HP: There Is Something Wrong with You, Savior.

It looks good, tied. Judging from the trend, it is probably with Harry. Ask about the attributes of the left and right bits. Although I didn't mention it, it's true that Ha's feelings are more active now, and he's taller than Li. I'm looking forward to a Ha 1, praying. Additional: What do you want Harry to do to me? Don't post it under my comment. Send it to the author. It's not up to me to decide. Is it because you post it under my comment to let me see it and to spite me? Do you hate me? I don't understand⁽⁽ƪ(•̩̩̩̩＿•̩̩̩̩)ʃ⁾⁾ᵒᵐᵍᵎᵎ. Go and give the author a five-star rating yourself, or go and support your colleagues in the comments. Please let me go (please)

The writing is very good, the plot is novel and not cliché. The system's presence is very low, its combat power is still good, and at least it doesn't have the outrageous operation of throwing out Avatar in the first grade. The protagonist drives the plot, but does not interfere too much with the direction of the story. It is more about growing together. There is no operation to steal Harry's highlights, but the relationship is quite slow. Now Harry is taller than Leon, so Harry is the attacker? Harry in these chapters is very aggressive and has a very fierce demeanor. Looking forward to the follow-up plot~(◦˙▽˙◦)

It's good to read. I like this kind of novel with a delicate emotional line. Except for the slightly awkward bloodline (but HP novels, which original protagonist doesn't have a special bloodline), the plot development can basically maintain logic and reasonableness. [Quietly tell me about my writing style tendency 1] You can scroll down and see the reviews. There are only a handful of three-star reviews. Do you understand the value of these negative reviews? It's so sweet. Love is not something you fall in love with out of thin air. The logic is online. There are no stupid NPCs in the book and the main character suffers. It's great.

It looks good, but there is currently a problem with one of Leon's settings: Didn't he say that he had seen (?) HP? Then why are there unexpected ideas in the article. Or just a little familiar with it. In addition, I support Liha [like]

Nice! I have been following it recently, and I was surprised that the cp is Xiao Ha's book. The protagonist has not fully opened the perspective, and does not fully understand the content of the book. He only relies on his own efforts and the restraint and teaching of Xiao Ha. The writing is quite delicate. It is an HP fanfic that I like very much recently🥰🥰🥰

It's so good that I cry to death The character creation is very comprehensive, the pace is slow and steady, and the flow is steady. Many sentences are very beautifully described, not with a lot of rhetoric but with a simple texture. Full of power of words. Subtle changes in the emotions between the two can be seen in some small interactions. Their love does not come out of nowhere or suddenly. Their love is based on their deep bond with each other and the youthfulness and ignorance of teenagers. It is subconscious care and protection. Leon's composure comes from his two lives. His emotional insensitivity and fear of facing the profound theme of death show his imperfect side and he is a complex character. Harry's bravery and wit were his most important characteristics in the early stage. In the later stage, he gradually grew up, and the love buried deep in his heart began to appear clearly. Shaped full and round. (But I personally think that his love is somewhat smooth. The biggest conflict between the two may be Leon's deep feeling of powerlessness when he did not tell him the truth for some reason. It is recommended to add more frustration as seasoning) Although there are not many other characters appearing, their personalities are also very distinct. Bagman's shrewdness as a businessman. The daily interactions and inevitable quarrels between Hermione and Ron. Hermione noticed each other's subtleties earlier than Ron (but the two may not necessarily be partners later). Ron is dull and often does not consider other people's feelings. He always blurts out hurtful words. This is his biggest flaw and the reason why everyone does not support this pair of partners. Perhaps it is precisely because of this kind of incomprehension and even disgust that he intensifies the sharpness of his words (?) Maybe he is portrayed too much like a real person, and this reality is uncomfortable. The plot setting of the article is very interesting, the system does not play much role in it, and the combat power is consistent with common sense. The characters' efforts to improve are all visible, and most of them are positive, rather than negative, as if everything will become unimportant and slowly disappear in the long flow of time. It feels very close to the original work, but it doesn't follow the original plot without any sense. The plot is not particularly big, and the story is slow and steady. This book can be the best choice during the book shortage. PS: In fact, I clearly feel that the author's writing skills have improved later on, please work hard [laughs] I wrote it wrong, it should be "The plot is not that exciting"

Ahhhhh, update soon! Big! Don't skimp on your writing! Although some parts are not my idea! But especially the part about being a seeker! It's so cool! This is Gryffindor! A brave Gryffindor, not a bunch of mindless bastards!

