After Falling Off My Horse, I Was Made to Cry by the Swordsman.

A very interesting traditional novel about two male protagonists cultivating immortality! My favorite one I watched before was The Time Travel Cultivation of Immortality in Clothes Turned into Fire. I didn't expect to find this type of down-to-earth and serious cultivation, with a little bit of love added in. It's really good~ I like it very much~ The characters, plot and writing are all very good~ Highly recommended~

Chapter 160 Abandon the Pit Positive reviews: Upgrade the flow of immortality, the writing style is not bad, it can be said that it is comparable to most similar works of Da Tomato, the logic is clear, and the fighting scenes are also very exciting. Personal suggestion: The author can polish up the emotional drama, it is painful to watch. If Shen doesn't face Gu, he will be sober in the world, but if he faces Gu, he will be a little girl (she is really written as a girl), age does not match the mentality. In chapter 160, he is about 35 years old and falling in love is still the same as 18 years old. Since the author emphasizes the passage of time, then write the corresponding mentality; after reading chapter 160, the cultivation level of the people around the protagonist has not increased at all, as if time has stopped, only the protagonist is improving his cultivation level, and there is no feeling that the world is running. Looking forward to the author's other works [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

Not bad, not bad, very good! ! ! ! The writing method is not the kind of kissing and falling in love from the beginning, but describing the protagonist's journey of cultivating immortality as if it were a royal way to immortality. In short, the two male protagonists are complementary to each other! ! ! Very good

After reading a few chapters, I was deeply shocked. It is a novel that is definitely beyond the level of Tomato. I have been struggling with the writing style of an elementary school student and the super-fast assembly line narrative for a long time. Finally, I found the fine grain. The writing is calm and smooth, the setting is detailed, and it is a very steady and steady novel about cultivating immortals. Both the setting and the description of the characters are very easy to read and easy to read. If you want to watch a serious drama, it is a must-try.

The plot is okay, but the psychological description is a bit too much. This is not a romance novel. You don't need to pursue gorgeous words, otherwise it will make people tired.

It's really good-looking, and the protagonist's growth experience is also well written. Shen Mo has finally returned to his own identity. This is the real him. The next step is to avenge his family. The author's writing is very good and beautiful. From Shen Mo changing gender for revenge to becoming stronger, the author's writing is very good and beautiful. Can the author write more [send heart][send heart][send heart] I didn't really change my gender, I just used the exercises to change myself into a girl's body shape and appearance. My language was wrong, I'm sorry [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]

It's super good-looking. The golden elixir is no longer everywhere, and the Yuanying is like a dog. The male protagonist lives in a small sect, and the three spiritual roots are already the object of the family's efforts to cultivate. He also realizes that it is really difficult for a small family to cultivate in the world of immortality. Before, all I read were genius articles, and the golden elixir Yuanying was casually mentioned. It felt very worthless. Now I can experience the difficult road of cultivation.

I have read more than 130 chapters. In this article, the male protagonist is dedicated to cultivation, has a tough mind, and the emotional scenes are all there. The screen is not filled with love. Whether it is meeting and getting to know each other, the male protagonist's difficulties and awkwardness, they are all clearly written. I am still looking forward to the follow-up plot. As for Gong [laughing evilly], he is a love brain. But in the future, I hope that the male protagonist will return to the female sect. It is best to come back dressed as a woman, and then find a suitable reason to come back and really go home and get married [laughter]. Hey, to be honest, although the little handsome boy is very nice, I think the little boy girl is cuter [laughs evilly] I have made all the excuses for the male protagonist. The man's disguise is a secret technique to change his appearance. In fact, she is still the senior sister of Su Nu Sect [laughing evilly]

It's very beautiful and well written. It won't be released until Chapter 28. It should be no less than 300 chapters, I'm looking forward to it.

