[A wild, lighthearted, overpowered story. The author is a little unhinged.]
[Canon pairings, a fairly harmonious plot. Please read it as a parallel world with no conspiracy theories.]
[Friendly reminder 1: The author may get carried away with some scenes and emotionally wreck you.]
[Friendly reminder 2: The author is in a perfectly good state of mind, hehehehehehehehehe.]
What would this world be like if Naruto had eaten properly as a child, Sasuke had never gone through the Uchiha massacre, Hinata had grown up as Naruto's childhood friend, and Rock Lee hadn't been forced to retire after his battle with Gaara?
Take a look. This man is Hinata Natsu, Naruto and Sasuke's mentor.
He was originally from Earth, and now serves as the seventh elder of the greatest sect in Shenzhou and the grand elder of the Hyuga Clan in Konoha, in the Hokage world.
It all began when Hinata Natsu was ambushed by a wicked sect while traveling abroad. In desperation, he forced his way through a space-time escape technique and accidentally ended up in the Naruto world.
An old man calling himself the Sage of Six Paths stopped him and said he hoped Hinata Natsu would stay and help this world's child of destiny fight off an invasion by outsiders. He promised a generous reward once the job was done.
But Hinata Natsu wasn't interested in the child of destiny or the promised reward. Instead, he asked:
“What did you just call me?”
“Hm? Young friend. Why?”
“How old are you?”
“Well... I haven't counted carefully, but I suppose I'm about a thousand years old.”
“You're a thousand years old and you still call me young friend? Back home, even the dogs haven't quite finished taking human form at that age.”
“You...”
“What do you mean, ‘you’? Call me Grandpa.”
“Come on, say it.”
This book is really good, especially the description of Lu Bu's fight for Mink Cicada and Sun Wukong fought for hundreds of rounds, but Xue Baochai was too Stronger, if it weren't for Noshou's outer ring + Noxus break Headquarters, this wave of M4 six times strafing will kill you. Other than that, I I appreciate what Zhuge Liang said about the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain. Saying "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang" 1 performance Out of Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey beating him to death with three sticks, in short In short, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings1 The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are spot on! The writing of this book is excellent, the plot is touching, and the ending is unexpected. The content is resonant and thought-provoking, the plot is interesting, and the characters Vivid, clear system, numerous foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are as if In this situation, the author depicts the human heart in detail, especially When describing the gourd boy going to save the Transformers, Sun Wukong's inner excitement The excitement and fear are vividly displayed. I am the only one who feels that Wu Is it right to kill Qiao Feng loosely? If Jia Baoyu hadn't stopped Zhang Wuji, Yang How could Guan Yu cut off his hand? Neither can Zhuge Liang Shangsi Guoya and Linghu Chong occupy the mountain as king, etc. In short, this The plot of this book is interesting.
Good reviews without breaking the CP, good reviews for the relaxed atmosphere, no bad reviews, and everyone has their own characteristics 🤭🤭🤭
I originally read the Naruto story, which was only seven points long, and wanted to take a rough look at what it was about. Unexpectedly, after reading about a hundred chapters, it turned out to be surprisingly interesting. The world view setting is quite interesting. As for the OOC characters, because they interfered with the plot, they are very different from the original Naruto plot development, so their existence is reasonable. Moreover, this author will die if he fails to connect a plot. The writing is good, I give it five stars, I hope the quality can be maintained.
Very well written! The writing style is interesting and sometimes makes you laugh unconsciously [staring] This is the first Naruto fanfic that doesn't feature Naruto Hinata and I watched it word for word. Lao Xia's voice always takes me back to the time when I was pursuing immortal literature. It makes people feel very warm. The feeling of being covered by someone is really refreshing! In the ending, the author carefully wrote the plot of Kaguya becoming human step by step, and it was very good! I just feel so miserable. I always want to see Naru Hina and I active 😢😢😢 Come on, author!! I hope you will create more beautiful works! "Naruto: The Sage Master of Team Seven is Super Protective"/"Naruto: My Sister is the Crown Princess of Konoha"
The plot is very novel and not too cliche. After reading so many fanfics, this Naruto fanfic can be ranked in the top three 👍 I will probably go to the world of immortality in the future, and then I can write a lot more. Come on, the author, it is more sincere and interesting. I have read it recently and I have the desire to follow it [Admiration]
It's okay, it's okay. The protagonist is from a sect that cultivates immortals. Most of them are people who ascended from the earth. From the description, the protagonist is quite strong. From what the author posted in the comment area, the heroine's name is Hanabi. No one has been seen yet.
It is indeed creative and very interesting. Just when you think Naruto stories are bad, there is always an author who can write a more creative Naruto story.
I'm so happy to have found the second fanfic that I like so much. The first one is about Death and it's more about daily life. What a coincidence. I've been reading this fanfic for so long. In fact, I'm tired of watching the fanfic with various abilities and systems and following the plot. I just need to read some invincible starts and then modify the plot to satisfy my regrets. The ending of everyone making dumplings, and the dumplings with daily fillings that are funny and funny are my favorites, so what else can I say. If the author can read it, I still hope to have time to write two chapters of the story of Sasuke and Boruto returning to the original world line. It would be even better if Uchiha Hikaru appears [Blow kiss]
Is it because I don't understand Naruto's plot thoroughly enough? I feel like I couldn't understand it from the first time Obito drove the heretic golem. I feel like the author added a lot of private settings. But the book is still good.
This is a good-looking book. I personally don't like male protagonists who break out of genres, but this one is just within the scope of what I can accept. It's rare for an author to string together the plot just right, and finally it's not a novel that just plays with awkward plots. The most unexpected thing for me was writing about Zuo Ying's emotional line. I didn't expect that one day I would find them both a bit sweet 😄