Beng Tie's Past Life Was Exposed, and Yun Wuhuanyu Burst into Tears at the Beginning

It's a good start, not too blunt, and doesn't have a lengthy synopsis. It's a very comfortable start that describes time travel. After that, the length of the film is divided appropriately. Just realistic reactions and the emotions of the audience in the story and barrage are enough. A past life shouldn't be too long or too short. Don't write it all in one go. It will be boring. Come on, stay tuned.

Brothers and sisters, give me some advice. Try not to write too many barrages. Sometimes it affects the development of the plot. I feel that the writing of this book is very good, but every time I see a wonderful plot, there will be a lot of barrages. If you think I am nitpicking, I will delete this comment. I'm sorry, brother [sending my heart] [sending my heart] There are not many good novels written by Beng Tie these days. This is the first time I have encountered one that is so to my liking. I hope I can write it down well. Come on. It's still interesting to watch the barrage for a while now, but it would be nice if it could be reduced a little bit. I hope brothers will stick to this book. I will buy gifts for you later [Salute][Salute]

This is not so much a past life as it is another world line. The protagonist crosses the world line, and then merges into one world. In the main world, the main character is shown the cause and effect related to the protagonists in other world lines in the form of live broadcast. But I'm curious, why do other people assume that the protagonist has all the memories?

The writing is very good, the logic is online, and it does not violate the plot too much. However, it may be due to the slow pace and slow promotion that the number of readers is less. Em... It should be better when the number of words increases. The writing is online, the IQ is online, not a stallion, not brainless, a little sharp, not invincible, but semi-strong. Currently, the Feixiao simulation is over and I am going through the Ruan Mei simulation. It is a very good Xingtiewen. I like it.

Come on, the author, the writing is pretty good, a little better than others.

For me, a person who has eaten for nearly 2,000 hours, this book is already very good.

I love watching it, but the main reason is that there are too many knives

It's so shameless, come on, author

This is really good

The author is awesome! !

Yes, come on, author [shy]

If you like it, come and see more!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking.

Nothing to say, it just looks good

I love it so much. The author is quick to update. I never lowered the corners of my mouth when writing. Sorry, sir, I can't do the command to keep the corners of my mouth downwards.

I hope to get the reincarnation of Honkai Impact III, and it must be the hidden hero in the 13 hero heroes of the former Civilization Zhuhuohuo. Please author, please please.

Personally, I think the whole article is short and the writing is very good but too small (article size) (＾＿)

It looks really good, but can't you update it faster?

Very good. If you keep persisting, you will become a high-scoring book sooner or later.

The writing is pretty good and has potential.

It's so beautiful. I don't know if I have any friends who know me. I hope I can report more.

The author has written about the era of reincarnation of the protagonist here, and he still has fun. Is the author going to end it soon? This book is very good to read and write.

Personally, I think it looks pretty good.

It's really great, the later the better

It's great and I love reading it. I've read dozens of chapters so far and I feel it's okay. I hope the author will continue to work hard [Like][Like]

This is my favorite type, so go for it, author!

Very interesting, the emotions are described delicately