Beng Tie: That Blue-Haired Girl Next Door Always Wants to Conquer Me

It's nice to read, and for novice fan authors, there's no need to take fairy tales with too much salt. The current shortcoming is that the protagonist is too perfect and may be broken when it collapses, which means it is not easy to use the knife. The author can work hard to break the strong inner city~ It's quite sweet, it's great, you can buy it. Among the Bengtie fanfics, this book may not be very popular, but as long as there is more marketing, it will definitely become popular, and it is estimated that it can reach 9.5 (Estimate). Anyway, it looks good, please update soon. Novice writers usually have a common problem: the descriptions of big foreshadowing and major case settings may be too eye-catching, and they want to deliberately express the uniqueness and mystery of the book. However, if the foreshadowing and settings are too cliche, it will easily bore the readers. You can compress the highlights and key points that you want to express, and don't overdo it. The rain and dew will be the same. The foreshadowing should be written with a sense of mystery, and the foreshadowing can be written inconspicuously, but it can hook the readers. Of course, our Lao Tomato does not require novices. If you really want to make progress (Bushi), then write more books and read more books. This may not be of much use, but at least it can increase your skills a little bit, which is also a bit of meat. Anyway, come on! If something goes wrong, I'll come back and change the book's rating to one star! This is what you have to write yourself. It can be seen that the author is very passionate. If you can't write well, then just wait for it to be defeated by Super! ! @ Pigeon

The writing style is quite good and the plot is quite enjoyable. It is a rare masterpiece. Finally, the author's mother, please update me more. If there is no update, Oniga, Wadaxi [crying]

This book has received mixed reviews. But I think this book is well written! First of all, the author's treatment of the character Song Jiang is novel and unique. This completely broke Song Jiang's previous style of obeying Tang Monk's advice. Tang Seng is not like before, always chatting with Lin Daiyu and not doing his job properly. Secondly, the description of the battle between Xiahou Dun and Xu Sanduo is extremely accurate and lifelike. Completely subverting Xu Sanduo's sinister XL image in our minds. Moreover, Xiahou Dun did not have a crush on Hua Qiangu from the beginning as in the original work, but only after experiencing Mei Changsu's transference and separation, sparks sparked with her. The logic of the plot becomes mellow because of this The only drawback is that the emotional scenes are too abrupt. I have something to say about this: Why do you confess directly? 😨This is not what is written in Marxist philosophy at all! ! Love is not an abstract spiritual hobby, nor an emotional suspension divorced from reality, but a practical relationship under specific historical conditions - it is an essential connection between people formed in material production and social interaction, with objective inevitability, and is definitely not an accidental burst of subjective imagination! 😤😤😤 You must first prove the practical nature of love: it is not a one-way projection of consciousness onto reality, but a two-way construction of "intersubjectivity" - your heartbeat cannot stay at the level of thinking, but must be transformed into concrete actions to transform the objective reality of "our relationship". Through care at the material level, empathy at the spiritual level, and responsibility at the practical level, a dialectical leap of "knowledge-practice-re-understanding-re-practice" is completed. 🤓

The protagonist spent 120 minutes, flicked the fishing rod 951 times, and caught 7 Heisei.

It is quite well written and can be regarded as a masterpiece among the Bengtie fanfics. The only shortcoming is that it is still too little and not satisfying, but considering that there are three updates a day, it can be ignored. At present, it seems that it is a dual heroine and Cerydra. The emotional description of Haisein is very delicate and sweet, but the score is a bit low. I personally think it should be at least 9 points or above, but I believe it will gradually increase in the future. Good luck, author^ω^

From the perspective of watching 5000 hours of "experience", it is very good. For fans of Bengtie, it has a dull "sense of redemption". The characters are also well drawn and fit the original characters in the game. The portrayal of the protagonist is also perfect, without the inhuman indifference of a genius. The only thing about this book is that it has too few words. It looks good, I love reading it, I will update more.

The five stars are to prevent being hidden. Thank you to the two Shennongs in the comment area for reminding me. I will add something here. If you want to read this book, you can read Chapter 185 first. If you can accept it, you can read it. I really regret reading this book.

