Fairy Put Down the Knife, I Really Am Not Dead Bai Yueguang

You can read it. It's much better than most of Tomato's simulation articles. This is your second time simulating a Taiji, right?

I actually wanted to give it four and a half stars, but unfortunately I didn't. It's not that the writing isn't good enough, it's pretty good compared to other texts of the same genre, but the author's simulation clearly feels like it could be polished a little better, and I think the writing power is sufficient. Personally, I think it may be that I have been dragged down by the so-called "main line" and want to go faster? But anyway, I think the highlight of this book is the simulation. Let's see how the author considers it.

Plain writing, sincere emotions. A newcomer has a newcomer's way of writing. The words may be naive and vulgar, but they can make people read clearly. I hope I can persist in writing it and I will always support it~(¯▽¯~)

The first story was a bit imperfect and had issues with emotional catharsis. I personally didn't like it, but I subconsciously continued reading the second story. It was very delicate and careful. Although it was a consistent routine, the emotional catharsis was very good and the viewing experience was very good. Therefore, the reason why this book has a low rating is that the first story was not well written and many people left it. But as a new book, it is still mainly about encouragement. Good luck, author! The second story is really well written, and if it can maintain this quality in the future, it will definitely get a rating of 9.2 And above. (But if possible, I still hope to go back and polish the first story, so that I really can't find any major flaws)

Now that I have seen the second simulation of the second life, the overall look is pretty good. The first simulation is more routine, and the second simulation is relatively rare in simulation texts. It combines some immortality settings, and adds reincarnation to make the story not too sad. You can see some shadows of Sister Nan. The author's writing style is good, but there are not many vernacular words. Unfortunately, there are still too few words at present. In addition, this book focuses on simulation. Currently, more chapters describe simulations rather than the real world. I like this kind of book, but everyone has their own preferences. If you also like to read mainly simulations, you can try it.

We must let more people come to Chi, the memory of Chi is still fresh [shy][smile] Chiwan, tell me how it tastes [laughs evilly]

It is indeed possible. It has the delicate writing style of female videos, but the plot is not shocking, it is very comfortable to watch, and the lyrical control is very good. The climax is not too exaggerated, and the light stomachache is very refreshing [blowing kiss]

I really like this kind of semi-female video, delicate emotions, good writing style, come on author [like]

Finished reading. Update soon. This book feels good. Although the overall content is similar to those simulation articles. But the advantage is that the description of the characters is relatively full and the emotions are also very delicate. I didn't feel bored after reading the latest chapter. For me, an old bookworm, this is a good novel. Updates are super slow. He obviously traveled back with the memory of the ending. I feel like I have lost my memory as I write. Every time I write about reincarnation, it is like being separated from the previous article. The more I look at it, the less interesting it becomes. Abandoned.

But after writing 200 chapters, the main plot is not advanced. It is all about simulation. The simulation is to assist the main plot to make the main plot more interesting. The three simulations can be regarded as three short stories, but they are the same novel. There is no main plot, and there is a strong sense of fragmentation. It is not enjoyable to read. It is a pity to simulate in the first place, and the supporting female characters in the simulation are not well written. It's so good but I don't want to accept it. To be honest, the author's writing is fine and the plot is okay. If it can be written normally like other simulations, it will definitely be great. Don't make a supporting actress who is very good and then refuse to accept it. Moreover, the simulation is a pity. It's really like seeing reality to make up for it, otherwise I won't feel comfortable after watching 200 pictures.

Maybe the writing in the first few chapters is a little rough and deliberately sensational. But the plot behind it is fascinating and the writing improves. This kind of light narrative and detailed emotional description are tens of thousands of times better than the lower body thinking of those inexplicable novels. The author will update soon!

A good book. It's good to have a longer simulation. You can understand where the emotions come from. Most of Tomato's other simulations have been briefly mentioned. After writing a few reincarnations, several female protagonists appeared, and then the Shura Field. I stopped updating it after writing it. There is nothing wrong with being longer.