It's beautiful. It's tied. It's a very steady and steady fairy tale. There are no cheats and the protagonist really rises up step by step. It's not a cool novel but I enjoyed reading it. The first 20 or 30 chapters were actually a bit boring. After I got through it, it became more and more interesting. Weiwei gives a warning to those who want to see a rival. There is not much content in the rivalry. In my opinion, there is not even one. It is just a step-by-step approach for normal people to fall in love. At most, it has a bit of a happy enemy vibe, and a bit of a straightforward feeling (not orientation). From a small misunderstanding at the beginning to ambiguity to conflict and finally to a happy ending, it's very sweet. Seeing that I like this relationship line the most at the moment, both parties can take responsibility for their own actions after careful consideration, and can be tolerant and accepting of each other's shortcomings. This is a normal and well-developed relationship [currently in development]

I recommend it here as a 16-year-old reader. Tomato is a rare good article that can make people follow it. It is a story about two men's journey to immortality, rather than a love story between a fake man and a brainless man. Up to now, the grand world view in the book has been continuously unfolded. I believe it will become more and more exciting in the future.

The pace of this book is so well controlled, so relaxed and relaxed that I don't want to skip chapters at all. It's hearty when it's supposed to be refreshing, and it's tender and touching when it's supposed to be delicate. The author's writing style is so to my liking! The text has a visual feel, reads smoothly, and creates a great atmosphere! This is the top 1 [genre article] I have seen recently, you will regret it if you don't read it! It's not a loss if you enter the pit, the rhythm is soaring, the excitement is intensive, and you have stayed up late to tie it! There is a ceiling for people to knock on, so go and see it!

There is no need to say anything, just two words, beautiful! ! ! Ahhhhhhh, cheers for the author, it's super, super, super good-looking, I must keep writing it! The character design of the protagonist is very good, and the story of cultivating immortals is also very good! Very logical! It's a very good novel (≧∇≦*)! So beautiful!

It is really good-looking, and it made me really feel the difficulty and length of cultivating immortality. It is very different from the usual romance novels about cultivating immortality. This book does not focus on describing the love between the protagonists, but more on describing the growth and experience of the protagonists, making the characters more three-dimensional. It gives me a sense of comfort watching a child grow up, and watching the protagonist become stronger little by little, which is a bit refreshing. This natural and more realistic description made me think a little more and read it seriously. Also, it's different from what I've read before. The ones I've watched before were all about building the foundation, Nascent Soul, etc. Very quickly, without much sense of reality. But this one is about watching the protagonist grow up slowly. Although he is also a genius in the text, compared with others, it gave me a concrete understanding of cultivating immortals. I have read almost fifty chapters so far. Although there is not much description of love, I really like it. I just want to see the growth of the protagonist and then let the love take its course. (I usually rarely post comments, but this time it's mainly because I like it more and more as I watch it, so I'm here to comment.) Also, the characters of the protagonist's boy and girl (even though they are forced) are really novel and I like it! ! Are there any cool and tough beauties?

This book is 10 years old and guaranteed to be authentic. This is one of the few good novels I have read on Tomato. In fact, many of the novels on Tomato are written by young students, but this one is really different. The setting is very novel, the writing is also good, and the protagonists are very vivid. Xiaohan thought that Xiao Mo died and went to the sect. The part made me cry😭 It is really one of the few novels that I have read on Tomato [Blow Kiss]

It's nice to watch. It's not about people going in and out together, which tells a lot. The story of two people is like making wine, Han gave Mo the monster materials when they met for the first time, Mo Wenhan met again and asked for a hundred spiritual stones, and Han gave him a thousand, and Mo gave Han three foundation-building pills and techniques when they met in a secret realm, and Mo was forced to get married and escape, and after reuniting many years later, Mo knocked Han down, lived in Tianjian for a few years, and went to another territory to be separated. , Reunion, Han Yuan first gave birth to Mo Mo decades later, then Mo died, and then Mo turned into a cute baby. When he was sixteen years old, Mo's magic weapon flew towards Mo Han and met Mo, hehe, four years later, the grandfather scolded his grandson, the memory was Mo's and he had the right to remember, and finally it was the wedding, Mo wore wedding clothes and the two of them went to the church, and got up five days later.

