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There is no ambiguity without a heroine, and the protagonist is neither a loser nor a loser. He is a master of acting. Although he is the Green Tea Best Actor, the protagonist does not pretend to hurt himself in order to perform. The whole process is based on the premise of protecting himself and obtaining the maximum benefit. The biggest injury he suffered was that he ran out of blue bars and was overdrawn, but he was not hurt physically or mentally [face covering] Bao Shuangwen, Bao does not abuse the protagonist. It's both the cool thing about a male channel pretending to be cool and the cool thing about a female channel pretending to be an innocent white lotus to win everyone's favor and be defended by everyone, making her a heartthrob. Whether it's a male channel reader or a female channel reader, you can catch them all in one place! But readers who want to watch a beef-eating, invincible and brainless novel should not read in. The protagonist of this book is a growth stream. Don't click in when the time comes to say that the author is overpowered. You are the author of Baohuo, please update me quickly! It started to go downhill since Chapter 65, and a lot of the protagonist's scenes were deleted. The author tried his best to create an ugly villain who became the protagonist of stage C. He punched the protagonist Louis and kicked the original protagonist's group. He was so arrogant that he was still living a good life until the latest chapter. In Chapter 69, the protagonist came up with the idea of ​​killing the villain, but until the latest chapter, no results were achieved and he stopped talking. It was very painful for me to follow [laughs] when I saw that the villains were still crazy about their presence, and the protagonists were brutally tortured by them, I felt so suffocated that I couldn't slap my face into the screen. I take back what I said before that this book is not a good book. The protagonist is injured and flees + he can only talk about it and the actual operation is 0 + the protagonist has no difficulty and forcefully brings misfortune to him... The poison points are directly filled up. In fact, if I think about it, the two villains who tried to rob the protagonist at the beginning were not retaliated against in the end. It was nothing wrong. It turned out that they had known about it for a long time, but I discovered it too late [crying] Three comments: It has been changed to three stars. It was so bad that I left the review and didn't want to read it anymore. When I think about the possibility of such a plot to abuse the protagonist in the future, I will "step back and step back!" Whoever wants to watch it can watch it.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a comfortable savior-type protagonist [face covering] Most of the dark and selfish protagonists on the market almost made me vomit [laughing] The protagonist of this book is really good, I highly recommend it [like][like][like][like][like][like]

Let me talk about the conclusion first. It is the fairy grass for The Walking Dead fans, the good grass for HP fans, and the food for Doomsday novels. It is not recommended for people who like dark, deep, dark, dark, or invincible streams. Recommended for fans of The Walking Dead and those who like normal/relatively kind protagonists. The story develops slowly, and the author handles many details well. Although there are still loopholes in some places, it can at least be seen that he has actually read two works. So far, there are basically no poisonous points in so many chapters. The male protagonist has a good character. Although he feels like Conan when he pretends to be a child, the overall behavior pattern is still relatively comprehensive. I cannot say that he has a high IQ, but at least he can be seen as an adult who can think independently. The most important thing is that the male protagonist's outlook on life is very normal. He didn't think "Oh, I want to make up for my regrets! I want to save all the original characters" as soon as he traveled to the past. He also didn't rob things or kill people when he saw them. He is a person who prioritizes his own safety, but is willing to save others within the scope of his ability. And the best thing is that after the male protagonist protects the original characters, they will give him corresponding feedback and help. Unlike some nanny novels, the heroine blocks the gun for the original character, acts as a bait for the original character, and saves the original character countless times. In the end, she is targeted and suspected by the original character, and the blood pressure of the viewer rises... Also, I personally really like the setting where Lei directly exposes his special abilities as soon as he travels through time, especially when he exposes his own abilities to his teammates, but this article does not have such a situation. The process of the male protagonist using magic, including letting other adults listen to his commands, is very natural. I have seen a few books dressed as Karl before, and he is also a child. The supporting character always doubts the protagonist as if he has opened his eyes. Then the protagonist does nothing when he is supposed to show off his abilities, and when he is not supposed to show off, he shows his presence fiercely. It almost poisoned me... Although he is also following the protagonist group and making up for his regrets, the author of this article has a good grasp of the feeling and successfully integrated the original plot into the story. And although it is a male protagonist, it is indeed a plot flow. I personally feel that both men and women can watch it. The description of women is relatively friendly. There is no feeling of being unable to walk when seeing a woman, and there are no vulgar jokes or pornographic jokes. It can be said that this is a relatively high-quality work that I have seen after basically reading the entire Tomatoes Walking Dead fanfic. There are basically no problems except that it is too short. I have listened to and read the book several times, but it is still not enough to read. If the author can insist on finishing it, I feel that it can enter the first echelon of the Walking Dead novels in my personal heart, just like 7 Days to Die and Eyebrows! Come on, author!

