[This is a thunderous novel, relaxed and invincible, the author is Wei Dian]
[CP official version, the plot is relatively harmonious, please treat it as a parallel world without conspiracy theories]
[Warm reminder 1: The author of some plots may create new people if they get too excited]
2：
If Naruto had eaten well since childhood, Sasuke had not experienced the night of genocide, Hinata had become Naruto's childhood sweetheart, and Rock Lee had not been banned after the battle with Gaara... Then what would the world be like?
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Note that this man's name is Hinata Natsu, Naruto and Sasuke's master.
A former earthling, his current occupation is the seventh elder of the largest sect in China and the elder of the Konoha Hyuga family in the Hokage plane.
The reason is that when Hinata Xia was traveling abroad, she was plotted and besieged by the evil sect. In desperation, she forcibly used space escape to escape and accidentally came to the world of Naruto.
An old man who claimed to be the Immortal of Six Paths stopped him and said that he hoped he would stay and help the children of destiny in this world resist foreign invasion. He would be greatly thanked after the deed was accomplished.
However, Hinata Xia's focus was not on the Son of Destiny and the so-called Chong Xie, but asked:
"What did you just call me?"
"Hmm? My little friend, what's wrong?"
"How old are you this year?"
"This... I didn't calculate it carefully, it's about a thousand years."
"How dare you call me little friend when you are a thousand years old? If this were in my house, the dogs wouldn't be able to transform themselves."
"You..."
"What are you calling me grandpa?"
"Scream quickly."
Reader comments
This book is really good, especially the description of Lu Bu's fight for Mink
Cicada and Sun Wukong fought for hundreds of rounds, but Xue Baochai was too
Stronger, if it weren't for Noshou's outer ring + Noxus break
Headquarters, this wave of M4 six times strafing will kill you. Other than that, I
I appreciate what Zhuge Liang said about the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain.
Saying "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang" 1 performance
Out of Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey beating him to death with three sticks, in short
In short, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings1
The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are spot on!
The writing of this book is excellent, the plot is touching, and the ending is unexpected.
The content is resonant and thought-provoking, the plot is interesting, and the characters
Vivid, clear system, numerous foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are as if
In this situation, the author depicts the human heart in detail, especially
When describing the gourd boy going to save the Transformers, Sun Wukong's inner excitement
The excitement and fear are vividly displayed. I am the only one who feels that Wu
Is it right to kill Qiao Feng loosely? If Jia Baoyu hadn't stopped Zhang Wuji, Yang
How could Guan Yu cut off his hand? Neither can Zhuge Liang
Shangsi Guoya and Linghu Chong occupy the mountain as king, etc. In short, this
The plot of this book is interesting.
Good reviews without breaking the CP, good reviews for the relaxed atmosphere, no bad reviews, and everyone has their own characteristics [laughing][laughing][laughing]
I originally read the Naruto story, which was only seven points long, and wanted to take a rough look at what it was about. Unexpectedly, after reading about a hundred chapters, it turned out to be surprisingly interesting.
The world view setting is quite interesting. As for the OOC characters, because they interfered with the plot, they are very different from the original Naruto plot development, so their existence is reasonable. Moreover, this author will die if he fails to connect a plot. The writing is good, I give it five stars, I hope the quality can be maintained.
Very well written! The writing style is interesting and sometimes makes you laugh unconsciously [staring]
This is the first Naruto fanfic that doesn't feature Naruto Hinata and I watched it word for word. Lao Xia's voice always takes me back to the time when I was pursuing immortal literature. It makes people feel very warm. The feeling of being covered by someone is really refreshing!
In the ending, the author carefully wrote the plot of Kaguya becoming human step by step, and it was very good! I just feel so miserable. I always want to see Naru Hina and I active [crying][crying][crying]
Come on, author! ! I hope you will create more beautiful works!
"Naruto: The Sage Master of Team Seven is Super Protective"/"Naruto: My Sister is the Crown Princess of Konoha"
The plot is very novel and not too cliche. After reading so many fanfics, this Naruto fanfic can be ranked in the top three [Like] I will probably go to the world of immortality in the future, and then I can write a lot more. Come on, the author, it is more sincere and interesting. I have read it recently and I have the desire to follow it [Admiration]
It's okay, it's okay. The protagonist is from a sect that cultivates immortals. Most of them are people who ascended from the earth. From the description, the protagonist is quite strong. From what the author posted in the comment area, the heroine's name is Hanabi. No one has been seen yet.
It is indeed creative and very interesting. Just when you think Naruto stories are bad, there is always an author who can write a more creative Naruto story.
Is it because I don't understand Naruto's plot thoroughly enough? I feel like I couldn't understand it from the first time Obito drove the heretic golem. I feel like the author added a lot of private settings. But the book is still good.