To be honest, I didn't expect it to be so amazing. I clicked in and didn't expect to tie it in one night (I stayed up all night to go to school. That's right). The opening chapter really has a male channel feel, and it can be seen that the protagonist's training process is to hone his character step by step. This is really good, and it is different from many (female channel) double-male protagonists on the market today. The protagonist Shou and the protagonist Gong are one of the most annoying couples I read in novels this year. I remember the author also said in the essay that he can't write emotional lines. This emotional line is so well written, I really think it is very natural and sweet, except that the author always sends out knives occasionally, but overall it is still quite sweet. At present, my only two shortcomings are one. The mission team I joined before was dispersed due to Wanfamen's sneak attack. I didn't find any teammates afterwards. Because I thought that the members and their united and strong team were introduced in detail earlier. I thought I would describe it. However, because of this incident (although it was also a small foreshadowing), it gave me an inexplicable feeling that it had stopped suddenly, and the protagonist felt that he didn't care much about his lost teammates.. This point It's a bit shocking (but now that I see it, I feel that the protagonist is egoistic and has some shortcomings in his character, but he is cute in front of the people he loves). The second point is about Grandpa Bai Shu. Sure enough, new maps must be separated. I hope xql will meet again soon! Finally, come on, don't be tired and don't rest~

It's very interesting, the plot is well arranged, and the protagonist's character is also very good (but, well, it's a bit too easy to get the skills, and the content in the early stage is a bit repetitive, but the author quickly adjusted it, and the subsequent reading is very smooth) [Like]. What I like most is that the author updates it stably, and I love it [love]. You must stick to it! ! !

It's super good-looking, the emotional and plot lines are both good, but it's pure sweetness, no acid, pure deception [angry] (no malice). The latest part is too sour (although I know there will definitely be a solution, but I still cried when I was tortured). The early stage is really sweet, and the characters are also very good. Both sides are emotionally equal and there is no one who is lighter and who is heavier. It is not suitable for extreme control. The upgrade flow is also quite enjoyable, but it is not a genius flow. Anyway, highly recommended! ! ! ! [Love] Confession to the author [Love] But the bad thing is that Shou doesn't have many friends around him, and his birth background is not good. He has a good attack background. He may not be able to stand it if he cares too much about Duan Shui in the early stage. Also, the character's beauty is hard to see in the early stage. Although the description is quite beautiful, the description is very long once the attack is released. It feels like Shou has been crushed (no malice), but overall it can still stand out, that is I don't know when Long Aotian's qualifications will be improved. Now the biggest golden finger skill in the early stage is already known to be useless. I don't know what to do in the end to solve the loss of cultivation. I think there is a high probability that it may be in the secret realm, but I can't wait any longer. I hope the young couple can clarify the problem quickly and stop abusing it. It hurts my heart! ! ! ! [Crying][Crying] (Also, the pace of the later period may be a bit slow. Have you forgotten to solve the spiritual root problem of Master Shou? This may also need to be found in the secret realm? Does the princess of Feng Dynasty really like Gong? Although I know I definitely don't like Gong, but it just feels weird. I'm sorry, when can I change the cover? This cover is really ugly. I feel like more people will see it if I change it. After all, Tomato has a lot of colorful covers. If a good-looking one appears every now and then, I will definitely click on it. The first impression will be very good.

The writing is fluent and quite good, and the plot is good. The timeline is relaxed and well-organized, but occasionally there is a lack of logic (for example, in the part about buying elixirs from a shop, there is no experimental process, just talking about the efficacy of the medicine, which is a bit abrupt). Sometimes it feels like the author is missing something in the description. The protagonist also seems to have no good friends. He is surrounded by NPCs who are useful to the protagonist's growth. Except for the important NPCs, which are a bit majestic/proportionate, there are very few group portraits. . There are also quite few NPC creations. Where is the bond () Where is the relationship between master and apprentice () I can't feel it. It seems that everything is a stepping stone on the protagonist's road. Apart from being useful to the protagonist, there is not much description. I can't feel the emotion of "warmth". This is where I feel the shortcomings are However, (that is, the advantage) is the author's writing style. The scenes, environments, actions, and descriptions are quite three-dimensional and can be imagined in a more concrete way. It is very vivid. This is the author's advantage. As for the emotional scenes, the protagonist has less "boyishness", and sometimes (especially when he is dressed as a woman) he looks like he is having visions. . Gong's face is as iceberg as ever, and there is relatively little emotional foreshadowing in Gong's psychological description. Looking at it, I suddenly felt like: I've fallen in love with this, ah, is this an emotional scene? The career line of the protagonist is very well described. It's very good. I love watching career, and the career scenes are very interesting [shy]

