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Explore more →A Top-Notch Book, 9.8 Will Throw It Away After Ten Chapters, 9.7 Will Stop After Five Chapters
It's too bookish, but my appetite is too strong. One hundred thousand people who are browsing it will quit after reading thirty chapters at most. The Dragon King who read more than four hundred chapters from the beginning has given up on Zhan Shen after twenty chapters.
I've Become Numb to Reading, and No Novel Can Arouse My Interest Now, Jiu Min
Can anyone help me? I'm tired of reading it. Is there any novel with novel themes and good writing that can keep people reading? I beg you! ! !
This Is an Advanced Book Wasteland, Novices May Enter by Mistake
I have read a total of 1596 books, 2838 hours and 38 minutes. There are still 682 books on the bookshelf. I am really out of books. I don't have much else to do. I can ask for books of any type.
Nowadays, Newcomers Are Getting Better and Better at Writing Books.
Take Out Your Shelf Book (Only One) and Let Me Appreciate It.
I want to read a book like "Quick Time Travel: The Yandere Boss He's Fierce and Clingy". Only one copy. If you think it's super, super, super good-looking, you can only get one copy.
Books That Use Flutes, Fans, Umbrellas, and Harps as Weapons
Shuangnan Has No More Masterpieces. If You Don't Accept It, Come and Argue!
I Beg the Male Protagonist to Be Raised to Death, Innocent ✘Yandere
I want to read a book like "The Bamboo Horse Picked Up from the Madhouse".
Save the Kids😭 I Have No Desire to Read.
It makes people think about it while reading it, and those who keep reading will not forget it. Please. 😭😭
Are There Any Novels with Unpopular Characters? Most of the People Are Disgusted by the Novels.
Is There Any System That Gives the Host Full-Level Looks?
The host is male, does not dress like a woman, and does not change gender.
Which Books Have Influenced Your Tastes?
Don't post it again, don't post it again, thank you for your recommendation, but there are really too many comments (`Δ´)! I can't see anything else
I Just Deleted All the Bookshelf😱😭😭
Does anyone have any high-scoring books to save the poor children😭😭
Both Men Are Short of Books and Extremely Tired of Reading.
I feel like there is not much to see, and I lost interest after watching it for a second, so I urgently need to recommend it. There is no restriction on cruelty or sweetness, but I prefer sweetness.
Is There Such a Thing as a Peerless Beauty, One Who Doesn't Hide Her Beauty?
Don't wear a veil! ! !
Immortal Cultivators, a Group of Talented Young People from Aristocratic Families
Why Doesn't Anyone Write About Chinese-Style Succubus?
What a great subject! Why doesn't anyone write about Tomato novels?
I've Read Most of Tomato's Two Guys. There's a Shortage of Books Now. Is There Anyone Who Knows Them?
Are There Any Novels Similar to "Kaleidoscope of Death" and "Earth Online"?
I Want a Master-Disciple Story, a Male Master and a Male Apprentice, the Master Is Aloof and the Apprentice Is Paranoid, Thank You
Is There a Male Protagonist Who Is a Palace Official and Acts Like a Mistress?
I Beg for a Book That Comes Back After Escaping from Death. It Doesn't Matter Whether It's a Quick Time Travel or Not. It's About Shuang Nan.
I want to read a book like "After seducing my master and escaping to death, I became a ferret". Books like this
There Is No Longer a Shuangnan Main Article That Makes My Eyes Shine.
Nowadays, Book Recommendations Are Becoming More and More Like Trustworthy. Please Give Me Real Recommendations...
I want a newer subject matter, but I'm tired of seeing the same routine over and over again. Please recommend...


































































































