Emei Zhou Zhiruo, Please Give Me Some Advice

The writing is very good, but after wearing it again, I can't read it at all. I think this is the reason why I quit writing. Because although it is understandable that other plots cannot be written, this method is more difficult to accept, even if you enter Xiantian and then go to other worlds. It's also easier for people to accept. I just treat this book as finished. It's really good. Like.

Transformation, excellent writing, top-notch writing on Tomato Transformation, zero description of women's clothing, women's bodies and female degeneration. Infinite Streaming, the protagonist travels through various Jin Yong martial arts planes and transforms into Zhou Zhiruo → Yue Lingshan → Mu Nianci → Mu Wanqing, constantly collecting various martial arts, becoming stronger, helping Tiandao and the Emperor of Destiny, and forming various bonds. At least except for the heroine, other characters do not deviate too much from the original work, which is not bad, and there are no golden fingers from other world views, which will not weaken the fighting power. It's really interesting, and I can recall the plot~ This writing is worth collecting.

Please give me one more episode. I'm dying. Please, brother. I feel like there are ants crawling on my body. I feel like my whole body is shaking. I can't breathe. Please give me one more episode. Just one more episode. I'll never touch it again, please, brother, really, just one episode, I swear I will never touch this thing again, I really can't bear it anymore, I'm tossing and scratching now, brother, I beg you, just one more episode , please, just one episode, I can't stand it anymore, my head is going to explode, quick! Just one episode, please, please, please, please, I can't stand it anymore, I can't stand it anymore, how much do I have to pay? You can give it to me. I'll never touch it again. Please, can you give me a break for the last time? Give me a break. Give it to me. Please, it doesn't matter how much you want. Brother, I don't care how much you want. Finally - - This time, I beg you, give me one more episode, please, please let me go. If this continues, I will die. My head is dizzy, my body hurts, my body temperature is cold, and my eyes are burning. I really can't stand it anymore! ! ! ! Please give me one more episode!

It's pretty good-looking. Why isn't the score high? This kind of rhythm is just right, it's a bit refreshing, and it's not the type of game that seeks defeat alone. It's interesting to watch [like]

Opening a book for the first time, lightly spraying

Although time travel, there is no system, which is very good, but... It is too entangled in gender issues, which is completely unnecessary. I just want to see how the author solves the dilemma of the original characters and new ideas for solving problems. Come on! ! !

This novel is actually very detailed and engaging, don't let the first three chapters put you off. This is not an AI novel, it is a rare masterpiece on Tomato. The author is very considerate, I recommend it, five stars. To be honest, the score is too low, it is a fine novel.

The book is good. Just can I be a woman quietly? The writing is okay, but it's a bit cheating to change the map when I have nothing to do. Besides, can I be a woman quietly?

Super

A good unique and beautiful article, but I can't accept that Kuaiwen started from scratch and left with four stars. Xiaoao didn't hold back when he saw Yue Ling delete it.

Different concept but not too violent, neutral and neutral, a three-dimensional view that is rare in online articles nowadays

Seeing that it is good now, I would like to give 9.5 Points to encourage the author. The author's writing is good. The fear and uneasiness of the time traveler when he first enters the world is more realistic. The whole writing style is more like an old-school martial arts novel. So far, there are no major problems. Looking forward to the next plot [laughing]

It's pretty good-looking, but I don't have a love brain, and I won't be invincible from the beginning. But you can be more creative. As a modern person, if you only have knowledge of physics and chemistry, can you also think about the things in novels? Such as covering the sky

Sounds good. I watched Yitian World and hope it can be supplemented by a sequel.

Without touching the original work, the novel is still wonderful and has its own thread. The author is experienced and very strong. Well written

Review the world of martial arts

To tell the truth, it's really well written and worth reading.

I feel that the more I write, the better. I like the plot direction of the second Swordsman, but it's a pity that there are too few. Please do your best.

The subject matter is very novel, but the segmentation could be slightly adjusted. When I read a book on my mobile phone, I use size 19 fonts, but there is a paragraph in the text that actually takes up a whole page [laughing]

Overall, there are no major flaws. It is logical and in line with the current characters. It is a bit fun to read and it goes smoothly.

Great book, I hope you can thank me more. Make it into astronomy

The writing is good, keep up the good work.

The version of Zhiruo with a man's heart and a woman's body is a bit interesting. I personally think the author will abandon the emotional line and focus on the main line of martial arts, right? Now that Jiuyin has passed away, there shouldn't be any obsessions in the future?

Not bad, not bad, I just hope it doesn't end up being a harem story, which would be superfluous.

The martial arts world from an alternative perspective is novel but lacks stamina.

The writing is concise, there are no graphic words, and the protagonist's IQ is also online. It's already a very good martial arts novel written like this. I hope the author works hard and hopes that the follow-up will be more exciting.

The subject matter meets the expectations of traditional martial arts fans, but the content is new and original. Worth a thumbs up!

The writing is delicate and the literary skills are better than any online novel I have read before!

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The writing is delicate and full of details.