Miss Player, Please Don't Give up on Me.

The writing is very good. The overall writing style is very gentle so far, and there is a delicate warmth between the lines. The writing style fits the theme of the novel just right, there is no redundant content, and the writing is very smooth. The combination with the setting of Gai Mu is very clever, there is no inexplicable sense of separation, and it is very comfortable to watch all the way, from the inside to the outside, psychologically and visually. Although it is a Baidu, in terms of the setting and performance of the protagonist, it can be regarded as a pure Baibai. The current performance of this article is rated as Super Cup on the Lily track. It has strong versatility and strong countermeasures. It is suitable for related enthusiasts to watch. How should I put it? After writing too much, some problems have emerged. Although the impact is not big, it is still not so perfect. . .

The writing is very good, especially the heroine's experience of lack of love, which made me feel immersed in it. However, unlike the heroine, I worked hard to change the Liu Ju script I took into the Jin Dynasty Yang Guang script. Author, don't let the other heroine have an ambiguous plot with the other two.

1. This "anti-routine strategy + orange daily" setting is so right! I originally thought it was a "tool man" guide with a clear goal, but it turned out that the protagonist's secretly moving little entanglements were soft and cute, and the sweetness was very natural and not artificial, without the greasy feeling of industrial saccharine at all. 2. The writing style is as gentle and gentle as drinking orange soda under the sun. There is a kind of subtle warmth between the lines. The little awkwardness in the protagonist's heart and the interaction with the player lady are very vivid. As I read it, I felt that my mood became lighter and lighter. It is completely healing and sweet. 3. There is no nonsense and no fuss, it is the daily delicacy and cookies that are the most poignant. The protagonist's transformation from "treating the other person as a tool" to quietly caring about it is written so realistically, and every little emotion is accurately captured. It is a good work that makes people can't help but raise their mouths. 4: New real gold was also discovered in Yangshizi. 5: However, I have to criticize the author severely. It has reached the point where people can't help but complain. I struggled for a long time and didn't know how to start. Finally, I came to my senses and just said three words: It's even slower! Ps: Read Chapter 37 and comment

I originally wanted to find a book to pass the time before going to bed to induce drowsiness. The introduction was interesting, so I clicked on it and read it. Unexpectedly, the writing was pretty good. I stayed up all night and read the latest version in one breath. I thought about it and wrote down my thoughts. The background of the book is very clever - "one of the gal's heroines to be conquered". It can be said that within this framework, every step of the plot is closely related to the psychological activities and emotions of the characters, and the author also describes it very well. It can be said that the delicate psychological description is the biggest feature of this book. The embarrassment of poverty, fragile self-esteem, etc. Are all very attractive to me. The last time I saw this kind of novel that combines plot and psychological description so closely was Chi Xiaocheng. After talking about the psychological description, what also surprised me was the cg, be and chapter. On the one hand, the creation of CG is to fit the background framework of "gal", and on the other hand, it is a picture described by more words. When the CG emerges, I will be led to grind the text carefully and imagine the scene in my mind, because at this moment, I can temporarily not care about the progress of the plot, I only need to follow the text to fantasize, so that the image of the characters in my mind becomes clearer. The setting of be is also very clever. Its existence makes the development of the plot start to have ups and downs. When I detect a contradiction, I will not directly think that the contradiction can be eliminated. Instead, I will be curious and want to explore whether the contradiction is a new be. At the same time, because the root cause of be is the friction between the two, it will reveal character flaws and the serious consequences of unresolved conflicts, which can deepen the impression of the characters. The chapter simply describes the past, which deepened my love for Porridge. Because the chapter was written in such a miserable way, Jiang and I had a brief emotional resonance. After talking about what you think is good, let's talk about what you think is bad. The first one is that the progress is too fast. Part of it is a common thread. The essence now is the unspeakable misunderstanding in romance novels, but it could have more meanings and more articles. It is also quite interesting to extend the time they share together, slowly increase the favorability of others, and then start other people's solo lines involuntarily and then try to break back to Congee's line. It's a pity that it ended too quickly, and it was over after two bes. The other part is "the personal line that is more difficult than the common line". There is no difficulty in the personal line of Congee, it is smooth and simple, and there is no be. Good feelings come so easily. Without setbacks, the most intuitive feeling is that progress is so fast. Another point is the rollback mechanism. I originally thought that each rollback mechanism would be slightly different and increase the difficulty of Jiang, but in fact it did not. It was just a simple reversal of time. Let's take a look again. What if the author flips the table and says that everything is just a prologue, the ez mode is over, and if you want to take away the porridge, you have to challenge the nightmare difficulty or other super expansion? That should be interesting. ——2025.11.24