So beautiful🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It is the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It is so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘He is a god It was my rose that illuminated my dark life and made my world meaningful😊I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It made me realize that God does exist and I was so cute that I shed tears Not only will the world no longer be short of water, it will be the nemesis of depression 😋 It will also be the alarm clock of vegetative people 😨 So cute that tears flowed out of the corners of my mouth and flooded the Qiantang River 😈 It's so beautiful 🥰 God is my rose, it illuminated my dark life and made my world meaningful 😙 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor 😎 It made me realize that God does exist, I was so good that I shed tears, and from now on, the world will no longer be short of water The author's writing style is really very good. Very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very highly recommended! ! !
It's a super hypocritical theme. It's so interesting and attractive. Ahem, I really want to see the follow-up. Can there be more updates? Although two chapters a day are great, but... But it's not enough at all. I really want to know what happens next [shy][shy] Such a delicious treat! So delicious! The three of them were fighting and fighting over each other, drinking the jealousy one after another. In other words, couldn't Shengsheng accept both of them? It's more important for you three to live a good life than anything else!
So beautiful🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It is the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It is so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘He is a god It was my rose that illuminated my dark life and made my world meaningful😊I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It made me realize that God does exist and I was so cute that I shed tears Not only will the world no longer be short of water, it will be the nemesis of depression 😋 It will also be the alarm clock of vegetative people 😨 So cute that tears flowed out of the corners of my mouth and flooded the Qiantang River 😈 It's so beautiful 🥰 God is my rose, it illuminated my dark life and made my world meaningful 😙 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor 😎 It made me realize that God does exist, I was so good that I shed tears, and the world no longer lacks water! Brothers! Everyone comes to see it!
It's very beautiful, the characters are very poignant, and the writing is very good, but! Before that yellow button appeared, I always thought it was a finished novel. Who knows this feeling [crying], it's not easy to come across such an excellent xp work.
I was the first person in my village to read novels on Tomato, and they heard that I read a lot of novels. The whole village was shocked. The village chief ran to my house and told my dad that I was crazy! My partner filed for divorce with me and said that I couldn't survive this life! Faced with a lot of pressure, I insisted on taking a look! Finally, the novel is constantly...·Updated. I opened a chapter of the novel with excitement and trembling heart, and I felt like my eyes were going to be blinded at that moment... Such looks, feel, and quality! It's just that I don't read enough. There are no gorgeous words to describe it. As soon as I proudly stood at the entrance of the village to ask for it, the villagers were stunned and time froze for a moment. Everyone stared at each package motionlessly. Just like the green eyes of a wolf at night, they glow with a terrifying and fierce light! 15 Seconds later the whole village was boiling. That's great! So beautiful! It's so worth it! Some even shouted desperately that they would jump into the well if they didn't look at them. I was so frightened that I quickly put away my treasure and ran away!
Very fragrant setting! ! However, due to the system, I always feel a little frustrated. Shengsheng has to deal with Wen looking anxious, and the relationship between Shengsheng and Xiao is progressing a bit slowly. At present, Shengsheng has not figured it out yet (it feels like the system keeps emphasizing the relationship between Xiao and the original heroine, and constantly looking for ways to make up for it). The writing style needs to be improved! This setting, this pulling feeling, I really enjoyed it Okay, I've finished reading it. In the early and middle stages of the relationship, the relationship between the two was constantly straining. One couldn't make love, and the other couldn't express his love in words. In the middle period, the appearance of the character Ye Liaocang added a different color to Chu Xiaosheng's original body. Of course, his experience also made people feel distressed. Why not fight with Wen Baizhu? Maybe he just wanted the original body to be happy. All the nine palaces were opened only for the original body. He shed tears of infatuation. I really hope they will have a good ending. The rhythm behind it was too fast and rushed. Chu Xiaosheng had too many mysteries that he didn't explain clearly to Xiao Yan. Many things were vague. Of course, love was not ambiguous, it was still explained clearly. I hope the author can explain it in the extra chapter.