There were a few minor problems in the early stage, but they weren't major. The plot was okay, and the characters basically didn't collapse. It's just that Haiseyin shouldn't be so unemotional. Then there were some minor problems with the protagonist, which was a bit disconnected, but for me I could ignore it. Generally speaking, the more I write, the better I get, and I hope to keep it up in the future!

Very good, there are basically no problems with the character creation, and the original characters are basically non-ooc, but the plot is a bit bland, I hope there will be a climax later. Also, if I'm writing the if line, the epic fire-chasing scene, despair, and rescue are not easy to write, but I'm looking forward to it. Come on

After reading it, I think this book is a very well-written fan work. There are no poisonous points in the text, and the author writes very delicately on the emotional line, especially the relationship between the male protagonist and the two female protagonists. In my opinion, this book can score 8.5 To 9.0. I don't understand why it only scores 7.5. There are also some holes that the author has not filled in in this book. For example, what is the relationship between the male protagonist's sister and Ke? But these are not problems. Overall, I highly recommend everyone to read this book. It is really beautiful. Finally, I hope that the author can write better and better and bring us better works [blowing kiss]

The writing is quite good, but I didn't like the plot of giving away a girl, so I ran away. Although the reason was that, I still prefer to accept it decisively if I like it, instead of writing a story that looks like the protagonist must not be married suddenly later.

The writing style is very comfortable, and it is a very good article. However, some of the proper nouns of Star Iron are a little loose. Senatos is changed into Thanatos, which really affects the perception. After all, this is Ompharos and not ancient Greece. For the plot-oriented audience, it is a very awkward feeling, awkward and a bit uncomfortable. Of course, there are no problems with anything else. Overall, it's a very good article.

I think it's still good to watch, but it's a pity that the male protagonist is a local, not my favorite person who knows the script. The male protagonist is the creation of Lagus (born accidentally from the scepter). Lagus often calls him the most perfect creation. He is born to control the black tide. He is the king of a small country. He is a very powerful genius (very smart, I think he is the promax version of Na Kesha). He has a relationship with Lagus. Currently, the female protagonists include Heather Yin (the first) and Kelu (Kelu may be the male protagonist's sister), and there may also be Demiuge who is currently incomplete and is still waiting for Xilian to tell her stories in each reincarnation. At least the male lead looks very in line with my aesthetic, he has white hair and red eyes.

How can I put it, in the environment of Tomato, a big book is considered a good product. At least it can make people immersed in the story, instead of imposing all their own delusions on the characters and making me eat a big piece of it. The only disadvantage is that I don't give up on it. It is really well written. (Mysterious code: I read 34 chapters of this book twice in 3 days and 50 minutes)

The writing is really very good, and many of the plots are original. In my opinion, the protagonist is well portrayed. He is not simply good, nor is he simply calculating. Xia Ke is a proud genius who will scheme against others for profit, and will also sacrifice himself for love and the world. He is worthy of being a genius. There is another character in it that shocked me, Cosway. As Xia Ke's former head maid, Xia Ke had already regarded him as a sister. Before Xia Kelin died, he hoped that Cosway could have a free ending instead of living in his shadow. Cosway's ending, in my opinion, is really good. He found his own happiness, not Xia Ke. And Sophie's brother in it also amazed me. The characters in this book are all full-bodied, not the kind of mindless puppets that revolve around the protagonist. It's a pity that after Xia Xi is rescued later, there is no plot without her, which feels a bit inexplicable. But all in all, it is a very excellent fanfic, without system or brainlessness, and it is worth reading.

There is a plot of giving away a daughter, and the gift is given to an ordinary person without any description, only a few words. I usually don't like meal replacement literature, I feel like this is a betrayal and so unfair to everyone. I thought about it for a long time, and the more I thought about it, the more wrong I felt. I still couldn't accept it. I'm sorry, this kind of gifting feels a bit perfunctory. It can be about dying alone, or it can be a side story that brings the perspective of the protagonist. This thing is to help others green themselves.

