The SSS-Level School Beauty Was Spurned, I Made a Contract with My Life

This is the best novel I have ever read [Adoration]. The plot is very good and I can talk about two or three scenes in one battle. He can be called the boss of the water number world [Adoration]. I would like to call him the strongest water number number one [Like] [Like] [Like] 7-star recommendation. He is also a boss in the world of pretense, and he is very good at pretending [Like] [Like]

Chapter 18 Suggestions for modification @ emmmm The foreshadowing in the first 17 chapters was pretty good, but at the critical moment of the contract in Chapter 18, I suddenly felt discouraged. Everyone knows that the male and female protagonists go in both directions and are sincere, but the female protagonist's spiritual skills and her personality, after the male protagonist appears and is gentle, During the period before the contract, the female protagonist should have an inner struggle, such as "My weapon spirit will hurt you", and then the male protagonist will resolve this concern. There is very little text about this struggle in the article, which has caused many people to feel uncomfortable (you can see it in the comment area)

Yes, it's very enjoyable to write. Some places may be a little awkward. It gives people the feeling that I wrote it for myself, but it's not important. I'm a local dog and I like to read [laughs][laughs][laughs]

Shuangshuang Tianhu started the game and pushed horizontally at this moment! ! !

It's good to read. Don't finish it now. Write more than 100 or 200 chapters. It's very interesting. It's great that you can be the second most popular book on this subject in my bookshelf. Keep writing. Also, can there be more? It's so hard that I have to save up for two weeks before I can watch it to my heart's content. Can there be more? Be careful if I send you a knife!

No, buddy, it's a miracle that it didn't die after playing like this. [Smile]

It's a classic short story, but even this is better than 60% of Tomato's books. Although the writing is mediocre, the most important thing is that there are not so many disgusting links in other novels.

It's still watchable at the lower-middle level.

The writing style is a bit immature, but the content is still good [currently in progress]

Relaxed and happy plot, men and women are a little bit strong

It's really beautiful

The plot is flawless

Looks good, hope it doesn't collapse

So cool, so pretty

It's beautiful, the characters are very detailed

Good, good, good, good, look good

After looking at it, I think it's okay. Let's give it five stars first. We'll see what happens later

It's been a long time since I've seen such an upright and awe-inspiring novel. The part where the heroine criticizes her family was really fun. The hero's name is also very elegant. Qin

Not bad, I hope it won't stop updating. I feel like the writing is getting better and better.

A good novel, both enjoyable and frustrating at the same time

Overall, it's good, but I feel that the early plot is a bit tight and far-fetched, but it doesn't affect the viewing experience(￣￣)

The combination of knife and medium looks good to me