I'm so happy to have found the second fanfic that I like so much. The first one is about Death and it's more about daily life. What a coincidence. I've been reading this fanfic for so long. In fact, I'm tired of watching the fanfic with various abilities and systems and following the plot. I just need to read some invincible starts and then modify the plot to satisfy my regrets. The ending of everyone making dumplings, and the dumplings with daily fillings that are funny and funny are my favorites, so what else can I say. If the author can read it, I still hope to have time to write two chapters of the story of Sasuke and Boruto returning to the original world line. It would be even better if Uchiha Hikaru appears [Blow kiss]
This is a good-looking book. I personally don't like male protagonists who break out of genres, but this one is just within the scope of what I can accept. It's rare for an author to string together the plot just right, and finally it's not a novel that just plays with awkward plots.
The most unexpected thing for me was writing about Zuo Ying's emotional line. I didn't expect that one day I would find them both a bit sweet [laughs]
It's pretty good-looking, with no conspiracy theories. It uses a higher-dimensional power system to maintain it. It's not like some time-travelers who don't interfere with the development of the main line at all. I like the relaxed plot of happy endings [Blow kiss]
It's a really enjoyable and non-revealing book. The author is also very active. Although the characters are a little OOC, it's overall very relaxing. I don't recommend reading it with a local cook. One of the four stars is because the author is too proud, and the other is to control the points.
There are a lot of jokes in a small amount of text, which is very suitable for a fun-loving person like me👀
Eat, it's delicious, please order more.
Very nice Naruto story! I hope it's not a eunuch just after I found him [crying]
I like it very much. I have read a lot of fanfics, but I think this one is the most special one I have read. There is no conspiracy theory (here refers to the third generation old man), and it also allows me to see a different Saya and Toneri. In short, I like this very much. I like it very much.
A very interesting novel
No, why is it so beautiful? Why didn't the author write earlier? Www, it's not enough. I want more. When will the rating go up?
This is my favorite genre. I hope to change from Naruto to comprehensive comics and save other tragic Japanese comic protagonists.
Yes, it's quite good. It's very comfortable to read during the book shortage period.
Hao Kang, and the prison is very comfortable
The Thunder article written by the author of Thunder is very thunder👍
Thank you Laodong for letting me see another way to move in the world of Naruto [laughing] Love it, love it
You're right, but Naruto is a side-scrolling fighting game developed by Rubik's Cube Studio. I forgot about the middle and the end.
Not bad, watchable. 7 Points is not the upper limit of the book. The quality of this book can probably be rated as 9.3 Points by me [I learned it]
Very appetizing and beautiful!
Yoxi yoxi yoxi yoxi yoxi yoxi yoxi
I came here with the intention of reading a novel about prison points. The result is nothing out of the ordinary (I don't know if I came too late [laughing]). It's a very healing novel. There are no swords in the whole text. When the Tulin Party goes out, turn right. Is it the last 55?
Come on, come on, come on! It's a super good-looking fanfic, the characters are well created, and the plot is also super good. I can't wait for the update!
I've read Chapter 8. Now let's look at the compound title. It's a cool article. There's no conspiracy theory. I'm looking forward to seeing how the daily writing goes. I'll come back and write a review later [Chigua]
The current 61 genocide time period is the reverse genocide Danzo side. The protagonist himself does not take action. He prefers to cultivate the protagonist group behind the scenes. It is not about teaching immortality every second. It can be written daily. There is nothing high-energy. It is more about making fun of [Eating Melon]. If it is good or not, it depends on the style you like. For me, it is okay to listen if I am bored. I don't particularly want to continue listening. It is more because I haven't found a good novel.
This book is really good, especially the description of Lu Bu's fight for Mink Cicada and Sun Wukong fought for hundreds of rounds, but Xue Baochai was too Stronger, if it weren't for Noshou's outer ring + Noxus break Headquarters, this wave of M4 six times strafing will kill you. Other than that, I I appreciate what Zhuge Liang said about the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain. Saying "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang" 1 performance Out of Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey beating him to death with three sticks, in short In short, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings1 The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are spot on! The writing of this book is excellent, the plot is touching, and the ending is unexpected. The content is resonant and thought-provoking, the plot is interesting, and the characters Vivid, clear system, numerous foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are as if In this situation, the author depicts the human heart in detail, especially When describing the gourd boy going to save the Transformers, Sun Wukong's inner excitement The excitement and fear are vividly displayed. I am the only one who feels that Wu Is it right to kill Qiao Feng loosely? If Jia Baoyu hadn't stopped Zhang Wuji, Yang How could Guan Yu cut off his hand? Neither can Zhuge Liang Shangsi Guoya and Linghu Chong occupy the mountain as king, etc. In short, this The plot of this book is interesting.
Good reviews without breaking the CP, good reviews for the relaxed atmosphere, no bad reviews, and everyone has their own characteristics [laughing][laughing][laughing]
I originally read the Naruto story, which was only seven points long, and wanted to take a rough look at what it was about. Unexpectedly, after reading about a hundred chapters, it turned out to be surprisingly interesting. The world view setting is quite interesting. As for the OOC characters, because they interfered with the plot, they are very different from the original Naruto plot development, so their existence is reasonable. Moreover, this author will die if he fails to connect a plot. The writing is good, I give it five stars, I hope the quality can be maintained.