The writing is great. I have read so many "Baibaiwen" in 🍅. The quality of this book is considered to be T0 level. The emotions are delicate and the character is distinctive. Coupled with the author's ingenuity, it is a breath of fresh air in the current routine of "Baibaiwen". The data should be better. I wish it a good success. I hope the author can continue to work hard and create more excellent works [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss]

It can be said that Zhou was reincarnated into this world and started living again as a baby, but she only remembered that she was a man in her previous life and that this world was fake. Overall, it can be viewed as pure redemption. In the end, long live pure love and don't resort to bloody plots. Pure love becomes a hundred (actually it can be a pure hundred) This is a rare campus love story that describes a kind of beauty unique to the youthful period. It's not pretentious or illusory. It is a campus novel with the purest goodwill and troubles unique to girls. (I have seen too many industrial saccharin disguised as campus) For love, it is not simply lust, but the resonance of two souls, not industrial saccharine.

Fragrant😋, the content is remarkable, but there is too little description of the other female protagonists😡, but judging from the two fake endings, I closed my heart after saying a few words😭😭It is indeed difficult to write. There is nothing wrong with the general direction. It feels like Jiang has changed a different person after failing twice. It makes me feel a little strange. But overall it is still a good story. Whether it is the environment or the description of the characters, it can be seen that care has been taken. The update frequency is very fast ⭕️💰, but I still hope that the smelly mole takes care of himself❤️ and do what you can, you guy! 😤

I got real money on Tomato, this is the Lily article I want to read

It's okay. The author's thoughts and ideas are very interesting, and the foreshadowing is good. For example, Zhou Zhou reincarnated and wrote about changing from a boy to a girl, but because he lived for 17 years, he became a girl in consciousness. I feel that the writing is to purely determine sexual orientation, but there is no feeling of adult thinking in the memories, no matter when he was a child. Regarding relatives, facing slander and betrayal, the writing is suitable for the current age but not suitable for adults. Also, the idea of a fake ending is good, but it is easy to write. The biggest shortcoming is that it is easy to lose patience. Even if you are patient, readers may lose patience, so this is a test for the author. Unfortunately, he is a little too hasty, no She was living well, but then she sold miserably, sold too much, betrayed Rhubarb from a low self-esteem family, and had the most classic depression. There are too many buffs. It's unnecessary. It's really unnecessary. You might as well explain her situation or other things in more detail, or skip some topics and talk about the Raiders. After all, There is no description of the Raiders at all, at least not until Chapter 44. This is a big shortcoming. It's not like running in both directions, but this is understandable. After all, the selling point is Zhou Porridge. Emotionally, I still prefer this side. It is well written. Some of it may not be logical, but I think the emotional description is really okay.

This book was really amazing when I first read it. The delicate writing style, rich emotional descriptions, and vivid descriptions of the interaction between Zhou and Jiang made people feel distressed and angry, especially when Zhou's parents died when he was a child and he was framed in the second grade of junior high school. But after Zhou's favorability exceeded 50, I began to feel that the author's writing power was a bit out of control. During the week of my third year in junior high school, I was gang-banged by my classmates, especially when Dahuang passed away on my birthday. These two incidents seemed a bit sadistic. I feel that Dahuang's death was unnecessary. It would have been better if it was a good thing. After all, four consecutive very miserable experiences made me feel a little tired or tired. Then after Zhou's favorability exceeded 70, I could feel that I was losing control of the plot, or that I couldn't hold back my writing power. The description of the daily interaction between two people is a bit bland, and the emotional description can feel that the author is a bit short of words. Especially for Jiang, I feel that after the main perspective changed to Jiang, Jiang vaguely changed to a male perspective, because Zhou has little feeling for Jiang's female charm, and after all, he is also a former male in the setting (although it is just a setting). I also know that it is difficult to write about this kind of ordinary life well, so most of the treatment of this part is in the form of a unit drama. Finally, I hope that Zhou's perspective can be used more in the future. After all, the protagonist is also Zhou, and Zhou can be a little more proactive, so that the plot has some ups and downs. As long as he still acts as a pillow princess [blowing kiss] To sum up, I think I will give it 5 stars at the moment. It is really eye-catching among the many routine articles on Tomato. Although there are some shortcomings in the back, the first half of the writing is really great. I hope the author can continue writing [Blow kiss]

