I Am the Director of Tianting Demolition Office

Advantages: Good imagination, demolition, environmental protection, memory, inheritance, feelings, and emotions can all be made a fuss about. Disadvantages: First, the sentence is too long and not very segmented, making it very tiring to read. Second, the characters are almost too flat, not three-dimensional enough, and have little tension and interest. The third is that there are not enough difficulties, especially when the practice room of the Giant Spirit God was dismantled at the beginning. It was demolished in just a few hundred words and was done lightly. Where are the regulations, norms, warmth, and humanistic care you mentioned? In fact, the selling point of your book is how to demolish illegal buildings. So what resistance do you encounter on how to demolish illegal buildings? Just one illegal building may be able to connect many small stories together, such as resolving a small problem, then another small problem, another problem, and finally a reversal. You blindly advance your plot. These core events create character conflicts, character wisdom, and character psychology. They are the key to shaping characters. Fourth, the main plot is almost invisible. What is your main plot? There is no story line to run through, and then there are messy things happening. Are these characters Yue Lao, Sun Wukong, and the Seven Fairies not related? Can't be put together at all. There are still many issues, so I won't comment on them. Come on!