[Laughing] It looks good [laughing], but you can't forget the daily tasks The author's soul returns. 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul has returned, driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles. 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul comes back. Comes over the mountain and sings. Comes back. The soul comes back. 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul comes back. It sings loudly and triumphs. It is the same robe and glory. 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back. The soul is back. Tao: Rebirth Mantra The Supreme Lord's decree transcends your lonely soul, all ghosts and ghosts, and is blessed by you in all your lives. Those with heads will surpass, those without heads will rise, kill with spears and knives, dive and hang on ropes. Die openly and secretly, die unjustly, creditor and enemy, beg for life. Kneel down in front of my stage, the Eight Diagrams will shine, stand out from the threshold, and transcend other places. As a man or a woman, you are responsible for your own responsibility. Whether you are rich or poor is your own responsibility. The order is given to save the people, and the people who are waiting for it are saved. The people who are waiting for the order are saved, and the people are saved. (Heart of the curse: The Supreme Order, transcend your lonely soul. Escape from the sea of ​​suffering and reincarnate as a human being.)

Don't be a pig 🕊️Author, this book is really good (I feel that the low rating may be partly due to the fact that the name of the Titan of Death Senatos is written as Thanatos, which makes some plot parties a bit more serious [face covering])

This book is considered to be the best among Bengtie fans. If the author can persevere, the ratings in the future will definitely not be low. It can be clearly seen that the author wrote the book in an orderly and thoughtful manner. I am looking forward to the future results of this book. I hope others can read this book. If there is a chance, I will help you push it on Shuhuang Square.

Finished reading, very good There is no time traveler, no system, no aha, it is the natives of Ompharos who have awakened. First of all, the setting is very novel, and then the plot is also pretty good. The emotional line between Hai and Ke is also well written. The water is as flat as possible. I saw the sea first, so it was the sea for the first time, but the child was born first. And the protagonist is followed by the Doomsday Order, so there is no need to worry about combat power. It is unlikely that there is a sword...? I heard from Ge Ge that it is almost over, and I can already feel the emptiness in advance. However, if I start school tomorrow, I will wait until the finale to read it. Maybe Ge Ge's new book will be released too😋 I wish the pigeons will get better and better, and I wish all the pioneers draw cards correctly and win three golds in a row🤓

I spent the May Day holiday reading it. How should I put it, I finished reading this magnificent story in just three days. To be honest, I don't really pay much attention to the plot of Ompharos, especially the one about Hysein and Kerudra. But for this book, I re-read the plot, analyzed their characters carefully or myself, and fantasized about their images in this story. I really felt a sense of loss, especially at the end. In summary, Charcot's story is a good story

The writing is really good, and the portrayal of emotions is also very delicate. There is no OOC phenomenon. The portrayal of the protagonist is also very good so far, with wisdom and strategy.

I have finished reading it. The descriptions are very delicate and I don't feel any poisonous points. There are many places where I was shocked by the exquisite descriptions to the point where my sleepiness disappears. The emotional lines are really beautiful and the characters are really three-dimensional. The characters of this book, Xia Ke (the protagonist), Cerydra, and Hessein, left a deep and independent image in me. They are completely different from the original work or other books. They will shine in my heart for a long time. I have often seen the cover of this book in recommendations a long time ago, but the rating was not high, so I never clicked on it. The day before yesterday, there was really no book to read, so I found something that interests me. Originally, I expected it to be an ordinary neurotic book with a score of 7 or more, which is greasy and brainless, but this book is not at this level at all. I really I think this book should get a score of 8.5 Or above. Based on my more than 2,000 hours of fan fiction reading experience, I judge that this book is much better than many strange books with a score of 8 or more. It creates another Ompharos in such a limited space. Although the focus of the description is mainly in the era of Cerydra, this world is very charming.

Considered a good book at present

The writing has a beauty that makes me feel astonished. The feelings in the words are very straightforward, just like saying I love you, no, I love you very much! My feeling is that I can see the author's intention. It is gorgeous but always gives me an unreal feeling. I hope the author's next book will be more dazzling, thank you! !

Do you know why Emperor Ke is such a fool? It's because she can't always use clever methods [laughter]

A rare masterpiece among The Iron Breakers. I believe my time limit is because I have eaten a lot of Dafen, but this one is very good. I give it five stars.

Can Lagus be the heroine? Is Lycus a villain or a good guy?

The writing is very good, the story and characters are well developed [Like]

I stayed up late to finish reading it. The author's writing is very good, the characters are vivid, and the knife should be used. It belongs to the gold found in the tomato pond. Finally, it is not a meal replacement literature. By the way, can I have something sweet?