A Collection of Short Stories Criticizing Yandere

You can write your favorite one at the end of the corresponding chapter or story. If the data is good enough and there are enough people talking about it, the author will consider extending the stories in the author's mind.

A very good yandere story, but the details are not enough. You can consider extending the short story to ten to fifteen chapters, so that the emotional development of the characters will be more reasonable.

The details of the relationship and the development of the story are really real. Some of them are exactly the same as when I was talking to my ex-girlfriend. I felt like I was being treated as an adulterer [face covering]. However, some details are a bit flawless, but the flaws cannot be concealed.

The plot is good, but I prefer the Master chapter, with its strong sense of betrayal and evil depravity. Also, let me mention that Xiaohan is a character [Like]

Most of it is okay. I feel it is better than a short story. Some of it is connected to the later part. It is okay, but there is a very small part that does not feel consistent with the title. Overall, it is good-looking and there are not many interesting points.

I've read about chapter 34, and I think it's pretty good. Some people in the comments said that this is no longer a yandere, but pure love. But I remember that the first time I saw a yandere was because he only saw my extreme love in his eyes, so I felt that a yandere didn't necessarily have to kill with a knife. Of course, it was just my personal whim. I like both very much😋😋😋

In the words of a senior, I am very passionate about it. ੭ ˙ᗜ˙ ੭

A novel novel, using dozens of short stories to compose an entire "Encyclopedia of Yanderes". The author's writing style is very good. Even the short stories can still be read with gusto. Some stories can make me think about life with great emotion. Such a good writing style is such a novel. The short story is too unfair. The subject matter should be expanded. If not, you can slowly change it. For example, reduce the number of short stories, increase the plot of a single story, and describe the plot of a single story in a more detailed and comprehensive way. I believe this will be better and can slowly hone your writing skills.

All I can say is that this book is really beautiful. The main reason is that I read a book before reading this. The male and female protagonists didn't talk much. They were entangled with several male leads, third male actors, second female actors, and third female actors. In the end, it was he (I skipped to the last one). It looked like I really had a myocardial infarction. [Crying] Compared to that, it's good to read the short stories in this book from time to time. Reading one article every day is better than a living god.

Modern yandere version of Strange Stories from a Chinese Studio [Confirmation], very beautiful The back doesn't look as good as the front, I don't know why ◑.◑

It's a super, super good collection of short stories. It's this kind of possession and love that makes people feel most at ease and satisfied. Although it's still a bit restrained due to force majeure, it's still super reassuring. Please keep writing. The more I read it, the more I like it. It makes me feel that all the cells in my body are trembling. I look forward to the author's continued updates.

The writing style of this book is definitely top-notch among tomatoes. After reading it for so many years💩, I finally found a piece of gold in the pile of shit. I dare say that this book is definitely better than most romance novels written by Tomato with a score of 9.0 Or above. I dare say that this is indeed the best yandere story I have ever read in Tomato.

So far, from what I have read, the Miao one is acceptable, the others are not, especially the eight-foot tall man who runs over and rides on the horse. It's scary. I can only say that the author's writing is very good and it drew me in unconsciously [laughs]

A very good yandere story, but the details are not enough. You can consider extending the short story to ten to fifteen chapters, so that the emotional development of the characters will be more reasonable.

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Come on, big brother who writes about yandere! [Adoration]

The writing is very good. I could write more short stories to extend it. But the ending is too hasty. I could write about the male protagonist getting fucked by a yandere.

The writing style is good, the emotional logic, and the motivations for liking are written more completely, which is better than most of Tomato's yandere articles (I personally think that the three articles of Teacher, Master, and Puppet are the best. These three articles are a bit amazing to me, and I feel that the emotions are the most delicate and reasonable)

The writing style is very good. In just a few chapters, the story can be written concisely and clearly. If you pick any one at random and polish it a little, it will become a very good light novel. Kudos to the author.

Very exciting! Each short story constitutes a novel. If you don't like it, you can just skip to the next story. Each story is different and varied. It's really nice to read a chapter like this after playing Naruto😊

Not only yandere, but also pure love. Love to watch The writing is delicate, the characters are three-dimensional, especially the deep understanding of love, and the madness of the yandere... In short, this is definitely a good novel

The Dragon Niang part must be fully scored [give heart] [give heart]

Very good, with various types. I said it was yandere, but I only saw pure love [almost crying]

It's my type, I'll give it 5 stars [laughing evilly]

There are no other shortcomings except that the ending of each chapter is a bit hasty. I hope the author can write a fuller ending.

Different from other collections of novels and essays, the feeling of reading this one feels more like... What if?

This book is also quite explosive in the explosion world.

It's very interesting and I'm looking forward to Lazy's next book!

Good books, good books, you can find what you like among them Meet our short-term needs, and there will be a long-form version later The author's writing is good (*≧∪≦)👍🏻, I hope the author will greatly speed up the update

Support, support, it's good to watch and watch more