Ninjas in New Eridu

It's really good-looking. Both the protagonist creation and the plot advancement are better than most of the same genres in Tomato. However, the author is a hard worker. I feel that some chapters may be due to the author's real situation, which means that compared to the previous chapters, the rhythm is not as clear and the plot is clear.

It's not bad, I can read short white text. Among tomatoes, it is the standard type. The protagonist is in Kisame's style, a bit of a double standard. But I thought about it, and based on the life experience the author gave him, it's okay if he didn't directly transform into Uchiha Obito.

The writing is quite good, but if you want to say something in the article, the protagonist looks rather fierce and not very handsome. Well, to put it bluntly, it's a bit pitiful. I don't know why. I tried to go to the back to make the protagonist look more handsome. The protagonist looks so pitiful!

It's pretty good. Keep up the good work and keep an eye on you. I'm just an old fan. After all, I've read all three books and I've also read the one about "Journey".

It looks good, but I just can't agree with the author's aesthetics towards Kisame. The settings and ninjutsu in Naruto are quite good in Zero Zone Rei. The combination of the two is also very good, and the places where it should be fun are also very fun.

Good reviews, it's one of the most interesting novels I've read recently. In particular, the author did a ruthless job. Reza has become the Godfather of the Zero Gang in the Zero Zone (similar to Bucky the Clown). Currently, he needs to face the crusade of three virtual hunters and three parties. It makes me always want to know the follow-up of this shocking life.

It's quite satisfactory and good-looking, but it's a problem that a large part of the plot was cut off in the middle [thoughts]

After a rough look, the author's main problem is that there are too many narrations. In human terms, there are too many narrations, and they are bland and even cumbersome, which makes it difficult to fully convey the perspective of the protagonist. In this regard, I suggest that the author associate less, divergent thinking less, and use modal particles more. Another thing is the three-dimensional sense of the character's image. In this aspect, the author can describe more micro-expressions and some micro-movements of the characters. And the description of the environment is not good enough, and the atmosphere is not in place. For example, when entering Wildfire Town in Chapter 255, the desolate feeling of the west is not well reflected. The above summary is based on my reading of the first 90 chapters and selected chapters that will be updated later. I also wish the author's skills will get better and better.

It's okay, but I suggest the author change the appearance of the protagonist later... (´--`；)

As for the plot, I think it's fine. The protagonist aspect was unexpectedly to my liking. Extra points for having multiple female protagonists, don't give away girls

The content is okay, but the problem for me is that the protagonist teaches Hoshimi Masa how to train chakra, but the plot has not yet said whether he can learn it or not. We will see what happens when the time comes, and also give a warning to those readers who hope that only the protagonist is special.

To be honest, when I read it from the beginning, I felt that it was not in line with my taste. But at that time, I was listening to the book while fighting a crisis, and I didn't have time to change books. However, after listening to it, I found that it was quite good and I could read it.

It's okay, but can we change the appearance of the protagonist later? You need to keep your fangs, otherwise you won't be able to bite your tail in the future.

Watching the shit ninja next door using his Sharingan and subduing people with guns, I suddenly remembered that I didn't rate this book. After reading it, this book is simply a magical book of the same type (I really haven't read any books yet). Come on, author, I'm counting on you [face covering] Set the book of shinobi and set the Susanoo ninjutsu blood succession limit. The blood inheritance limit here refers to the pupil technique. All Mangekyou's skills are blood inheritance limited ninjutsu/genjutsu. Susana consumes eye power. You can't just see the word "ninjutsu" and assume that Susana doesn't consume eye power. Dear author, could you please revise it? This kind of setting problem, and the content also ridicules the correct people, really ruins the impression. Please revise it [I'm about to cry]

Let's just say that this book is good enough compared to other new Daphne books. Why is the rating so low? It's great, I hope the author will continue writing. And why do we have to have special opinions on the appearance of the protagonist? I think Kisame is actually quite handsome.

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Come on, Laohu. I hope this book will be more popular

The author's writing style is average. He may have wanted to create a villain in the middle but the character couldn't support it, but he stopped it in time. This is good. It's okay among Tomato fans. There's nothing wrong with it. I can recommend it.

It's well written, but it's a little bit hard to put on Kisame's face. Come on.

It's really not good-looking to just put Kisame's face on, but if he had a skin tone like Kisame's, plus those eyes and cheeks, and then replaced his facial features, face shape, and hairstyle with someone else's, it would actually look quite handsome, (for example, when Kisame was young)

Very good, especially Chapter 29. I laughed so much that my stomach hurt [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying] How can I put it... The ending feels so empty [crying]

It's good to watch, the plot is very interesting, and the characters are not broken. The humanity of the protagonist is also maintained very well, and the setting of multiple female protagonists is also quite nice [Read it carefully] The only thing I feel unsatisfied is the combat [face covering] But after about half of it, I saw the author's self-criticism [laughing and crying]

It's pretty good at the beginning, but it's at the end that the protagonist starts to gain some invincibility. Just like a licking dog, he basically helps with everything. It's obvious that it's a plan or something to do. Then I didn't go to find someone to settle the matter.

The monster's combat power is a bit stronger.

A very nice book

As a chef, the criteria for judging good food and grass are very subjective.

Can you write that the player draws this character? Just be a sideshow

Did you forget to rate it? I accidentally gave him the wrong book [laughs crookedly]

It's well written. I hope the author will continue to finish the book.

It's okay, but there's not enough data. I don't know how long I can survive.