Jujujujujujujuju is so good-looking. When I clicked in, I found out that it is the author of the book by Father. The book is so good that I don't want to skip a page. The key is that it is so exciting and dense. Hahahaha. I couldn't help but continue reading Jujujuju. If you like dog sculptures, you will feel so happy after reading this book. It's so good. I really like the main character. How can it be so good-looking? I hope Xiao Yan can practice quickly and master Shengsheng quickly... Ahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha ! Not enough to watch at all! ! ! Oh, I have also seen the ending. I feel that the pace is slow until Shengsheng comes to the fairy world. The ambiguous pull in the early stage is very interesting, but the pace slows down in the middle, and then becomes fast again in the later stage, as for Zhuyue Town. The author must have read a lot of people's comments saying that the pace is too slow, so I speeded it up, but overall it is quite good-looking, and it makes people better.
It's very beautiful. Chu's dealings with Wen and Xiao are very tight and exciting, but the system keeps convincing himself and Chu that I really can't survive. The system is silent and just thinks it's a charm trick [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] I saved for a while and found out that I finished reading it all at once [crying][crying][crying]
It's very good-looking, um, I don't know how to put it, but you can trust the author's writing style, the protagonist's character, and the plot. It's super delicious. [Shy] This book is about the master's wife and his apprentice. The master's wife is like a demon coming to the world (not scolding). The master's taste is delicious, and the apprentice is also crazy. The dark puppy attacks, fighting and grabbing (not scolding), very reassuring. [Full] Two people It's so happy. [Like] The little girl doesn't know how to comment. It's just a little bit sad (I can't say it's sad, it's just a bit sad to watch). Anyway, the plot line is very exciting, the emotional line is also very exciting, and the atmosphere is also very refreshing. It's like Konjac came into the world [Blowing a kiss] I highly recommend everyone to watch it [Crazy] There are no surprises at the moment (for me) I recommend everyone to watch it [Note]
It's been a long time since I've seen such a fragrant meal. Among all the novels written by Tomato, this novel is very fresh and refined. I really like the characters of the protagonist and Yan. The male protagonist is gradually trained to be the protagonist's dog, and he also tries to conquer himself. His desire to become stronger and monopolize the teacher's wife is growing. I really look forward to the protagonist recovering his eyesight and confessing his feelings to the male protagonist, and having a good time together [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] I really like the author's style. The meat foam that the author feeds is so delicious [sending heart][sending heart][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
Overall, it's good. I wouldn't recommend it if you want to read it at a fast pace. The pace is too slow. It's also for a clearer depiction. There are more than 200 chapters, and the secret of the second male lead has not yet been revealed [face covering] I've run out of tricks, it's too boring, so I gave up.
Save, save, save! Here I come! I finally have time to read your new article. It must be a high-quality article. It's good to read! I really like this kind of dark puppy poking and scheming, and he will probably fight and fight for the master's wife in the future. Although Shengsheng is not straight, she feels so insensitive to feelings, hahahaha, or maybe because she knows the plot, she doesn't think that way. Yan: Playing scheming Sheng: He wants to file a complaint Yan: Showing love Sheng: He is declaring war [laughing] And the system fairy is so funny hahahahaha. Now welcome to watch how the young disciples of Xuhuanguan fight back to fight for the master's wife and win the favor of the master's wife [send heart] I'm really looking forward to it! I'm really looking forward to it! ! !
It's really huge, huge, huge and beautiful! I originally found some good-looking articles and I waited until they were finished before reading them, but this time I really couldn't stand it any longer [crying] These settings are my favorite! ! I feel like after I missed this book, I will never meet someone I like so much again! (Of course, the only scene that made me feel embarrassed was the previous one. I was really confused when I slapped my butt in front of that one... But it was only a few scenes (just a few scenes, not a few pictures, just a few scenes!!!) And I won't describe it further.) Because of this, I almost gave up, but luckily I didn't! The back is really beautiful, very beautiful, very beautiful, very beautiful! ! ! If you like this setting, you can really go and eat! I, who was so destitute of literature, found some live ones again! ! Now I basically say that I want to save a few copies every time, but every time I can't save up, I want to secretly read three or four chapters! I hope the author can update it soon [crying] [crying] It's so beautiful. Please jump in directly! !