Well, there are too few male protagonists who focus on cultivating immortals, let alone well-written, very traditional structures of cultivating immortals, at the food and grass level.

I think this book is very interesting. The author has great cultural background. The cultivation level in the world of cultivation is not inflated. The protagonist also relies on his own efforts to move up. I haven't seen such a realistic cultivation novel for a long time. Unfortunately, I feel that the main plot is still the love line of the two male protagonists. After getting revenge, I feel that the protagonist has no need to move up. It's really a pity. I thought I had finally published a cultivation novel with the main line of correction being love as an auxiliary [crying]. During this period, the protagonist can meet many, many people, make many friends, experience hardships and grow up. However, I feel that the main line is love and the layout is not up to my expectations, but overall it is still good-looking [like].

The writing is really good, and the plot is not cliché. Women's clothing is only necessary when necessary. Although the meat is scum, the writing is very good (¬◡¬)✧. I have really been following this fairy tale, but it is not finished yet. I feel it is still early. I want to give you a good review first. It is really good-looking and can save the book shortage. I feel that Xiao Gu is really suitable for falling in love, and our Xiao Mo is also very good at coaching.

It's good-looking, and the flavor of cultivating immortals is right. It's not like a demon or an immortal at the beginning. The protagonist is practicing steadily and advanced, and the supporting characters are also normal people. There is no simple and crude slap-in-the-face plot or infighting within the sect. I quite like this kind of a lot of cultivating immortals mixed with a small amount of emotional lines. It's light and very memorable.

The author's writing is very good, and the descriptions are very realistic. There is no scorn from Long Aotian, and every step is very practical. Although the man is pretending to be a woman, the protagonist really looks like a normal man, not a squeaking little milk dog. It is quite rare. Many bisexual men have no sense of violation when changing gender, with a blushing face and the corners of their clothes, and big watery eyes that are still trying to talk. . . .

It opened at a little after one o'clock, and it was now 5:40. I originally wanted to watch it, but I ended up hooked. Overall, it was pretty good to watch. The interaction between the man disguising himself as a woman and Gu in the early stages was pretty good. Shen's image was well created. He was perseverant, practiced hard, and finally avenged his family. The plot of Gu Zaishen escaping by faking his own death and later recognizing each other is a little sad, but they are still a very sweet couple. I hope the author will update it soon [Sending Hearts]

It's not bad. There are basically no poisonous points in the whole story. There are two strong characters. Only a small number of connections between the male channel and Shuang Nan need to be polished. To be precise, when the two male protagonists meet, they are two male protagonists who are both strong. When they don't see it, when they leave temporarily, it is no different from the ordinary single male protagonist in the male channel. Generally speaking, the male channel is well written, and the emotional aspect is very delicate in the later stage, but not pretentious.

It's quite interesting so far, and the protagonist's efforts at every stage are written in detail. It really all depends on the protagonist's efforts! ! Although the protagonist's talent is only three spiritual roots, people who work hard in this area are really talented😘

The plot is okay, and there are quite a lot of emotional scenes between the two, but I found that when Shen Mo met Gu Yunhan, he suddenly became cheerful before he had much exposure to his character. It felt a bit sudden. The rest is okay. I hope more people can watch it, and I hope the author can keep updating [Love] [Love]

I've finished it. It's a good novel. The content is more realistic. It describes the difficulty of cultivating immortals. Overall, it's good to read. I'm just a little curious about what happened after the showdown between Gu Yunhan and Feng Di.