Very well written! The writing style is interesting and sometimes makes you laugh unconsciously [staring] This is the first Naruto fanfic that doesn't feature Naruto Hinata and I watched it word for word. Lao Xia's voice always takes me back to the time when I was pursuing immortal literature. It makes people feel very warm. The feeling of being covered by someone is really refreshing! In the ending, the author carefully wrote the plot of Kaguya becoming human step by step, and it was very good! I just feel so miserable. I always want to see Naru Hina and I active [crying][crying][crying] Come on, author! ! I hope you will create more beautiful works! "Naruto: The Sage Master of Team Seven is Super Protective"/"Naruto: My Sister is the Crown Princess of Konoha"
The plot is very novel and not too cliche. After reading so many fanfics, this Naruto fanfic can be ranked in the top three [Like] I will probably go to the world of immortality in the future, and then I can write a lot more. Come on, the author, it is more sincere and interesting. I have read it recently and I have the desire to follow it [Admiration]
It's okay, it's okay. The protagonist is from a sect that cultivates immortals. Most of them are people who ascended from the earth. From the description, the protagonist is quite strong. From what the author posted in the comment area, the heroine's name is Hanabi. No one has been seen yet.
It is indeed creative and very interesting. Just when you think Naruto stories are bad, there is always an author who can write a more creative Naruto story.
Is it because I don't understand Naruto's plot thoroughly enough? I feel like I couldn't understand it from the first time Obito drove the heretic golem. I feel like the author added a lot of private settings. But the book is still good.
I'm so happy to have found the second fanfic that I like so much. The first one is about Death and it's more about daily life. What a coincidence. I've been reading this fanfic for so long. In fact, I'm tired of watching the fanfic with various abilities and systems and following the plot. I just need to read some invincible starts and then modify the plot to satisfy my regrets. The ending of everyone making dumplings, and the dumplings with daily fillings that are funny and funny are my favorites, so what else can I say. If the author can read it, I still hope to have time to write two chapters of the story of Sasuke and Boruto returning to the original world line. It would be even better if Uchiha Hikaru appears [Blow kiss]
This is a good-looking book. I personally don't like male protagonists who break out of genres, but this one is just within the scope of what I can accept. It's rare for an author to string together the plot just right, and finally it's not a novel that just plays with awkward plots. The most unexpected thing for me was writing about Zuo Ying's emotional line. I didn't expect that one day I would find them both a bit sweet [laughs]
It's pretty good-looking, with no conspiracy theories. It uses a higher-dimensional power system to maintain it. It's not like some time-travelers who don't interfere with the development of the main line at all. I like the relaxed plot of happy endings [Blow kiss]
It's a really enjoyable and non-revealing book. The author is also very active. Although the characters are a little OOC, it's overall very relaxing. I don't recommend reading it with a local cook. One of the four stars is because the author is too proud, and the other is to control the points.
There are a lot of jokes in a small amount of text, which is very suitable for a fun-loving person like me👀
Eat, it's delicious, please order more.
Very nice Naruto story! I hope it's not a eunuch just after I found him [crying]
I like it very much. I have read a lot of fanfics, but I think this one is the most special one I have read. There is no conspiracy theory (here refers to the third generation old man), and it also allows me to see a different Saya and Toneri. In short, I like this very much. I like it very much.
A very interesting novel
No, why is it so beautiful? Why didn't the author write earlier? Www, it's not enough. I want more. When will the rating go up?
This is my favorite genre. I hope to change from Naruto to comprehensive comics and save other tragic Japanese comic protagonists.
Yes, it's quite good. It's very comfortable to read during the book shortage period.
Hao Kang, and the prison is very comfortable
The Thunder article written by the author of Thunder is very thunder👍
Thank you Laodong for letting me see another way to move in the world of Naruto [laughing] Love it, love it
You're right, but Naruto is a side-scrolling fighting game developed by Rubik's Cube Studio. I forgot about the middle and the end.
Not bad, watchable. 7 Points is not the upper limit of the book. The quality of this book can probably be rated as 9.3 Points by me [I learned it]
Very appetizing and beautiful!
Yoxi yoxi yoxi yoxi yoxi yoxi yoxi
I came here with the intention of reading a novel about prison points. The result is nothing out of the ordinary (I don't know if I came too late [laughing]). It's a very healing novel. There are no swords in the whole text. When the Tulin Party goes out, turn right. Is it the last 55?
Come on, come on, come on! It's a super good-looking fanfic, the characters are well created, and the plot is also super good. I can't wait for the update!
I've read Chapter 8. Now let's look at the compound title. It's a cool article. There's no conspiracy theory. I'm looking forward to seeing how the daily writing goes. I'll come back and write a review later [Chigua] The current 61 genocide time period is the reverse genocide Danzo side. The protagonist himself does not take action. He prefers to cultivate the protagonist group behind the scenes. It is not about teaching immortality every second. It can be written daily. There is nothing high-energy. It is more about making fun of [Eating Melon]. If it is good or not, it depends on the style you like. For me, it is okay to listen if I am bored. I don't particularly want to continue listening. It is more because I haven't found a good novel.