It's a very nice fanfic of The Walking Dead. Many of the characters don't have OOC. It's like they really stepped into the if line. Everyone is still alive, which is really great. Our protagonist is also a cute, upright and brave little boy. I hope the author will update more.

I've been reading this book for a long time. Don't be fooled. It's a good-looking fanfic of The Walking Dead that also has elements of Harry Potter. The writing is also very beautiful. What are you going to do, foreign persimmon?

To my surprise, I discovered a combination of magic and the walking dead. The author also writes very well, using his limited ability to change the plot little by little to retain the people he can retain. At present, it seems that everything is following the plot. I don't know if I have thought about how to break away from the original plot in the future. Every time I change the fate of a person, the plot line will definitely be pulled further away from the original point. When it reaches a certain limit, the original plot line will be completely cut off and the author's original plot will be introduced. Very much looking forward to how it unfolds next!

It's been a long time since I've seen a protagonist like this. He's smart and kind but not a holy mother. I've watched too much Killing Killing. It's really fun to see such a delicate protagonist. Harry Potter paired with The Walking Dead is really a fairy tale. But I hope that the balance of combat power will not be destroyed in the future, and the tonic will become an invincible flow. Give our protagonist an owl hahahaha [send a heart] [send a heart]

I haven't watched the TV series, but I have read two fanfics that I couldn't finish reading, but this one is excellent! The golden fingers are quite open, but they are restrained because they need to be in front of others. The arrangement of Shuangdian is very reasonable and not depressing at all. Although there are hints of digging a hole in the middle, it won't take a long time to fill it. This is a good rhythm! The character is not a virgin, but the plot has completed redemption. All in all, it has so many advantages. Although I can't update it every day due to the small number of words, I will definitely add it to my bookshelf for reading. [Like][Like][Like] After meeting "Mark" and going to the research institute, that is, starting from more than seventy chapters, the author suddenly lost the control he had over the novel and the purpose of the novel. It seems like a ghostwriter or a different author. There is no excitement at all, and the rhythm is draggy. Pity.

It's very interesting. I haven't watched The Walking Dead and I don't know much about Harry Potter (I've only watched one or two movies and various fan fiction), but surprisingly it doesn't affect my reading. It's a story about a young wizard who just entered school due to unknown reasons and ends up at the end of the world. It's the first time I've seen this kind of setting. It's so creative. The protagonist is very good at using his familiarity with the plot and his own wisdom to make full use of what he has to achieve his goals. He uses tea talk and actor acting skills to win the favor of various main characters 😂 It's a pretty good story so far, stay tuned! There is something wrong with the recent plot, but I can't put it into words. The part about the shepherd was particularly weird. I used some space to describe the various psychological changes and performances of the shepherd. What did I want to express? The death was too hasty. Maybe it cannot be said to be hasty. It should be that the author deliberately wanted to highlight the character through a contrast between the shepherd's repeated struggles and the neat and tidy killing process... Emmm, I don't know how to describe it. All in all, the pacing is very strange, and the whole journey ahead is very refreshing and exciting, and it is exciting to read. The last few chapters of Kidnapping were so drowsy that I felt drowsy after reading them, and my mood did not change at all after reading them. Moreover, there are too many descriptions of the image of Louis as a child, emphasizing "he is just a child" all the time. Although this is objectively true, they have experienced a lot together. It is obvious that Louis's magic is shown in many places, but they use various excuses to force the child to suppress it. There's something so beautiful about Conan that Xiaoran never realizes that Conan is Shinichi.

Wow, even though it is still being serialized, it can already be seen that this is a very good fanfic. The author even saved the horse that Rick rode in the first season, and the character's personality was restored very well. I can feel the author's respect for the original work and his dedication to the work. I hope the author will be faster and not enough [star]

