What Kind of Seele Is This? Black Seele Armor, Transform!

How should I put it, it's pretty good in fan fiction. Advantages: Xi'er and Hei hope don't have any OOC at present. Don't refute me by saying that the protagonist is too kind-hearted and won't reject others, because this is a bonus point for the protagonist. Bai hope is a good drinker when she grows up, and the story theme is also good. Problem: Some parts of the plot are a bit far-fetched. For example, the part where Hei hope wants to fight the god is really a bit poisonous. (But the attitudes of Bai hope and Hei hope towards both parties later make up for the poison.) The description of the fight scene is average. How can I put it this way? This book is at least much better than Changing Ganyu and March in One Piece.

It's okay, I like the front one better, but it feels like fighting all the time in the back. It would be nice to relax a little bit in daily life. It's too tight. Also, the protagonist's combat power is getting weaker and weaker. I feel like I'm 55 vs. Everyone, from gods to cannon fodder. I fight them all back and forth. It's too hard. 🤦

I have to say that Hei hope is indeed the strongest Xier chef, and it has been well received 👍

Not bad, okay, okay, okay

It gives me the feeling of watching Peppa Pig. If you are really bored, you can come and watch it.

It looks good, but Bai hope also needs a little Pava.

It looks good. I ate a big portion and ate too much, so I simply commented with these two words 🤦

It's so beautiful, please give it a thumbs up to the author

Stupid Heer. But if Kuroshie is there, it doesn't matter.

Looks good, the plot is also good