You can take a look at the book shortage. The biggest shortcoming at present is that the update is too slow. The memory of the Empress III is probably guaranteed to be 50 chapters, and the author updates it twice a day. I can only say that it is far from being a river of blood. I just flipped through the table of contents and found that the second simulation started from Chapter 30 to Chapter 70 or so of the Empress' Second Life. Not to mention the third life. It seems that this second simulation will have more than a hundred chapters? It's a bit too boring, but this is also a common problem with imitation writing. If the author can't speed up the update or speed up the simulation rhythm, I estimate that this book is not far from being a hit, with a score of about 8.3 At most. Up to now, the second simulation of the second life of the empress has not been completed, and there is no solution for the human emperor body. If the author works harder, he can write the second simulation until the Chinese New Year. The only thing I praise now is that the second simulation is emotionally delicate. After all, it has taken 60 chapters to describe it. Now my only motivation to follow this book is to see when the author will finish writing the second simulation [smile]

It's pretty good. The second simulation is indeed quite long, but I think it's actually pretty good-looking. However, compared with the length of the first simulation, the first heroine seems like an outsider. After reading the second simulation, I even forgot the name of the first heroine [face covering]

At present, it seems that the second simulation is much better than the first. I guess the low score is because I was persuaded to quit the first simulation (the physical strength during the tribulation period was a bit too low). It is very routine, but it is still watchable. I suggest that there be some senior sister scenes in the future. The protagonist owes his senior sister a lot. [Crying] Senior sister is the true love; the second simulation was much better, the setting of the longevity novel, the chapters are very long, I have read (updated) to chapter 139, the second week is not completely over yet, according to the plot Ruoxi should have up to three lives, I think this third life can be abbreviated or not Write, return to reality after the second world, let them meet in reality, focus on writing about the simulated world while also writing some plots in the real world, otherwise you will almost forget Caili (there is also an assist NPC Yan Huo which is also very interesting), and the time flow rate is unreasonable , a flow rate of 100:1, decades have passed since the second simulation, which means that Caili found the protagonist in reality and searched for him for several years after his disappearance [face covering] Furthermore, I hope Ruoxi (Xi) can awaken her past life memories, otherwise I always feel bad for Ruoxi. To sum up, I am very optimistic about this book. I will start to read it, and I will click on it every day to remind myself of updates or read a book called "Power Generation for Love". [Learned]

I like watching small daily routines, it's quite comfortable to watch Their shortcoming is that the second simulation takes a long time, because it will definitely not be that fast to write two lives of the heroine. The first one is a traditional female channel, which is much easier to write, so it is faster.

After reading it, the second simulation was very long, but reading it in one go was one of the few novels that I read so smoothly on Tomato. There were flaws, such as the second simulation of the heroine's behavior of holding back. The correct answer should be to understand her own weakness. Also, at the beginning of the second simulation, the heroine and her parents knew that the hero was an immortal, but later it seemed that they had forgotten the setting. Summary: Although it has shortcomings, it looks very smooth and comfortable. I still like it very much. There are no other big shortcomings except that it is not good enough, and there are no uncomfortable poisonous points. It is still very good. Keep working hard [learn it]

Good-looking, super good-looking. The emotions are too delicate. Although the second heroine's story is a little longer, the content is exquisite and the story has good coherence. Compared to the short story of the first heroine, I still prefer the long story. The writing is delicate and gentle. I can't stop reading it. It's not enough, it's not enough at all. The author is great, please update it quickly [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

The writing is really good and interesting. And the writing style is really delicate now. The first simulation only has more than 20 chapters, and the second simulation has more than 120 chapters and has not yet been finished. The more I read, the more boring I become. I might as well write a separate book and write the second simulation.

I think this is one of the best novels with a single female protagonist that I have read in Tomato. I read it in one afternoon. Although the title says it has multiple female protagonists, it looks the same as a single female protagonist. It reminds me of those novels about immortality from a long time ago. It's really good.

Comments after watching: This drama is really good to watch, especially when Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for Diao Chan for hundreds of rounds, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring scraping + Noxus' guillotine, this wave of M4 Shooting six times will result in death. In addition, I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at Sun Wukong knocking him to death with three sticks. All in all, all in all, this drama has an interesting plot, a clear system, a lot of foreshadowing, the fighting scenes are like being there, and the characters are well described! The simulation time is too long, brother.

The simulation is well written and there are no big surprises. Very well written.

It's really a fine product. I've been out of food for several days and both men and women can watch it. The male protagonist's romantic perspective is very delicate and emotional. I've watched so many male videos that it's really a breath of fresh air.