So sweet! ! ! The interaction between Baby Leon and Harry was so natural, it was so sweet that the corners of my mouth raised. I was really afraid of making a strange laugh while watching it [laughing and crying]. The system has a sense of presence but not very strong, but the emotional line interaction is really good! ! ! [Love][Sending Hearts][KISS]

This is for CP Harry, because I rarely see Harry's fanfics (written in a way that's eye-catching) The more I read this book, the more interesting it becomes. I like the emotional line. The emotional line is well written. I think it is very good to watch after the second grade. I especially like to watch the emotional line. It is written very naturally. Although the plot is also based on the original work, it is not exactly the same as the original work and will not appear boring. Moreover, some small changes are also very interesting and natural, and will not feel abrupt. Ha 1, which was the first to be tempted, was really delicious.

This book is still being serialized and is very interesting to read overall. Although the male protagonist has a golden finger, he is not wide-open. The author very realistically writes about his depression and helplessness after coming to the new world. There is no arrogance from the perspective of Almighty God, and the character is very down-to-earth. The emotional line develops logically and smoothly, and it goes in both directions with Harry Potter, which is very sweet. The only thing that can be improved is that the protagonist rarely experiences failure, and everyone he wants to save is successfully saved, which is a bit idealistic, but the purpose of fan fiction is to heal everyone, and there is nothing wrong with it [Blow kiss] Beautiful! Finished spreading flowers!

It's so beautiful, I'm really looking forward to it! It's really fragrant! Such a delicious meal, I eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat Eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat

I really recommend watching it. The overall pace is slow but the writing is more delicate, which makes it very comfortable to watch. Tiantian likes it very much! The two began to like each other slowly, not suddenly. From the beginning of friendship, they gradually realized that the like was not between friends but between lovers. Harry is always shy and cute [shy], so I just saw the Goblet of Fire. The overall story is very good, the details of the writing are very good, and the quality is good. I hope the author will continue writing and want to see the final ending. Harry Potter stayed with me for a year last year when I was in a bad mood. It was the first time I came into contact with Harry Potter. I just wanted to watch a movie to relax my mood. Unexpectedly, I fell in love with Harry Potter. I won't say more. I highly recommend everyone to watch it! [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

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It's really cool to go in both directions haha And the most important thing is that the protagonist is a growth type! ! ! There is nothing like Long Aotian, it's all my own efforts, the system is basically not very helpful haha The writing is not bad either and it is easy to accept the settings.

Very nice The following are personal reflections after reading I actually started reading this book in January, and I didn't like it very much at first (maybe because I'm very picky about books?) Finally, I started reading it when I was in an extreme book shortage, and then I discovered this treasure! Until I read it now, I felt that the emotional description in the whole book was very natural. From the experiences of Leon and Harry when they first met, I think the process of Harry's secret love for Leon was very reasonable. It was not as inexplicable as in other books. I have not seen anything too OOC for the time being. The description of the whole text is exquisite and every small detail can make me turn like a maggot on the bed... Hmm... But my favorite is the extra story, especially the one about married life hehehehehehehe, the protagonist is very business-savvy (I have seen many protagonists who only revolve around the male protagonist) You must insist on writing about double strengths! By the way, can Sri Lankan religion survive [crying] I wish Harry and Leon happiness [please update]

It's very beautiful, and it ranks in the top three of my HP fanfics. The writing style is gentle, the characters are well created, and the cheating of the main character Leon is also written very naturally. Leon is smart, gentle, mature, hard-working, patient, and has a bit of a sinister streak. He is a bit charming. However, among the peers in this article, Leon usually serves as the ceiling of his mother's mentor and combat knowledge, so it is natural for the person in this article to like Leon! The emotional line with Harry progresses step by step and is very natural. The irresponsible extra is worth watching (*°ω°*)ﾉ\, but it is recommended to read the extra after reading the main text otherwise you will forget all the main text hhhh Looking forward to the author's next book (ૢ˃ꌂ˂⁎)

It's so beautiful and delicious. I eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat eat

It's great, not only in terms of writing, but also in terms of plot design and character strength planning. Compared with most HP original male and female protagonists, it is better, and there will be no collapse of combat power. Believe me, take a look, it is really a good book.

