Spirit Cage: Eve of Mana

Summary: It has the flavor of a different world starting from scratch. I have read too many cool articles. Let's take a look at this one. It has a different flavor. The relationship between the characters and the description of the characters made me wonder if this was a tomato. It really made my eyes shine.

How can I put it, the writing is very good and full of emotions, but there is a feeling of deliberately stimulating contradictions in order to express emotions. First of all, the protagonist does not harm innocent people for his own benefit. He covers up the criminals for the sake of the overall situation. When it is stabilized, it will definitely be settled later. Their contradictions mainly lie in white. The cognition of the brothers and sisters is too ideal. The protagonist can tell them everything, explain the stakes and consequences, and lay out all the evidence for them to choose. Of course, if they can't be convinced, then try it again, and they can be reborn so many times. Is it difficult to create a character who can predict the future?

Wow, it makes my blood boil when I see it, light and darkness, reason and desire, human nature and beast. No matter Bai Yuetian knows that the disaster is coming, he does not abandon the glory of humanity, nor does he want to become a dirty political puppet, even if it may save the world. There is also the protagonist, who would rather be trapped in the dirty mud of politics, but also want to broaden the path of hope for mankind. Even if the world is terrible, even if he is burdened with infamy, he must seize the glimmer of salvation possibility.

The writing is very good, although there are still some obstacles that may be caused by my lack of understanding in reading (I have only watched the first season of Ling Cage, and I don't know Bai Yuetian's character), but I am really happy that I have read Chapter 76 of this book. If the author continues to write in this style, this book can really become the top existence in Ling Cage fan fiction.

Traveling to the world of spiritual cages, Chen Mu is a young police officer. It was a windy and rainy night, and the little policeman was happy to bring five hundred yuan. But why didn't anyone tell me? The heroine is actually Bai Yuekui! As a man of two generations, he was well aware of the dangers in the world. He originally planned to hug Boss Bai's thigh tightly and lie down But he couldn't bear it anymore! Yuekui's life is too hard! Let's love our wife! Hang up! (When longing blows in the night sky~) If retroactive death can be used to make up for the lack of talent, If we can use continuous trial and error to derive a correct result, So, can Chen Mu give Yuekui a bright future?

From a human point of view, the protagonist overthrew Yue Kui's results from an objective and rational perspective for the sake of the world. Indeed, as the old man said, life has meaning at this time and will not become a tool for eternal life without thought. But in terms of personal emotions, this is indeed very complicated. The protagonist undoubtedly likes Yue Kui (to be honest, I also like this portrayal). He is at the right age and will feel scared and worried when facing unknown things, which makes people lovable. The protagonist's behavior is undoubtedly a complete stab in the back of the opponent and negates the opponent's scientific research results. This is undoubtedly a cruel and sad point. The protagonist is too righteous and chooses the world between Yue Kui and the world.

Brother, please give me one more chapter. I can't pay anymore. Please, brother, I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I feel like I'm shaking all over. I can't breathe. Please, brother, just give me one more chapter. Just one more chapter. I'll never touch it again. Please, brother. Really, just one episode. I swear I'll never touch this thing again. I really can't bear it. Brother Liu, please give me one more chapter. I'm dying. Please. Brother, I feel like there are ants crawling on my body. I feel like I'm shaking all over. I can't breathe. Please, brother, just give me one more chapter. Just one more chapter. I'll never touch it again. Please, brother. Really, just one chapter. I swear I'll never touch this thing again. I really can't bear it anymore.

In fact, as the protagonist, he is thinking about the impact of being too rational on the future at every moment, but does the perfect result have to be good? Will such changes in the original work and regrets lead to a happy ending? The story of a little person reversing the future is full of hope. The ending of utopia is not necessarily what everyone hopes for. The relationship with stomachache will make people sad. I hope the bonds in this book have a white coat instead of suspicion and resentment.

It was a very bold attempt to attack Boss Bai from the root. In the story, I saw the growth of the protagonist and others, from being ignorant and messing around to daring to go to hell alone for the one I love. The emotional line was also handled very well. I can really feel the feeling of falling in love, from the first love to you, which is very touching.

I spent an all-nighter reading the author's two books. I can only say that the author's writing style is better than 80% of the authors of the novels I have read for so many years. It can really be published as an official extra. One before the disaster and one after the disaster. The author's writing reminds Bai Yuekui of the animation. I feel that this is really what Bai Yuokui would do and say. I only hope that the author will not stop updating, because Tomato's control is relatively strict and clever. Cage fanfic is not very popular compared to other fanfics. Looking at the number of updates, you can actually see that the data of this book is not high, because people nowadays prefer to read fast-paced cool novels under the pressure of society. In fact, I recommend that the author switch to a paid platform. In addition, with good writing style, I think I can write a good self-written novel without writing fanfics. My suggestion is actually to change the writing style and skip some timelines as much as possible, like Kuaishuang novels, which are more reliable

I think the writing is pretty good, why isn't it popular? It's much better than those mindless fanfics. Although the emotional description is too complicated, overall it is a good work and you can buy it. Don't let the first few chapters put you off, the rest is quite interesting.