There is no doubt that it is an immortal product, with the excitement of walking corpses and the magical impact of HP. The setting of the protagonist is really a bonus. Many fan authors write protagonists. No matter how much they spend on describing their appearance, it is still difficult to describe their character charm. However, the protagonist of this book is simply awesome and makes me feel cute and handsome. Then let's get back to the plot. I haven't read the original version of The Walking Dead, but I really like to read the fanfics. If I read enough, I'll know the general plot. There are group portraits, each character has a distinct and contradictory personality, and the plot is also very exciting. Let's talk about the protagonist's learning of magic, and it's not just cheating right from the start, which is good. After all, adding more hooks to the exciting plot will in a sense reduce the readability of the novel. This book grasps this degree very well. The protagonist is slowly growing and learning through his own efforts, and he has a brain. For the part he describes, the protagonist uses something like a yo-yo to throw something like a yo-yo to kill walking zombies in order to cover up magic, and then uses a floating spell to retrieve it. This design and writing made me feel that the author is really thinking about how a person with magic would cover it up if he traveled through the zombie world. This kind of writing method that puts oneself in others' shoes is very good and gives a sense of empathy. And then back to the characters, everyone is pretty good so far. I think Sean in other books is somewhat gloomy and uncontrollable, but this Sean feels a little gentler to me. I don't know if he has been cured by the protagonist. All in all, the protagonist is really loved by the group. I hope this book is CP-free. Tied again. I really can't bear the tears. I couldn't help crying when I saw the old people in the nursing home writing letters to say goodbye. In fact, I knew it was their own choice, but I thought that some of them might die in the battle with the walking zombies. Like the protagonist group, a group of old people were gathering together one second, and one of them might be attacked and died by the walking zombies the next second.

Chapter 44, the character description is in line with the original work, the plot has no awkwardness or poisonous points, it is warm and plain, suitable for eating. We have not encountered any hostile forces so far, and it is not clear whether the killing will be decisive. Looking at Chapter 44, the writing is good so far.

It's good to watch, as long as it doesn't have a female protagonist, and the walking dead (the main reason is that the combat power cannot be improved too fast, otherwise it will be unwatchable. Learning magic takes time anyway, and the protagonist should learn by himself and grow up as a normal wizard). After writing it, I can also write about Hogwarts, invincible

There are very few stories about the magical connection between The Walking Dead and Harry Potter, but finally there is one, and the two chefs are ecstatic [blowing kisses]

A zombie fanfic, preferably a fanfic, but it's banned.

This is the first time I have encountered a novel that meets my three views. The protagonist has gained a lot of friends without much effort to please or establish his authority. This is at least ten years ahead of those who just slap people in the face and pretend to be cowards. Although it's a little small, it's still interesting to watch. I hope the author will get better and better. It's great to feel that the author is serious and attentive in describing everyone's mental journey and transformation.

When I saw the push on the home page, I was not convinced. I thought it was just one of the many Walking Dead fandoms, and it was just mixed with the Harry Potter setting that I became curious and came in. I didn't expect this book to be truly well-written, with a smooth plot and a brilliant protagonist. I originally thought that the setting of magic would be difficult to write well, and if I were not careful, the whole book would turn into a nonsensical cheating novel. However, the protagonist did not blindly reveal his abilities, but carefully disguised himself, wrapping himself up as a child who grew up 'faster' than others in the apocalypse. There is no Tom Sue, and there is no strange filter on the original characters. This novel is really a super masterpiece among The Walking Dead fans! ! I hope the author can keep up the good work and update...! !

It's really great to watch. The acting in the first few scenes may be a bit overwhelming, but the writing and plot after that are all top-notch! Still my favorite HE savior! I originally wanted to save up more time before posting, but unfortunately it was blocked.

Very well written, very good. However, the protagonist can be strengthened. After all, he is an 11-year-old child and is still a bit weak. At least you have to be able to protect yourself.

This theme is quite novel. Hogwarts Wizard➕The Walking Dead: The End of the World. Although the protagonist is a child and has not yet entered Hogwarts, it does not affect the protagonist's changes to the plot, and the changes are reasonable. The protagonist also uses magic reasonably, and does not tell others about his abilities. Instead, he uses reasonable means to package himself as a precocious "genius boy" so that everyone can trust him and gain a certain right to speak. It can be said that he has become the "favorite" of the protagonist group.

I'm an 11-year-old wizard, and you want me to fight the walking dead? Soda iced tea The world background of the two fans tells a story of their own. The fusion of world backgrounds is quite fresh. Because it has its own story, it doesn't count as being loyal to the fandom. It depends on the individual, but I can still accept it. The little protagonist's golden fingers and settings add a relaxed feeling to this somewhat hard-core world. The actor's childishness has become a kind of protective color for him. The image created is a bit biased towards the female channel's dark underbelly and little green tea, which is actually quite fun to read. But at the same time, there are also the trivialities of some female videos, and many plots are too foreshadowing and a bit bland. Four to four and a half stars, the whole story has the most basic of my own thoughts, and there are also fresh aspects.

