back again. He actually gave me a like. I haven't seen such an active author in a long time. ＼(`Δ')／(◦˙▽˙◦)Hahaha

It satisfied the ending I wanted to see when I was crying while reading the novel.

Yes, there is a change in Lu Mingfei's feelings. He is not devoted to Eliyi from the beginning. After all, the original work shows Lu Mingfei's love for Nono. [Sending Hearts] The change in feelings is written more delicately [laughs]

The author writes very well, with daily sweetness and some laughter. The uncle wanted to kill Lu Mingfei, but Lu Mingfei countered with one sentence. Anyway, it looks good