This is a book created with superhuman wisdom and logic. The network of relationships and interests in it are unimaginable by ordinary people. In this book, no one is absolutely right and no one is absolutely wrong. He writes about the good and evil of human nature in the clearest way. He uses the most straightforward way. It expresses the helplessness and collapse of an ordinary person when faced with a conflict of interest in a world and personal relationships. It also proves how an ordinary person can create a hope in a world full of despair. I think it is not only a novel, it is also a symbol, a symbol of human nature.

Didn't you, the author, say you won't stop updating? Didn't you say it's 1.8 Million words?

It's okay. I think it's not bad to kill time, but I don't think you need to emphasize it so much. The butterfly effect is not caused by you. Even if he traveled through time and changed some things, it would not change the occurrence of earthquakes and the like. You can use this incident to make him understand that this is a real world, rather than just relying on the plot, and you can also make the protagonist understand something.

I like to read fan fiction, but for the original work, I only know the name and have watched a few videos on Douyin. But after reading your novel, I can read it from the first chapter to more than 80 of your latest chapters in one breath. I can only say that it is very attractive to me. Brother author, please work hard [smile][smile]

I have been a bookworm for ten years, reading books online. It is currently non-toxic and can be used safely, but there are a few pitfalls, but it is not a big problem. This is a good spiritual cage fanfic. To be honest, the ability to retrace death is not very strong. If the protagonist never dies, this ability will be ineffective. For example, he becomes a vegetative state or something like Mark. This is a problem worth considering. Vegetative consciousness does exist [exploration][exploration]. Generally speaking, it is good.

The writing is very good, and the psychological description is extremely delicate. You can get a glimpse of Chen Mu's image from his psychology. The characters are basically not flat, but very full. I look forward to the author continuing to work hard. To be honest, this book is much better than the one about You Can Become Stronger By Confessing Yourself.

It's really good. This is written in great depth. Especially the argument with Bai Yuetian. Damn it's interesting. It's much better looking than most cool articles, I feel. It can be regarded as a rare masterpiece in the spiritual cage. And the character's personality is not too biased. Not brother? Why is it so well written? Just give it a 7.0 Rating. This is undoubtedly the number one spirit cage fanfic in my mind, there is no other.

Don't think this is a spiritual cage, this is a magical book, and the emotional scenes are well written! In all the years I have been reading, few emotional dramas have been written so well.

Read and cherish this book. I feel it is easy to be blocked. I will give it a try. The plot is very good, the emotional drama is also very good, and the wit and wisdom throughout the text are good. The grasp of human nature and the interpretation of the original work are very good. It is worth reading. This is an excellent fanfic. The story line has reached more than 70 chapters and is no longer influenced by the original work. There is probably no chance that Mana's ecology will be solved by the protagonist when Mark appears. Although I can basically see how the book will end, I just have an inexplicable desire to see what method the protagonist will use to achieve a good ending. Also, can the author update it quickly [face covering] [OK]

This book is well written, but he is a second author. The author should not have the energy to change a story by himself, or the author can try to work as a screenwriter in the Spirit Cage Project Team. I am just saying that I am just an ordinary person with no connections, no ability, and no family background. If you do, just remember me and find me a leisurely job. It doesn't matter if you don't remember. Author, come on [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Laugh][Laugh][Laugh][Laugh]

The emotions are very good, not sharp at all [laughs], The thoughts are deep, stick stick... Bah! Every word has power.

Not a cool novel! If you want to read cool articles, don't enter! For me, it is a very good novel on Tomato. The characterization and plot make me have a strong desire to read it. A little twisty, a little bit poisonous, but innocuous. I hope I don't want eunuchs, a rare spirit cage fanfic.

Author, you make me feel like I'm reading the original work

If the fan circle wasn't so small, this book would definitely be famous.

Tomato🍅It is an honor for Tomato to have this book

No poison points, high energy throughout, no plug-ins to increase strength, recommended for wall cracks

The quality is very high and the plot doesn't drag on. Come on

It's the best one I've seen among the Spirit Cage fics, and I give it five stars!

Very nice. At present, there are more descriptions of Jiuchuan before the disaster. The wall of rules that has been formed for hundreds of years, the only way I can think of is to rebuild it. The protagonist is trapped in an abyss. Sometimes I can't breathe while watching it. I actually desperately hope that the disaster will come soon. [Laughing and crying]