The Potions Assistant at Hogwarts

The starting point of this story is August 31, 1993, the main text ends in January 1998, and the extra chapters will continue until January 2053, a span of sixty years. Dumbledore lived until after the war, and of course Sirius did not die, as did the Lupins and Fred. . . Everyone lives peacefully in this fictional world, experiencing their own joys and sorrows. This is a long story, and it took more than a year from conception to completion of the first draft. In the later stages of writing, each character seemed to have a soul of his own, and they would speak and act in their own way. All the author can do is to faithfully record all this, sometimes with laughter, sometimes with tears. The ending of the story is of course a happy one, the process is a bit twisty but not too sadistic, and the details are detailed so sometimes the progress is slow. In this age of fast food, I hope this long story can still find some long-term readers who understand it.

I have read a lot of Harry Potter fics. And I am also a fan of Professor Snape's CP. This article surprised me because it is plain but not boring. The development of the plot is not the same. There is not much plot focusing on the three little ones. Even though I have read so many fans, I am still interested in this article. At the same time, the heroine has a characteristic that many other heroines in fan fiction do not have, that is, her strength does not lie in the depth of her magic power, nor does her background as a Chinese girl give her more fantasy colors. She relies on the sophistication, tenacity, courage, decisiveness, and wit cultivated from a Muggle-born and orphan background. With a small amount of assistance from the system, she won the final victory and gained friendship and love. This is not a cool article, but it is worth reading.

I think it's very interesting. I thought it was still being updated and I didn't want to read it. But after reading two chapters, I became hooked. It has a sense of life and is very interesting. It's real, without those fancy golden fingers or awesome talent and temperament. It's very real and easy to relate to!

It's super beautiful, with a flowing writing style. At the same time, the plot is also very smooth, with no flaws, and all changes feel natural [love] [love] [love] [love] I don't know why the score is so low. The author's writing is very good and he is a nice person. Well, if you don't like this style of writing, there's no need to give it a low score, right? Moreover, the author said at the beginning that the writing style was relatively bland, and the author really put great care into writing this article. Although the two got together relatively late, the mood of the two in the middle is written in very detail, letting us know why it is like this. It is filled in by basic dimensions, and there is a bit of sourness in the middle. But if you read it in one go, you won't have this feeling, and you will sigh, sweet [shy][shy]

It is a very HP fan who thinks for himself and follows the original work. The plot background and other settings are well researched and detailed, and the character settings have a lot of personal understanding added. The heroine is very Gryffindor, a bit like an enhanced version of Hermione (smarter, more versatile, and reckless). The main plot is well written, it is in line with the original work and there are many innovative plots, but the relationship between the male and female protagonists is not like the relationship between two social beasts with a mental age of over 30 years old [laughing and crying] The early progress was not very efficient. There were many misunderstandings between the two people (mainly because they thought each other didn't like them). Readers who want to see things come to fruition may feel a little uncomfortable. In the later period, they took the love-brained route. Both of them were dedicated personalities who put themselves in a low position [I understand]

I'm halfway through, let's evaluate it first. The current setting of the first half of this article is reasonable. She is not a big heroine, but she is not very weak either. Because of her 33 years of experience as a "Muggle" salesperson, her way of thinking is very Chinese Muggle. I've watched half of it so far, and I finally have a two-way crush on SSOC. What can I say? It is indeed OOC, but the writing and plot are not particularly OOC and can still be watched. I will watch the second half later. The only flaw is actually the author's... Preference for typing. . . Every time I see it, I am speechless (.) I don't think so. The author likes Ren Yingying too much. Although the previous name of this book is probably Li Lu Yingying, after they got together, SS directly changed the name to the heroine Yingying during their intimate moments. It's too dramatic🥲 I finished reading it in a hurry. Sure enough, OOC is the most powerful after falling in love. Let me mention that the author next door has published another extra volume. If you are interested, you can check it out 😇 Take the first step

As a bookworm for many years, I can tell that the author still has some writing skills, and maybe I am not used to the fragmented chapters, but if you can accept it, you can keep reading. I have read about 180 chapters so far, and I can feel that the author likes HP very much and understands HP very well. The description of each character is very reasonable in my heart. As someone who has read a lot HP fanfics are very interesting. The author loves the characters in the novel. The heroine is a very smart and capable girl. She is not a cliché. My favorite character in the book is Snape. It makes the two of them feel very close to each other. I feel very happy to see the two people getting along at around 180. Thank you to the author for writing such a story! Love it. Thank you very much!

I love the professor the most. The biggest disappointment is that the professor doesn't have a happy ending, so can you update it soon? The interaction with the professor is so sweet. It makes me smile like an aunt all the time, and my face hurts [crying with laughter]

The rating is a bit low, but it is very interesting because it is a trap for Sri Lankan fan fiction, but it was the unique charm of the heroine that made me insist on watching it. There is always a very contradictory mentality when reading this kind of fanfic. On the one hand, I don't want the heroine to feel aggrieved and resentful, but on the other hand, I don't want the heroine to go too far. She always solves the problem with all her strength and strength. The heroine of this book just meets my awkward needs. She is rational and mature, and can use more mature and stable methods to solve problems, which is very consistent with the character setting of a 33-year-old medical representative in her previous life. She is sincere and dedicated in potion research, and it is not just her talent and golden fingers that make Si Jiao admire her with admiration. Some fan fiction is like a retelling of the original work, but this book is more like a rich story line based on the background of the original work, with the heroine and Sijiao alone. The emotional line is of a long flowing type, very warm and not artificial.

I didn't understand the number in the chapter title at first, but later I realized it was the year and month. The author was really attentive. There are also chapters from a dedicated perspective, which complete the characters. I don't know if Snape will be really clingy and sweet after falling in love, but I really feel like it's true. I have read another Snape fanfic, which is also a sapiosexual academic lover, but the heroine in this article comforted and explained Snape's past many times. The existence of a confidant allowed Snape to let him go, which is really good.