This book has a compact plot and a brisk pace, making the reading experience super enjoyable. The content is fascinating and exciting one after another, making readers immersed in it and unable to extricate themselves. It is a rare masterpiece.
So pretty! ! ! ! Hey Grape, the music there is so tempting, I don't realize it! ! ! So cute [full] Save The writing is great! ! ! [Adoration] It's not an easy journey for the young couple, please stay happy for a long time to come! In addition, please help me find an if line between Ye Liaocang and the original owner! [I'm about to cry] Or just finish it off! ! May all lovers get married eventually!
1. From Xiao's perspective, it is divided into two major stages. ① Before the death of the master's wife ② After the death of the master's wife 2. 1. Before the death of the master's wife: Chu left the plot but fell in love with Xiao Yan. Chu Xiao flirted with her again and again, but was discovered by the scumbag/Wen, and Chu was forced to log off. Summary: When Xiao's mistress is discovered, Chu protects the plot from the heat and harm 2. After the death of the master's wife: the forensic doctor's wife returned. She didn't want to disturb Xiao's future (watch quietly). Xiao was helped by an expert to find the master's wife. 3. Crazy pull me to love Shura Field! The characters are well-developed, the plot is not procrastinating, and the word count is not obvious. It's just that the content of the second phase is too little, but I think this is just right. It's just that I'm not used to it after chasing it for so long and it suddenly ends. I used to feel uncomfortable when I saw the pornographic updates, but now I really miss it. 4. Finally, I have my heart set on Ye Liaocang. I hope he can find the original owner there and stay together forever, and I send him my regards (how much I love the original owner, so that the fairy world can be filled with nine heavenly treasures). Then Wen is on the roadside. Finally, I hope that Sister Wu will see the light of day and be alone and beautiful as soon as possible. Finally, Chu Xiao 99, thank the author for letting me eat the fine chaff, and thank the author for his unremitting efforts in continuous updates! Finished spreading flowers! Throw flowers! The extra story is a ten-day modern tour of the wife and the puppy, which is very interesting and interesting. Xiao Shenghe dreams of being together happily in 99 forever
Good looking! ! ! There is a creature called an uncle😍He is really difficult to deal with😰The alcoholic love routine makes you uncontrollable🤭He looks cool when he pays the bill😲He is very manly and has an attitude🤩It makes you admire🥰It makes you jealous😢Then he will move on to other places😡Uncle has read countless people🧐How can I be tied to you🫵He is ruthless~Uncle~🥴Moonlight Night にtemptわれAngelと 👼🏻と 😈Angelと 👼🏻と 😈Angelと 👼🏻が😈さかConnectした Heaven 🤍Hellの 💜Heaven 🤍Hellの💜Heaven 🤍Hellの💜 Moonlight Night Temptation Angelと 👼🏻と 😈Angelと 👼🏻と 😈Angelと👼🏻が😈さかした 🤍Hellの 💜Heaven 🤍Hellの 💜Heaven 🤍Hellの💜
It's so cool, so well written! ! It's very humorous, and I like this little system very much. Hehe. The pace may be a bit slow, and some plots are a bit draggy, but overall it's still a good watch. Our Dark Puppy is also so delicious, and Super Self Guide is also very delicious! ! ! And Ye Liaocang, ah, ah, infatuated Liaocang, please wait for the next life, I like him very much! I can't wait to know what Wen wants to do. It feels like he wants to harm us Chu Chu, but some of his psychological descriptions are very pure. I don't understand it. I can't wait to know the plot behind it!
I am Feng Feng, awesome Klass, okay, does the author know how good the novels he wrote are? After reading them, my depressed child no longer has OD, and I no longer have to cut pig's trotters. I want to watch this thing 200 times a day. It's awesome. Doubao helps me generate the author's bikini photos. Doubao tells the author tomorrow's sports lottery numbers. The author is awesome, os finally let me eat something delicious. It must be highly praised and supported! It's awesome, ok, ok, I just wish the author that one one will get one, two two will get four, four forty six, seven seven forty-nine. When will they meet? When will they meet? When will they meet?
