Potions Assistant at Hogwarts

The starting point of this story is August 31, 1993, the main text ends in January 1998, and the extra chapters will continue until January 2053, a span of sixty years. Dumbledore lived until after the war, and of course Sirius did not die, as did the Lupins and Fred. . . Everyone lives peacefully in this fictional world, experiencing their own joys and sorrows. This is a long story, and it took more than a year from conception to completion of the first draft. In the later stages of writing, each character seemed to have a soul of his own, and they would speak and act in their own way. All the author can do is to faithfully record all this, sometimes with laughter, sometimes with tears. The ending of the story is of course a happy one, the process is a bit twisty but not too sadistic, and the details are detailed so sometimes the progress is slow. In this age of fast food, I hope this long story can still find some long-term readers who understand it.

I have read a lot of Harry Potter fics. And I am also a fan of Professor Snape's CP. This article surprised me because it is plain but not boring. The development of the plot is not the same. There is not much plot focusing on the three little ones. Even though I have read so many fans, I am still interested in this article. At the same time, the heroine has a characteristic that many other heroines in fan fiction do not have, that is, her strength does not lie in the depth of her magic power, nor does her background as a Chinese girl give her more fantasy colors. She relies on the sophistication, tenacity, courage, decisiveness, and wit cultivated from a Muggle-born and orphan background. With a small amount of assistance from the system, she won the final victory and gained friendship and love. This is not a cool article, but it is worth reading.

I think it's very interesting. I thought it was still being updated and I didn't want to read it. But after reading two chapters, I became hooked. It has a sense of life and is very interesting. It's real, without those fancy golden fingers or awesome talent and temperament. It's very real and easy to relate to!

It's super beautiful, with a flowing writing style. At the same time, the plot is also very smooth, with no flaws, and all changes feel natural [love] [love] [love] [love] I don't know why the score is so low. The author's writing is very good and he is a nice person. Well, if you don't like this style of writing, there's no need to give it a low score, right? Moreover, the author said at the beginning that the writing style was relatively bland, and the author really put great care into writing this article. Although the two got together relatively late, the mood of the two in the middle is written in very detail, letting us know why it is like this. It is filled in by basic dimensions, and there is a bit of sourness in the middle. But if you read it in one go, you won't have this feeling, and you will sigh, sweet [shy][shy]

It is a very HP fan who thinks for himself and follows the original work. The plot background and other settings are well researched and detailed, and the character settings have a lot of personal understanding added. The heroine is very Gryffindor, a bit like an enhanced version of Hermione (smarter, more versatile, and reckless). The main plot is well written, it is in line with the original work and there are many innovative plots, but the relationship between the male and female protagonists is not like the relationship between two social beasts with a mental age of over 30 years old [laughing and crying] The early progress was not very efficient. There were many misunderstandings between the two people (mainly because they thought each other didn't like them). Readers who want to see things come to fruition may feel a little uncomfortable. In the later period, they took the love-brained route. Both of them were dedicated personalities who put themselves in a low position [I understand]

As a bookworm for many years, I can tell that the author still has some writing skills, and maybe I am not used to the fragmented chapters, but if you can accept it, you can keep reading. I have read about 180 chapters so far, and I can feel that the author likes HP very much and understands HP very well. The description of each character is very reasonable in my heart. As someone who has read a lot HP fanfics are very interesting. The author loves the characters in the novel. The heroine is a very smart and capable girl. She is not a cliché. My favorite character in the book is Snape. It makes the two of them feel very close to each other. I feel very happy to see the two people getting along at around 180. Thank you to the author for writing such a story! Love it. Thank you very much!

I'm halfway through, let's evaluate it first. The current setting of the first half of this article is reasonable. She is not a big heroine, but she is not very weak either. Because of her 33 years of experience as a "Muggle" salesperson, her way of thinking is very Chinese Muggle. I've watched half of it so far, and I finally have a two-way crush on SSOC. What can I say? It is indeed OOC, but the writing and plot are not particularly OOC and can still be watched. I will watch the second half later. The only flaw is actually the author's... Preference for typing. . . Every time I see it, I am speechless (.) I don't think so. The author likes Ren Yingying too much. Although the previous name of this book is probably Li Lu Yingying, after they got together, SS directly changed the name to the heroine Yingying during their intimate moments. It's too dramatic🥲 I finished reading it in a hurry. Sure enough, OOC is the most powerful after falling in love. Let me mention that the author next door has published another extra volume. If you are interested, you can check it out 😇 Take the first step

I love the professor the most. The biggest disappointment is that the professor doesn't have a happy ending, so can you update it soon? The interaction with the professor is so sweet. It makes me smile like an aunt all the time, and my face hurts [crying with laughter]

The daily life of Hogwarts from the perspective of a small staff is a very novel entry point, and the female protagonist has outstanding workplace abilities and cleverly advances the main plot. I look forward to a long story.