The character Zhou is quite interesting, full of contradictions. If she wants Jiang to attack her and fall in love with her, she must join the personal line. If she wants to join the personal line, Zhou must have a higher liking for Jiang. But coincidentally, the bottom-level setting of this character made it easier for her to have a favorable impression of Jiang in the early stage. At the same time, she would start to fall into self-pity due to some of Jiang's daily interactions with other capture characters. This also led to Zhou in the late stage of the common line. She could only watch from the sidelines as the other two capture characters' favorable impressions of Jiang were overtaken in daily tasks and entered their personal lanes (hehe, so twisted) and then she was left alone to worry about herself (it's a shame if she feels like a loser). Alas, it's true, Zhou, a time traveler + having played many games in his previous life + having a transgender setting, has not come out at all. She is completely an adolescent girl who lacks love and has no sense of security. I think it's also the most difficult character to conquer in this game. Miss Zhou, can you give us a performance, just one of "I am a hunter, I want players to fall in love with me and become my stepping stone into reality"🤣

Absolutely, only Tomato Lily can see such a meticulous and slow pace. It is really rare, and the emotional description is very delicate. As for Tomato, I think it is a must-see. In fact, the pace is not slow, but unfortunately there are not many people who are more daily and meticulous.

The writing is very good, especially the description and processing of emotions. Overall, it is very sweet and highly recommended. The only shortcoming is, author, hurry up and resurrect me. I open Tomato every day to see if you have updated. I am hungry again. I have not yet found a Lily article that feels as good as this book. Hurry up and be reincarnated!

Everyday sweet stories are absolutely sweet. Chinese people don't lie to Chinese people. That is to say, I read a lot of little pearls in the early morning. The portrayal of the protagonist's character is really amazing. It is like the character is really brought to life. The writing is very delicate. Putting yourself into it can arouse emotions. Such a high-quality book has a fatal flaw. The new book has a small number of words. I read the latest chapter after reading it for a while.

This book does not have strong sensory stimulation or thrilling plot twists, but like a calm river, it flows through the heart with warm warmth and youthful ignorance. The setting of saving and being saved is very old-fashioned, but it has a different brilliance in the author's writing, rather than being the same as some stereotypes. The more I read, the more I was moved and wanted to cry. My body felt warm when I looked at it. Come on, author.

Very well written Spoiler-proof The two false endings are also good. This book is not entirely written from Zhou Zhou's perspective. The first two chapters that achieve the two false endings will basically become Jiang's perspective. Sometimes it feels like Zhou Zhou is hosting the system for the first two false endings.

I feel that the author's writing is very good. After looking through the recent book reviews, emmmmm, I feel that the author does not need to care too much about everyone's thoughts. He wants to express what he wants to express most (nothing wrong with taking questions or feedback) and not change the style too much. Ps: I feel that the porridge is far away from the original design that made players fall in love with it. It looks like a 0 that has been conquered.

Full marks, the plot is full of tension and the emotions are delicate and soft. The description of the novel gave me a sense of heaviness, and the heroine seemed to be bound by the gravity of this heavy environment. A sense of tragedy comes over me (knife).

It's pretty good. This type of novel doesn't account for a very high proportion of the novels I've read, so I can't rank this type of novel. But I can talk about my feelings. First of all, the characters are very detailed, and you can feel the emotions of the characters in the book. This is very good, and it is also divided into two perspectives. One is Zhou Congee itself, the process of conquering alone, and then there are shortcomings. In fact, this shortcoming is harmless when you look at it later. As mentioned earlier, Zhou Congee has some interactions where he is a boy or knows the game. When looking at a few pictures later, there is some conflict and a sense of fragmentation, but this feeling disappears after that. Generally speaking, it is good.

