Possess Anyone, Steal Anyone's Account

The writing was very urgent, and many small events could have been written more to describe the background, social customs and characters of the time, but they were all written in one stroke. Moreover, the occurrence of many events only serves a connecting function and does not contribute to the completion of the plot background. There is no follow-up of corresponding events to form a connection in subsequent paragraphs. It can be said that it simply happens when it needs to happen, and there is not much follow-up description other than the protagonist. This type of description, when written well, can enhance the background of the story. Let's talk about the background. Until the middle stage, the background of the story was not enough to support the protagonist's "infinite possession". In other words, there was no prototype of a good work in the first half, and naturally not many people were attracted to it. What's more, the ability of "possession" is a niche tag. At the same time, the social and human feelings of the story are too weak, and there is no good support point to balance the rhythm. All turns are achieved by "changing bodies." Although turning in this way is easy and simple, the single-line narrative writing style of most stories must be fast and slow incoherently. Then there is the unfolding of the story. It is okay to use reverse chronological writing in the beginning to arouse interest, but it is not until the real hostile forces are introduced to Lan Xiaoxi that a general framework is established. The previous ones are basically to show the protagonist's abilities and the heroine (should be counted) and to allow the protagonist to develop steadily, but this makes the appearance of subsequent forces very abrupt and incoherent. As for the ending, it seems that it is another story that ended hastily because of poor data. I finished the introduction in a hurry, with no foreshadowing, no blank space, and no climax. It can be seen that I simply thought of an outline of the story and started writing it before completing the outline. The advantage is that the writing is free and easy without the burden of allowing the reader to decide the follow-up. The disadvantage is that it is messy and unstable and prone to plot problems. The story tends to lose coherence and the character arcs are difficult to show.

It's okay^_^ Fortunately, it looks pretty.