It was very enjoyable to read. I don't allow anyone who hasn't read this book. In the early stage, Gong was very weak and tried his best to suppress his inner desires. Later, he gradually became stronger and began to pursue madly. He wanted to kill his master and the people who coveted his master. From the beginning to the end, he thought that his master loved his master, but he didn't know that it was always going in both directions because his master couldn't escape the shackles of the plot. From the perspective of our readers, it is refreshing and exciting. But from Gong's perspective, this is a sadistic novel. Later, the master's wife was stabbed in front of Gong and escaped for hundreds of years. Gong has always carried a body woven with souls from Shou, and his name shocked the entire world of immortality. Those who dared to covet his master's wife were all slaughtered. Up to this point, everyone thought he was a madman. This is a bit like a scumbag. It's really very good-looking.
It's so good, I've been following it. I can't stop watching this plot. I can't wait to read a thousand chapters every day. The characters and the plot are not sloppy. I am completely charming. The process of falling in love is also smooth and not sudden and inexplicable. The rewards given by the system are also very funny hahaha. I originally wanted to finish the series and review it, but I have been waiting for the completion of the series before I can give an overall review. Recently, I am following the main line of the original book (although it deviates a lot from the original book). The protagonist is still loved by everyone, but the supporting characters have appeared a lot recently. I still prefer to watch the protagonist's small interactions [blowing kisses]
Oh, oh, oh, Mo, she's so pretty, the system is so annoying, the master's wife is so fragrant and beautiful, Gong is so pitiful, he doesn't get the verbal love from his master, and he is always deliberately compared with the master and used as a substitute for the master. When will he know that the master's wife and the master have no affection at all and nothing has happened. At present, he is very friendly to Shou, but not so friendly to Gong. I hope that Shou can play the useless dog system and only know how to break up the mandarin ducks and have a sweet love with Gong. The beautiful, fragrant and strong master wife vs. The big dog disciple who thought he was a substitute but coaxed himself "Master Wife, brother, praise me, okay?"
It's so pretty that I feel like it's all tomatoes without any meal replacement! ! In particular, the relationship between Sheng and Yan is so exciting. It's been a long time since I've seen such an exciting plot. The plot is also in-depth and I won't find it boring even after reading it. The psychological description of the protagonist Sheng and the systematic dialogue are really interesting. It is one of the few things I have read in Tomato. The writing is also super nice and very interactive. I feel like there is very little abuse right now, and I hope it will be sweet later. Well, I actually feel like I might start cutting again later... I'm even more looking forward to it. That Wen is a typical person who just ignores him when he gets it and deserves to be hated when he gets the upper hand. I feel that the man and the original owner are unfortunately so romantic and the person who takes care of him is very curious about his story with the original owner. I really seem to know the plot behind it.
