Help! the Villain Who Penetrated the Male Video Seems to Have a Crush on Me

[Huge face] Thank you to the teachers who persisted in reading and the teachers who gave me gifts. This is the first time I have written such a long article, purely out of love. [Working on the manuscript] There are many shortcomings that need to be improved, and there are also logical problems that have not been solved. After all, this is a love story, so sweetness is enough. [Salute] I'm actually a bad name maker. Some names are really chosen randomly, including some important supporting roles. [Full] Anyway, we don't give you a certain amount of foreign persimmons, that's all. I hope I can make progress next time and complete the commemoration.

The male and female protagonists of this book are what a couple of gods and immortals should look like. The one who pricked me the most was the second male lead. I felt really distressed, but for him, being able to use his own way to protect those he wanted to protect was another kind of perfection.

The male protagonist is quite cute, the second male lead is a bit heart-wrenching, and the best friend is quite interesting. I like this character very much [star]. Both boys and girls are very cute. There are some logical problems and some adjectives are piled up, but it does not affect the viewing. Generally speaking, it is okay. Come on [mark]

To be honest, this article is really in line with my taste. I also like the character of the heroine. In terms of plot, the system did not control much after it was offline in the later stage. You can feel free to rush forward. The progress of the plot is okay. The heroine is not yet enlightened, but the hero really likes her. The characters of other people in it are also very good. However, I think the author can simplify the fighting scenes. Some fighting scenes are really too much. I suggest focusing more on the plot. Also, I hope the author really doesn't want to be too romantic.

The writing is really good, but the second male lead is really nice to the female protagonist, even if it's the original protagonist, so I sincerely hope that the second male lead is a bad guy, so that there will be one less person to deal with, hehe

The body is that of a man, but the soul is still that of her who would go to all the troubles for her best friend. Seeing "him" using his male identity to protect her while unconsciously revealing his little habits, this sense of dislocation is both sweet and sad...

The emotional pull between the male and female protagonists is well written, and the heroine's occasional "loving wife" attributes are within an acceptable range. But the ending of the second male lead was so hasty that it broke my heart... The details of the writing could be polished, it was a bit too packed with adjectives. I feel that the writing style could be streamlined. I give five stars to the new author ~

Compared to the male and female protagonists, I was obsessed with the female protagonist and my best friend the whole time! The body has changed but the soul knows each other. The deep understanding and companionship that transcends gender prick me more than love. The whole world thinks we are CP, but actually we are sisters.

[Learned] [Learned] [Learned] [Learned] It's really good-looking... I like the third male... Ah, no... The second female? ... Sister-in-law really smells good. [Stare][Stare][Stare]

The interaction between a woman wearing a man's clothes and her best friend is simply a sniper of my orientation! Touching your abs makes me laugh to death. Inside, they are still the sisters who gossip and complain together. The contrast is so cute that they roll over. So annoying!

Yes, the writing and fighting have improved a lot compared to your first book...[Chigua]

Why can't you write more scenes with the second male lead? The ending feels like it can still be unfolded, please make extra compensation!

It's ok, average, just pass the time and take a look.

The way the male protagonist protects his shortcomings is very poignant. Although the female protagonist sometimes seems weak, her growth line is visible, and the ending is a bit hasty. Please fill in the gaps with extra chapters. Occasionally there are contradictions in details, but the core of the story is moving.

I read a little bit and it was quite interesting, but I feel that the plot of the article is very similar to a novel I read before. Anyway, please give it a try, author.

Very good, the language is fluent and the writing is easy

It's okay, you'll get used to five stars even if it sucks. [Understood]

The front is a bit like a scumbag, but overall it's still good. Come on, teacher!

It's okay, but the style doesn't quite suit Tomato. I'll comment after reading it.

After listening to it for a while, I found it quite good. The male protagonist hopes to be stronger in the later stage. The first part is too innocent and has a bit of a love mind. The descriptions of the plot, combat and weapons are pretty cool. [Like] Come on

It's very interesting. The male protagonist's changes in mood are described very delicately. I like it.