I didn't understand the number in the chapter title at first, but later I realized it was the year and month. The author was really attentive. There are also chapters from a dedicated perspective, which complete the characters. I don't know if Snape will be really clingy and sweet after falling in love, but I really feel like it's true. I have read another Snape fanfic, which is also a sapiosexual academic lover, but the heroine in this article comforted and explained Snape's past many times. The existence of a confidant allowed Snape to let him go, which is really good.

The author is really awesome! ! ! The writing is very delicate, and the emotional transition is good. The author often explains Si Jiao's inner thoughts in the words of the author, helping us to understand better. I feel that the characters are written in a very three-dimensional way. I am very, very looking forward to the sweet love between the two of them after they confirm their relationship! [Adoration][Admiration][Admiration] I hope the author will never stop updating! Don't stop updating! Don't stop updating! Please, I will insist on sending small gifts that are powered by love to Da Da every day. I also hope that other book friends can send some to Da Da when they have time, and never let Da Da run away (I have read many other Sri Lankan teachings and stopped updating them halfway through, Da Da must not, I really really like this book [love] [love] [love])

The rating is a bit low, but it is very interesting because it is a trap for Sri Lankan fan fiction, but it was the unique charm of the heroine that made me insist on watching it. There is always a very contradictory mentality when reading this kind of fanfic. On the one hand, I don't want the heroine to feel aggrieved and resentful, but on the other hand, I don't want the heroine to go too far. She always solves the problem with all her strength and strength. The heroine of this book just meets my awkward needs. She is rational and mature, and can use more mature and stable methods to solve problems, which is very consistent with the character setting of a 33-year-old medical representative in her previous life. She is sincere and dedicated in potion research, and it is not just her talent and golden fingers that make Si Jiao admire her with admiration. Some fan fiction is like a retelling of the original work, but this book is more like a rich story line based on the background of the original work, with the heroine and Sijiao alone. The emotional line is of a long flowing type, very warm and not artificial.

It's very exciting. It's a bit awkward to see the heroine and the black dog talking in the Shrieking Shack. It gets better and better later on. The plot after the heroine has just transferred to the position of potion assistant is the most interesting. It deserves five stars. It's so exciting but not many people have seen it.

The relationship between Rue and Severus flows slowly and naturally, and it is very beautiful. There are many heart-warming details of their daily relationship. It is a very beautiful love. The overall plot of the novel is logical and smooth, and the heroine has mature thoughts and independent personality. I like it very much. The author's replies to readers' messages are also sincere and serious. He is a sincere and attentive author. This novel and the author are not at a loss [laughing] [note] [please pay attention]

The emotional line is very natural and the ending is very sweet. The heroine's IQ is online, and she keeps company with her friends. Si Jiao is also well-shaped, and Lily's feelings are also handled very well here. The writing is good, but I didn't see any flaws in the whole article for the first time. I don't know why the rating is not high.

If you are calm and like to take things slow, then it is worth a read. The heroine design is quite good, and the author has several good points: 1. It is quite elegant, and there is basically no OOC in the early character design. 2. Basically, the author's comments will be left in each chapter to help you understand the plot. It can be seen that the author loves it. The reason why it is 4 stars is because in the later period, when Si Jiao and the heroine were together, he felt... Um... The reaction of the heroine was also... Um... How to put it, it was very, invincibly embarrassing and inconsistent. It felt so OOC that it exploded. Maybe it was because I couldn't eat it. I skipped all the subsequent scenes where the heroine was next to Voldemort. I felt... Well... It's hard to describe, but overall, the early stage was pretty good. I basically didn't skip it until I saw the two people falling in love. After they fell in love, I felt... Maybe I didn't grasp the degree well. Hey, it might also be my problem.

The plot setting is good, the heroine has a God's perspective, the golden finger is not too big, and the destiny of the people in the book is changed little by little. The relationship with Snape is also gradual, and the writing is very good. The rating is significantly lower.