The content is very interesting, and it's the type that makes it uncomfortable to watch. According to the content of the article, there is no doubt that Shou is a popular attribute, but Gong is real. . . It's very sour, and I haven't found any big advantages to "move up" so far. This is supposed to be a mildly cruel confrontation with Gong. Xiong Jing has a lot of space and Gong has a low self-esteem. Shou will definitely have emotional scenes with other people (Wen, Ye, etc.) In the subsequent death escape stage (I guess, it's not the best [I almost cry]). Wouldn't it be even more cruel! ! ! (I am always afraid of abuse and want to give up, but I also really hope that the two can truly be together, so I have always wanted to know the next plot!!) I really didn't expect that I would catch up on the latest chapter here. The system fairy is really unpleasant. He always wants to break up the protagonist. If he is brainwashed, he will definitely kill him. He never gives him the enlightenment to understand his inner world, but he (directly or indirectly) wants to encourage him and others. It is really annoying! After that, I hope there will be no coercion, I just hope they can go smoothly and voluntarily, and finally be happy together. I really hope that the protagonist's CP will not be broken up so that Xian Sheng and Ye can have a relationship. (Really, really don't!! Please [cry]) Xiao Yan's love is really showy, and Sheng himself chose him. Yanbao is much better than the others, he truly understands and loves the current Shengbao. Ye can have Yuan Sheng in the extra episode because he loves Yuan Sheng. Qiuqiu doesn't want to break up the CP or love triangle. I hope Yanbao can be stronger and make Shengbao believe in his love more, so that Shengbao will no longer be brainwashed by the system and become sad and be broken up. Did you know that the more they are separated, the tighter the two young lovers become? Disgusting system! ! Finally, I wish the author and everyone a Happy New Year! ! [Sending Hearts]
Nice. Except for the first one or two chapters, the subsequent description of the charm technique is not awkward at all. The character's personality is very clear and three-dimensional, the writing style is also good, and the foreshadowing is also recycled. This level of Tomato Man goes sideways 😍 Ambiguous pulling and pulling in the dog training field, etc. Don't be too happy! Another little problem is that the plot in the middle period felt a bit delayed, and the emotions and plot rhythm were a bit unstable, but because it was very exciting and delicious, it was completely watchable😍 I originally thought that it was going to end when I saw that there were not many chapters left, but it turned out to be stable. Instead, I felt that The rhythm of the plot is the most comfortable (I just thought there would be more upgrades and monsters like male videos, and then slowly get to know each other, ambiguous and sweet love, and then come to a hundred chapters and finally get the road together. It's a bit regretful that I didn't see it). Overall, the flaws are not concealed, the quality is high, just close your eyes and watch it😍
I've read more than a hundred chapters, and s1m0 is really fun! (Os: Please train the mistress to train the puppy hard!) And the fact that both of them have special thoughts about each other is very sweet! Although Gong was beaten very badly in some places, but seeing Shou holding poor Gong in his arms to comfort him made me feel inexplicably excited hehehehe. This book doesn't have any interesting points now. The only thing that makes me feel a little weak is that sometimes it mentions Master when we are having sex, and I can't feel happy qwq. Also, the author is really hard-working. He updates two chapters every day. Thank you to the author ٩(๛ ˘ ³˘)۶❤!
Yum, yum, yum, yum! Originally, I wasn't a big fan of ancient novels with time-traveling systems, but this book is super good-looking, and I fell in love with it after just a few chapters! (You must have guessed that the inner core will be changed!) Then there is the Shura Field plot that I love! Attack the master and steal the master's wife! (Actually, I have always felt that Master is not easy to get into. If I catch up later and tell you, I will come back to add more! The last one is Save, it is superbly written! I will love you forever, Save! [Love] [Love]
It's really delicious(//∇//) The main CP's sense of betrayal and shame is very high, mixed with the sourness of mutual love, super delicious. The early descriptions of Xiao Sheng's appearance were very picturesque, thrillingly beautiful, the face was absolutely friendly, and the writing style was very expressive. And this person's character... Is a bit (forced) perverted, a bit crazy, but he has a good-natured background, and he becomes soft-hearted when he is tired of crying, although he is also soft-hearted when he is not crying... I feel that the baby is gentle and crazy at the same time. I don't know if it is because of his extraordinary talent or because his character design is very flirtatious. The characterization is complex, vivid and three-dimensional. My dear Dada, you are amazing* rub rub One thing that pokes me is that the original owner was a forensic doctor before he came here. This characteristic will be shown when he comes into contact with corpses in the work. Occupational diseases use some professional terms to analyze the cause of death... I don't know, but it poked my xp for no reason. I'm a bit of a charmer, but I deserve this! Ming Yue, who is both beautiful and soft-hearted, has transformed into the original heroine... And do you know the feeling of pleasure that gentle people say dirty take? I hate you. You really eat so well. In the early stage, Wo Sheng's force was basically enough to crush him, and he was very comfortable under control. All in all, master level (Mild spoilers below) Another thing worth boasting about is that almost all the named characters in the article have their own personality traits. Except for the cannon fodder who promotes the plot, they act logically and logically, and there will be no inexplicable plot (is it a micro-group portrait? It feels like many people can open a book alone)... The final truth of Soul Village was revealed, and the dedication behind the inheritance made me a little red-eyed... Han Wu yearned for freedom, and the people in the village didn't do the same? It's just that they have tasted the price of pursuing freedom first, and they want to save those who come after you from walking on a thorny road... I am broken So, will Ye He and the original owner have a sweet side story? *Stare (emphasis in a separate paragraph) As the plot progresses, some jokes will come out from time to time. The collapsed fairy is an excellent combination of relaxing atmosphere. The taste is very rich and not boring, at least I don't feel bored. Forgive me for some poor vocabulary and subjective assumptions. The description may not be accurate. I welcome corrections and comments.