The overall plot is smooth, and it didn't affect my reading at all even if I haven't watched The Walking Dead. And I like the character of the protagonist very much (a young wizard who looks like a child but is too smart to be admitted to Hogwarts). I look forward to the subsequent development of the plot. Come on ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

It's a good read. I haven't watched The Walking Dead. I watched it because I'm a fan of Harry Potter. I thought I wouldn't be able to understand it, but I didn't expect that I wouldn't understand it at all. It's a good read. The author writes it very well. I finished reading it completely immersed! Wait for the update~

A very good XHP fanfic of The Walking Dead, Abominable Tomatoes

I heard that 5 stars is an invalid rating, so I gave it 4 stars. It's really good. It's my first time watching a fanfic of The Walking Dead. I haven't watched the show yet, so I can understand it. The most important thing is that the protagonist focuses on his own safety and does not have left and right brains fighting each other. It is really great. Complaints: The literary saint next door, after traveling through the main god space, clearly mentioned in the previous article that looking at the red name of the reincarnation determines whether it can be killed. After seeing that an ordinary reincarnation has a white name, when he went to save the pirate Whitebeard, he was attacked by Akainu (on top of the war), and then thought: bother him to see if Whitebeard has a red name. He must first heal his injuries before he can see if he has a red name. What a battle between the left and right brains.

This book is really well written. Although I have not read the original work, the teacher has written each character in a very three-dimensional way, the setting is well organized, the foreshadowing clues are interlocking, the words and sentences are carefully considered, the plot advancement is smooth and reasonable, and the rhythm is relaxed and relaxed. It is even hard to believe that this is just the teacher's creation. I believe that although the teacher has never written a book before, he must have done very in-depth research on the original work and put a lot of effort into his own work. Otherwise, it would be impossible to tell this story so vividly for people who don't know it. And the most important thing is that even if the author is busy at work, he is still willing to take the time to listen to the readers' voices, which is even more valuable. Because of this, it must be given a five-star rating. The coming-of-age genre is always the most touching: compared to those mindless plots that start off with a lot of tricks, what I saw in this novel were real people living in a world that was described in detail. I am very happy to read this book in my spare time. I recommend reading it. You will not regret it.

1. No metaphor, no redundancy, no exaggeration. It should be realistic, compact, cold and smooth. Second, use short sentences, verbs, and nouns as much as possible, and use the compound form of "one sentence + moderate paragraph". Third, try to let the writing have "blank space" and "charm". Fourth, gesture is meaning, and action is logic—let the behavior itself be narrated with absolute precision, necessity, and texture. Fifth, use form to control meaning, and use lack to make surplus - control emotions through extreme control of the space, rhythm, and reality of words, and let the "blank" roar. Sixth, within the "living creature", will drives the breath, and the breath shapes the form - every part of the text is driven by an inner, unstoppable will to life, and its external form (rhythm, pause, explosion) is just the breath of this will. 7. Relationality of "living things": Field symbiosis and mutual awakening - all elements in the scene (people, objects, light, sound, smell, space) are in a symbiotic "life field". The "movement" of any one element will disturb the entire field and awaken the "reaction" of other elements.

It's so beautiful, the characters are not OOC throughout, the author's image is so well grasped, and the pace is fast and sloppy. The combination of Harry Potter and The Walking Dead is very novel. I just like the adventure story of a little kid. There is no meal replacement in the whole network.

，，Yes, this means that the protagonist cannot rashly let them see that he can really do magic, and how can an eleven-year-old child kill everyone? The author's writing is so good, but it is not enough to watch Hungry Rice Rice [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]

The writing is very good, the writing and characters are good, but it's a pity that the writing method is supplementary, the writing is not exciting enough, the child protagonist is not cool enough, not strong enough, it will make you sleepy😴. What if the protagonist is set to be sixteen years old, has learned magic for five years, is physically strong, has amazing speed, is 1.9 Meters tall, 200 pounds, handsome, has many powerful magics, and does not rely on the virgin, cuteness, and kindness to join, but relies on strong physical fitness and good hidden magic, semi-invincible writing, and can fall in love by the way, wouldn't it be more enjoyable? I also have a selfish intention. In fact, I only saw the prison and the small town in The Walking Dead. I didn't watch the rest and have no interest. The author's writing is so good. When will he write a modern post-apocalyptic novel in his country? The background of The Walking Dead is a zombie setting. The protagonist is an extra or a substitute, a security guard, a bodyguard, etc., And the outbreak occurred in Hengdian. The author's plot description of the characters is delicate, and it will definitely be good to watch.