After My Identity Was Exposed, the Sword Cultivator Spoiled Me

A very interesting traditional novel about two male protagonists cultivating immortality! My favorite one I watched before was The Time Travel Cultivation of Immortality in Clothes Turned into Fire. I didn't expect to find this type of down-to-earth and serious cultivation, with a little bit of love added in. It's really good~ I like it very much~ The characters, plot and writing are all very good~ Highly recommended~

Chapter 160 Abandon the Pit Positive reviews: Upgrade the flow of immortality, the writing style is not bad, it can be said that it is comparable to most similar works of Da Tomato, the logic is clear, and the fighting scenes are also very exciting. Personal suggestion: The author can polish up the emotional drama, it is painful to watch. If Shen doesn't face Gu, he will be sober in the world, but if he faces Gu, he will be a little girl (she is really written as a girl), age does not match the mentality. In chapter 160, he is about 35 years old and falling in love is still the same as 18 years old. Since the author emphasizes the passage of time, then write the corresponding mentality; after reading chapter 160, the cultivation level of the people around the protagonist has not increased at all, as if time has stopped, only the protagonist is improving his cultivation level, and there is no feeling that the world is running. Looking forward to the author's other works [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

Not bad, not bad, very good! ! ! ! The writing method is not the kind of kissing and falling in love from the beginning, but describing the protagonist's journey of cultivating immortality as if it were a royal way to immortality. In short, the two male protagonists are complementary to each other! ! ! Very good

After reading a few chapters, I was deeply shocked. It is a novel that is definitely beyond the level of Tomato. I have been struggling with the writing style of an elementary school student and the super-fast assembly line narrative for a long time. Finally, I found the fine grain. The writing is calm and smooth, the setting is detailed, and it is a very steady and steady novel about cultivating immortals. Both the setting and the description of the characters are very easy to read and easy to read. If you want to watch a serious drama, it is a must-try.

The plot is okay, but the psychological description is a bit too much. This is not a romance novel. You don't need to pursue gorgeous words, otherwise it will make people tired.

It's really good-looking, and the protagonist's growth experience is also well written. Shen Mo has finally returned to his own identity. This is the real him. The next step is to avenge his family. The author's writing is very good and beautiful. From Shen Mo changing gender for revenge to becoming stronger, the author's writing is very good and beautiful. Can the author write more [send heart][send heart][send heart] I didn't really change my gender, I just used the exercises to change myself into a girl's body shape and appearance. My language was wrong, I'm sorry [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]

It's super good-looking. The golden elixir is no longer everywhere, and the Yuanying is like a dog. The male protagonist lives in a small sect, and the three spiritual roots are already the object of the family's efforts to cultivate. He also realizes that it is really difficult for a small family to cultivate in the world of immortality. Before, all I read were genius articles, and the golden elixir Yuanying was casually mentioned. It felt very worthless. Now I can experience the difficult road of cultivation.

I have read more than 130 chapters. In this article, the male protagonist is dedicated to cultivation, has a tough mind, and the emotional scenes are all there. The screen is not filled with love. Whether it is meeting and getting to know each other, the male protagonist's difficulties and awkwardness, they are all clearly written. I am still looking forward to the follow-up plot. As for Gong [laughing evilly], he is a love brain. But in the future, I hope that the male protagonist will return to the female sect. It is best to come back dressed as a woman, and then find a suitable reason to come back and really go home and get married [laughter]. Hey, to be honest, although the little handsome boy is very nice, I think the little boy girl is cuter [laughs evilly] I have made all the excuses for the male protagonist. The man's disguise is a secret technique to change his appearance. In fact, she is still the senior sister of Su Nu Sect [laughing evilly]

It's very beautiful and well written. It won't be released until Chapter 28. It should be no less than 300 chapters, I'm looking forward to it.

I recommend it here as a 16-year-old reader. Tomato is a rare good article that can make people follow it. It is a story about two men's journey to immortality, rather than a love story between a fake man and a brainless man. Up to now, the grand world view in the book has been continuously unfolded. I believe it will become more and more exciting in the future.