Sixty Cannon Fodder: Overturning the Script of the Evil Original Heroine

Come on, big brother, but I feel that some parts are written and I feel a little uncomfortable to read. I am stuck between reading and not reading. First of all, I know in which era many people in rural areas have a perception that girls should marry into a good family. But the heroine's perception is also the same. If you want to marry someone to change your destiny, you are in the countryside. You don't have to go to the countryside. When the college entrance examination is resumed, you will have a job and work hard for your career. , I read more than 20 chapters, and I remember that it was mentioned many times about getting married, having a good face, etc. It only needs to be mentioned once or twice in writing. It is very uncomfortable to mention it multiple times. Also, when it was mentioned that Shen Zhilan had to work in space, why did he write "She will definitely not be as delicate as me after years of accumulation"? It was just to highlight the whiteness and tenderness of the heroine. There was no need to write this sentence. In other words, the heroine could gloat or laugh at her misfortune. Just this sentence, it feels like a stuck in the throat. In short, what you wrote is fine. These are my personal feelings.

The front part is quite nice, and the rhythm is well written! It just keeps emphasizing the appearance of the female character and marrying a man, etc. It is easy to ignore other advantages of being a woman, and the heroine is frightened out of her mind when she suddenly appears. She has used space for so many years, and she also used space to take revenge on the original heroine. It is not so easy to be frightened. Then there is a bit of separation between the Void Temple and Black and White Impermanence. I kind of want to skip this part, but I look forward to the author's next content, come on!

It looks good and doesn't feel aggrieved. When will I be able to steal all the golden fingers?

Fortunately, the feeling of this control group is that they are all cousins?

Can kill some time. Goldfinger is not exaggerated. The heroine is an ordinary person, happy every day, and good to her parents, grandparents, and brother. The heroine is quite cautious. She can resist not telling her family about the space, and she can resist not bringing out the unique food of the space. The heroine tries not to have a direct conflict with the reincarnated original heroine and will take revenge secretly.

Good-looking, good-looking, super good-looking, super good-looking

Haha, I really like this style, and the heroine has a pretty good character. It doesn't look depressing. I've read over 50 chapters so far, and it's pretty good.

I just saw it, not much, it's not bad

Very good, keep up the good work

It's pretty good-looking, and the heroine doesn't suffer.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

I don't know how old Zhixia Chuan was when he came here? How strange is it that he and Zhenguo started fighting just after they separated? Can't control your limbs? If you run away after a fight, is the room at home locked?

It's funny, but it would be better with less swearing.

Not the kind of person who is born again and calculated, I personally like it

Why is it gone when I wake up? Cultivation of immortality and fantasy are all acceptable! Do you think it would look better and be more interesting?

Yes, the heroine is very smart

It looks quite exciting, but that Sister Tang looks annoying. The author assumes that Sister Tang will not die so quickly, otherwise she should be killed quickly [laughing and crying]

Overall, it's pretty cool. Anyway, I hope the author will work hard to update it.

It's very beautiful, very beautiful, and well written.

It looks pretty good so far. It's my favorite article. If you want a longer one, come on, update it soon.

It's very beautifully written. It's wonderful.

I like that the heroine is smart, cautious and kind, and the plot is also very reasonable.