Transformation: Broken! Spotted by Roommate

It's good to watch, but it is recommended to reduce the scenes between Shi and Cheng. The two of them basically have no role in advancing the plot, which will make the plot seem draggy. The reduced plot of them can be added to Jian Xiaomeng, Lu Ji and Qi Feiyu.

So far, I have read the latest chapter and Chapter 37. Overall, there is no abuse. The plot develops smoothly and smoothly, and the characters are also very three-dimensional. I look forward to more exciting plots in the future. Come on.

It's good to watch, so good to watch. The whole process and the heroine's mentality change are very good. Although the heroine's defense against the hero is very low after the hero appears, because the heroine does not trust other people so much after her gender change, but she becomes a bit stupid when she meets the hero, but it doesn't matter. Moreover, the two of them are really comfortable to watch after they are officially together. The heroine will not have any inexplicable emotions, and she will also have a boy's thoughts to spite the hero. The whole thing is awesome, isn't it? [Adoration] I look forward to the author writing additional stories, hoping that I can understand the story of their daily life in the future, and also understand the male protagonist and explain the system problems to the female protagonist more and express the love I have missed for many years [Sending Hearts]

When the tie comes out, it will be a little low. It's quite normal. The author has nothing to say about giving out sweets. It's so sweet. I hope it will continue. Come on, author! (PS: This is probably one of the best stories about changing marriages that I have ever read) In fact, I have read "Bianbai" before [Flying Kiss]. Personally, I think this book has the potential to reach 9.0 With some extras. Disadvantages: The ending is too hasty. I suggest moving the conflict between the two a little earlier. It would feel a bit strange to propose right after the conflict is resolved? I personally think this last part is a bit far-fetched but the rest of it is really well written! I hope the author will solve these problems in the next book [blowing kiss] @

Susu is so cute, but the ending is a little bit sharp. But I am already indestructible. Some of the content is a bit cliché and a little bit poisonous, but I can accept it. The whole thing is still very sweet. I love watching things like changing marriages. Good writing is really a bonus🥰

A very satisfying book. For me, who has read countless stories about changing marriages, this book is also a T1. The text is not flashy, and the overall connection is natural. It is sweet and has a little bit of a knife about the heroine's past life, which perfectly shows the inferiority of the heroine in front of the hero. I just happened to read the chapter where Su Su was completely exposed, and I just felt that it was a natural transition. The writing is very good, but I don't know why no one has read it yet. I hope that many people will experience the sweetness of this book in the future [shy][shy][smile]

It's great. It's so sweet. The story is very complete and touching. The emotional experience of the two people in the middle is also tortuous but rich. The finale is very graphic and the emotional lines of various supporting characters are also very complete [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

How shameless! But it's so short, so let's take care of it first [I understand]

A simple book review. First of all, it is beautiful. It is really sweet. You can see the love between the male and female protagonists in every move. But I feel that the male and female protagonists lack a decisive bond. How can I put it, love is too cheap, and it is not enough to support the emotion of falling in love with him again after discovering that the protagonist cheated on her. This is my feeling

Uh, well, how should I put it? Books can

Well, verify it. Dessert level novel. They are all good kids. There's no big conflict, it's all good stuff, suitable for relaxing consumption.

Great, the best sweet article of the year! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Good looking, really good

People are good at changing wives, and horses are good at being ridden [Thoughts]

The corners of my mouth have always been crooked [smile] [smile] [smile] so sweet

The narrative is clear and the characters are well developed. Every character can be given the foreshadowing and shaping it deserves, and the emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists are also very intoxicating and sweet.

It's really good-looking. Among all the articles on marriage change, it's considered good-looking.

Good-looking, love to watch, watch more

The author writes very well

It's beautiful, I love it, it's so cute

(ง •̀_•́)งCome on hehehe

Pressure, rigid pressure, plug pressure, thunder pressure

The plot is good, sweet

32,000 People are reading it but there is no rating. The author is still too miserable.

Haokang! (Why enter at least five characters...)

Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes

I hope the author will continue to work hard and write something high-sugar. Thank you.

Su Su receives money from the system and doesn't forget to pay taxes. It's so pure. I love it.

Tian Tian Daily is very good to watch, but the ending is a bit rushed

It's been a long time since I've read a book so happily. This book is a blast!