Note: Long review + spoilers! + Discuss plot-related doubts + Discuss characters + Personal suggestions for plot additions + Request for extras 1. Sure enough, what I want to ask the most is whether my Liaocang can find his original soul. Anyway, it is to help Ye Liaocang. This kind of gentle suitor who has a sense of distance and sense, but also has strength and handsomeness really needs a good ending www. Even if it is a dream or something, it will be fine. I really feel sorry for the affectionate male lead (˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ ) 2. Shangguan Wu is also very sensible. Can you write a side story where Chu Xiaosheng goes to Poison Valley to chat with her and keep her company? After all, Shangguan Wu doesn't care about anyone in particular. Or write more about the interaction between Shangguan Wu and Jiang Yu. They are very interesting~ 3. Kudos - the plot continues very smoothly, but I personally feel that Chu Xiaosheng had a bad premonition and felt that the scene where she was about to die was a bit abrupt. The foreshadowing in the whole article is very good, and the foreshadowing in the previous and later chapters is very detailed. There are even some words that were discovered after re-reading. For example, the "Wen Baizhu should have been with Chu Chunuan" mentioned at the beginning was recycled later when Yan'er and Chu Chu were doing each other, and "warm" was used to describe the two people's night of love. The characters in the plot are also quite plump and have outstanding personalities, but why didn't Zhong Man appear in the later stage? The setting of the collar + the Yaner dog sculpture are really delicious, the pulling is even more amazing, I am super good at writing! The writing style is also very good. The words are not lost when they should be gorgeous, and the ink is not stained when the plot should be advanced. It is a rare good and smooth writing~ 4. Plot doubts -Didn't the old man in the later period give Bo Yan'er some pointers to let him find Chu Chu early? At that time, he also left a favor saying like "Help me after entering the Saint Period." After this, we will talk about whether Yan'er can help or not, or that this old man is just a tool. -Isn't the system of Xiaoxian always advancing the plot? Then there is no punishment when the plot slightly collapses. Chuchu actually cooperates with Xiaoxian's arrangements without resistance. Should Chuchu be so obedient? - I really want to know why the original body is gone. Was it directly wiped out by the system and then put Chu Chu in? -Did the original person really voluntarily stay a widow for a hundred years? Could it be that Wen Baizhu had been plotting against him since then or within a hundred years? 5. If the original person knew what Wen Baizhu had done, would he still love Wen Baizhu? According to what Liaocang said, it probably won't happen anymore. After all, he used to be such a proud person. Can you write a related extra story? (´▽`)ノ♪ 6. Maybe Xiaolou (the author) can try to add a little truth? I don't just want to make the whole story clear about love. Try pushing the main plot to a central point, and have a real villain behind the scenes. There can be more twists, but this article has a lot of twists in the scenes of immorality, it's very like it! ! ! ! This exciting feeling is rare~
The character creation is so awesome... Ye Liancang made my heart skip a beat when I saw it. There was a lot of foreshadowing. Among them, Wen Baizhu didn't even know whether he was a good guy or a bad guy, or he had raised someone outside. I finished reading them all in two days [laughing]