I was a little hesitant after seeing the ratings, but after seeing everyone's comments I decided to give it a try. The conclusion is, it looks great! I particularly like the way the author communicates with everyone. Sometimes it will explain why the plot develops in this way, and sometimes it will give everyone a little suspense. It's like each character is developing the story on their own, not deliberately. Everything feels like it comes naturally, and although there are small sacrifices, the overall ending is perfect. Like it very much! I hope you won't be fooled by the ratings!

In fact, I think the rating of this book should not be so low. The emotional lines written in large letters by the author are very delicate. The emotional pull between the heroine and the teacher is really beautiful. The chaos of falling in love with someone is vividly depicted, which can really make readers empathize.

I have read a lot of Snape fanfics, and this feeling ranks among the top three in my mind. I think the characters are well drawn, but the more than 600 chapters feel a bit short, and I haven't read enough [face covering]. As a bookworm for more than 20 years, I don't remember the author or the title of the book when I read it. I will definitely remember this book and revisit it every once in a while!

Warm and flowing, not OOC at all, the logic is smooth and strict, and the emotions are slow to warm up. I joined the show because of Si Jiao. The introduction said that there were many opposite roles only in a year and a half. I originally wanted to dance, but I was attracted to the heroine all of a sudden. In two hours, I watched Si Jiao talking, flirting, and exchanging feelings for each other. I was a little tired of confirming my feelings during this period, and the titles and rival scenes were not to my liking. But later on, it was good to work undercover together and act together, but after the war, there was a little bit of deliberate misunderstanding. Overall, it's a good read. I finished reading it in one sitting at three o'clock in the morning.

I just finished reading the super long episode, and I suddenly understood what the author said. In my writing, I slowly fell in love with my male protagonist and said goodbye to my friends... It even made me no longer overly anxious about my child's growth. Everything will come and go slowly... Accept all challenges and unknown life, and live the present moment well! This is the first time I resonated with the author. Thank you for creating and sharing [love]

This is the first time I read the book and still had an idea from the author at the end? Little thoughts? This really surprises me. It makes me feel that this is the closest I have ever been to the author. It's a pretty good dialogue pair, I define it as a dialogue. It's like a collision of ideas in the distance. Awesome

I don't understand why the rating is so low? This book is really beautiful. Although the system is there, the sense of existence is very weak. The plot is plain but warm. The heroine has no golden finger. She mainly relies on her own wisdom to promote the development of the plot. The emotional development is steady and not abrupt. Every time I comment on the plot questions, I can see the author's great explanation. I am really super attentive. I like this book very much. Good luck to the author. ୧•̀ꇴ•૭

I have read it twice and am waiting for updates around 8.30 Every morning. How can I put it this way, this book is long-lasting and the relationship between the professor and his sister is not too abrupt. The younger sister slowly penetrates into the professor's life like moonlight. The most lasting love is companionship. The system does not have a strong sense of existence, just swapping some prescriptions or something. I really like this kind of long-lasting writing, which does not stop every second!

I like it very much and am going to read it again to see the details. Especially when the author has something to say! The first reading was so smooth that I couldn't bear to break the rhythm of reading. The second reading read chapter by chapter to see what the author had to say. He is a very rigorous author. He is very particular about the timeline and the emotional details are written well without being too abrupt.

It's super, super, super good, I watched it all in one go. The heroine Li Lu has a full IQ and EQ, and she plays the role well, with everything under control. The system is only responsible for issuing tasks and basically does not work. The relationship with Si Jiao came naturally, the interaction between the two was natural and sweet, the plot had no logical loopholes, and it was very satisfying to die. Recommended recommended recommended. And there's also a sweet long-form sequel!

There is relatively little interaction between the heroine and the professor in the early stage, so you need to watch patiently. The author is really good at writing and handles all the details very well. Overall, it is a very good professor's text!

It's like drinking a cup of hot milk to warm your clothes. It's like a refreshing cocktail with a sweet aftertaste. I like this kind of peaceful and long-lasting happiness, thank you so much to the author! Almost every paragraph review/author's comment was appreciated, and I felt the author's love for the characters he wrote, and every response to the readers was full of humility and patience. These not only allowed me to spend a relaxing and enjoyable reading time, but also experienced in-depth communication and resonance with the author's thoughts, which is just a word of joy😋 For this reason, I sincerely wish the author a happy life and happiness every day [Love]

It took me two days to read this book... It is really a good book that I rarely encounter in Tomato. It is plain and yet warm. I really feel the author's great care [crying] Such a good book should really be more popular.