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The plot moves very quickly, and there are two original forms, but the first 60 chapters are a bit streamlined, basically one monster in 2 chapters, and the battles are relatively frequent. Overall not bad. As for writing, you can continue to practice that thing, don't worry about it.

Big cheers for the author

Give yourself a good review too I don't have a soft heart, please leave a comment after reading it, don't criticize me directly. If you think there are any shortcomings, you can write it in the book review, I will read it, please 🙏