I go, I go, I go, I go, I go, I go, I go, I go, I go, I go, I go, I go, I go, I go, I go, why is it so delicious (no, now I think all the meals are delicious!) So delicious! I advise the author to update obediently and not to make complete updates.

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Leon is a genius in dog training, and with a wave of his hand, Harry came over [laughs] Although Harry is one-sided about his lovesickness now, I feel that Leon is about to get the hang of it. The only problem is that there are too few chapters [laughs]

Harry: If I want to see mountains, lakes and stars in the sky, meeting you means meeting them all; [Love] Everything in the world comes from meeting, just like when cold meets warm, there is rain; when spring meets winter, there are years; when the sky meets the earth, there is eternity; when I meet you, there is love! [Love] Leon: I know that no matter where I go, you will be by my side, cry with me, laugh with me, and accompany me until the end; you are the source and belonging of all my tenderness [Love] Harry

It's a very interesting and clear article, and it must be Harry Potter 1. I beg you.

I think it was very well written. It reasonably inserted the main character's story line without greatly changing the plot of the original work. Then the journey of Harry slowly falling in love with the main character was also very interesting. Also, when the main character died, I really cried to death. At that time, the name engraved in my heart was still playing in the earphones. I watched that episode many times and it was really clear that the main character's love for Harry [crying] [crying] Now I do nothing every day and just watch the zero hour update from the author. Come on!

The writing is very good. It is really one of the best HP fanfics I have ever seen. The author's extra story about irresponsible relationships allowed me to see them from another angle after the war. I clearly understood that what I saw was only part of their experience. In the places I didn't see, they would always be strong, brave, and happy. [Sending my heart]

Leon is so handsome, his image creation is great, and his character is complete. He loves Jin Galen, longs for power, and will study black magic and even use others. As a little lion, he has a dark side, but this is all to protect the people he cares about. No one can deny his love for Harry. Love is the greatest magic, so after the Phoenix Nirvana, the closest thing to Leon is still Harry! It is recommended that you read more comments and the author has something to say when reading. Some places have been deleted to make it read more coherently (the speed of the car is good, the extra is so good)

The book is okay. The author's writing is not bad, but some details are not explained clearly. Most of them are just passed by. Those who have not read the original work will basically not know some details, such as the movie about Harry's Quidditch debut. If you have not read the original work, you will not know how Harry got his Nimbus 2000. The outline is very good, just polish the details.

It is recommended that everyone watch ᖰ･◡･ᖳ, the emotional line is very well written! The protagonist loves money very much and really pays attention to the feelings of his friends|•'-'•)و✧. The author's writing style is really good🎄◟(˶> ᎑ <˶)◞🎄

It's super good-looking, super good-looking, super good-looking. Everyone should read this book, okay? Leon is completely a dominant lover, super cute (just to say it quietly, I have always felt that Harry would be more suitable for a dominant lover, who can tell him what to do at critical moments. This issue is still too authoritative) I hope there will be more from the boss. The main text is finished. I personally feel that it is very good. It is very interesting. Personally, I feel that it is an outstanding book among this kind of fanfics. I feel that the score can reach more than 8 points, but it is only 7.7. Maybe it is because of the small number of people. The writing style of the author Baobao is getting better and better in the future, and the emotional description is very delicate.

Nice! Love watching! As a long-time book fan, after experiencing so many attacks from weird fans, I am too lazy to praise the book from various angles. Anyway, I feel that the original characters have not collapsed. No matter which film it is, the decent villain neutral camp or the black and white camp [laughs] [laughs] [laughs], it is relatively full. It is worth mentioning that there is not much ink about Master Malfoy, whom many movie fans like, and they want to watch his scenes carefully. As a male protagonist who has read four of them (I don't know whether it is the original book or the movie) but has almost forgotten about it, he naturally changes his surroundings in life, ranging from big surprises (for example, it can be seen from the foreshadowing that Sirius was rescued later) to small regrets (such as Percy's character). I'm very grateful to my wife. Although I haven't finished reading it yet, I can't help but give it five stars. This is my first five stars on Tomato! I hope my wife can continue to write hp fanfics, and I will always follow her! ! !