Very, very good. The most attractive thing about Baihe's works is the delicate feelings between girls. The author relies on the shell of gal to sublimate things that appear on the surface, such as the conqueror and the conquered, into real love and redemption (this is also a common problem in most tomato novels. Emotions are basically driven by goals and tasks, and it is difficult to change from the heart). In other words, the author has a good grasp of psychological description. In short, it is very, very beautiful. The disadvantage is that the pace is too fast. The be knife in the front can actually be a little more, and the basic sweetness in the back is very sweet, but if you keep watching it, it will lose the feeling of going from an ordinary strategy to really understanding the person Congee and actually falling in love with her. My personal suggestion is to describe Jiang's real life more. This can make this person more separated from the virtual goals of the gal game and make her more realistically close to Congee. Secondly, everyone confessing to each other is also a breaking point. Now Jiang only thinks that Congee is virtual. When Congee appears in reality, Jiang's feeling of relying on virtual love suddenly becomes real is the most anticipated.

I have been reading Tomato for so long. This is the first time I sincerely want to follow a novel. I stayed up late and read 75 chapters in one go. My evaluation: It's beautiful, it's so beautiful. Forgive me for my lack of words. I can only describe it as beautiful. The author must keep writing, come on!

I found a good deal in Tomato, and the heroine Porridge's strong yet fragile character is really hard not to make people care about her. As the heroine steadily attacks her again and again, loves her in her own way, and breaks down the walls of her heart formed by the accumulation of dark past, the sour and astringent sweetness really makes people feel heartbroken. Blessed are those who like Pure Love Lily.

This is a very sweet novel. It's so sweet that I almost cried. I highly recommend everyone to read it. It's very sweet and has no knives at all. I'm lying to you. I'm a puppy. Come and read it together. It's really very sweet! ! ! ! !

It's really super good-looking. There are very few lily books that I can stay up until 2 o'clock to read in one go. Recently, the lilies on Tomato are really unreadable. They are all formulaic school beauties and the like. This book is really eye-catching, especially the micro-movements and details of the characters. It's really amazing. Finding such a book is really a blessing. Also, Jiangzhou 99 [Love]

What a knife, it looks good, I cried when I saw it The following does not contain spoilers According to the setting, Zhou Zhou is a time traveler and a boy, but more than ten years of life have turned her into a girl from the inside out. If Zhou Zhou wants to return to reality, she must let Jiang Lexi complete her emotional journey. But she, who lacks love, inevitably falls when she truly feels the love given by Jiang Lexi. Zhou Zhou knew that she was only one of the three heroines, and that it was entirely possible for Jiang Lexi to achieve success with one of the other two. This made her care more about her weight in Jiang Lexi's heart. She would also be disappointed by Jiang Lexi's interaction with the other heroines. Coupled with her already feminine thinking, every time Zhou Zhou looked away, every time she hesitated to speak, every time she pretended not to care, she ended up with red eyes again. The author's writing style is excellent. He depicts the character's personality with delicate writing style. The emotions of the characters are as vivid as real people. With the detailed scene description, you can draw CGs in your mind just by looking at the words. In addition, fast updates are also a plus

After reading the current chapters, I really like it. I feel that the Raiders know enough about Zhou Zhou so far. I guess the next step is to let Zhou Zhou get in touch with Jiang's world, otherwise it will still not be equal emotionally.

The emotional line is sweet. Until Chapter 70, there is nothing dissatisfied except for Zhou's too many buffs. I originally wanted to see more blood flowing, but a few chapters made up for this. What I'm looking forward to more is Zhou's relationship with Jiang in real life🤓 Now Jiang is taking the initiative to guide, and Zhou is half pushing and half pushing. But no matter what, it's still limited to the world of gals. Zhou's understanding of Jiang's reality is still close to 0. The thought of returning to the real world makes me want to raise my flag. This is my favorite novel. I will add it to my bookshelf directly🥴🥴🥴

It's so beautiful, the inner description of the characters is delicate, and the writing is just right, just like Jasmine, it's sweet and comfortable. I saw it on the recommendation list in the middle of the night, so I stayed up late to watch it, okay?

It's a very good work, but some details need to be adjusted, and going back and starting over is a bit distracting. I suggest you focus more on the life of Porridge. Opened high and left low. Other lines opened too fast and were interrupted. It's a pity novel.

The writing is very heart-warming, it makes my body feel warm when I look at it 5 pictures a day, it scares me to cry