In the simulation genre, there are knives and enthusiasm. The writing is very good and the driving is not random. In my mind, it is already on the ceiling of simulation novels. I hope it will continue like this in the future and there will be more updates. It is too uncomfortable to whet your appetite. Come on, author, I hope the subsequent simulations won't be too long. The second simulation was a bit too long. I hope the author can update it more hahahaha I can only read it from the beginning

Overall, the second simulation was better written than the first, and the emotions were very delicate, but some unnecessary plots could be deleted appropriately. I don't hate slow pace and long stories, I simply hate plots. (Whether there are some plots or not has no impact on the story.)

To be honest, I think this book deserves at least a nine in Tomato. As for those who say that the reincarnation of three lives is too long, it may be because they have read too many fast-food-style novels. You know, if each simulation only has ten or twenty chapters, then only the plot is written. In this way, the readers will not have much affection for the characters. If the simulation is done two or three times at most, the readers will lose their pursuit of this kind of writing, lose the freshness, and quit. It is said to be a simulation, but it is different from previous simulation articles. This article has more autonomy. Each simulation is not a boring narration that separates the protagonist, but the protagonist's own choices and experiences. This creates a more vivid image of each character. Some people say that the author's writing style needs to be improved. To be honest, the author's writing style is already pretty good among Tomatoes. At least this kind of grasp of the plot and the ability to portray the characters and emotions have only been seen in novels of the level of "The End of the Day". Some people say that some irrelevant things can be deleted in the secondary simulation. I think that if there are no bits and pieces of life, how can the vivid image come from? If these small details are lost, the beauty will be lost. Some people may refute me, maybe because they have different opinions, but I think it is more likely that this kind of people have adapted to the fast-paced life. In addition, Tomato has been advocating fast-paced and cool articles in recent years, which makes this article somewhat strange. But my suggestion is that you should calm down and read this article. At least I tried it twice. I don't have a single glance or ten lines in the sketch. I try to integrate emotions to understand the feelings of the characters. From the perspective of us who have a God's perspective, the protagonist has a simulation system, so Qin Ruoxi and the others feel that their feelings are not very touching, but if they are put into it and they don't know, then these feelings will feel sincere. Some people may be in noisy places such as subways, buses, public places, etc., Which makes them unable to calm down while reading. Naturally, they feel that this article is long-winded and protracted. Why not try to be alone and calm down? In the fast-food style of refreshing articles, this kind of article is a breath of fresh air. Finally, for those who read the article first and read the comments, my advice is not to be influenced by others, but to rely on your own opinions. There are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand people. Maybe the verbosity in the eyes of others can actually reflect the author's intentions and the emotions of the characters to you, so you might as well read it and see how it goes... Regarding the update speed, it is one chapter a day. I read it and found that one chapter has an average of about 4,000 words, which is actually two chapters. But for this book, it is indeed a bit slow. There is nothing to say, especially many people think that the plot is slow, so the author needs to update it faster. So, author, come on [blowing kiss] I hope the update will not be interrupted... [Grievance]

The emotional line is very delicate and can be seen in reality. I can't get enough of it. Please update it soon. When I saw Qin Ruoxi, I found that the simulation was not finished, so I wanted to read it, but it turned out that he had been keeping it for more than two months and had not finished it yet. It was really 78 years old. In fact, if you are like this, you can not make it into a simulation paper and just give Qin Ruoxi a separate copy, otherwise it will torture the readers🤪😂

I won't talk about the first flight through the tribulation. The first simulation was 28 from the beginning to the end of the first chapter. Then the second simulation I looked at the simulation (with three lives) that was only two-thirds of a hundred chapters long and fell into deep thought. The writing in the simulation was okay, but you can definitely use this second simulation as a short article.

It's okay, the plot is a little vulgar, but it's still good to watch. The writing is a bit deliberate, but the characterization makes up for it very well. The historical knowledge is average, I have some understanding but not deep, it's just superficial. In summary, as a seasonal novel, it is average and edible. The back part looks a bit like a female video

The first article can only be said to be average, but the second volume of the Empress chapter is really good. Because I always read cool articles on Tomato, it is really special to see such emotionally delicate articles occasionally. The story about Qin Ruoxi and Jiang Che is over, and the Qingmei chapter is a bit unbearable. Maybe the Empress II is portrayed too well, but I still like this kind of story. It is not the movement of flags, not the movement of wind, but the movement of the heart of a benevolent person.