Prehistoric: My Father Was Lawless During the Three Pure Periods

It looks good so far, except for some minor flaws (such as Sanqing becoming a foster father for no apparent reason). Then I would like to give some small suggestions to the author ~ Don't write too much about emotional scenes. I guess most of the book friends who like to read prehistoric novels don't like to read books with female protagonists and too many emotional scenes. Don't write them into harem novels later on! The protagonist's spiritual treasures should really be streamlined [smirking] There are too many! In battle, the imperial treasure also consumes mana and energy. Some of them should be synthesized (such as those five lotus pedestals!) And should be given to disciples or his sons and daughters! It's almost enough to have one in each of the four categories of attack, defense, and enlightenment functional types. Finally, I wish the author to be full of literary thoughts and keep up the good work! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] By the way, there's one more thing! Some places or treasures can block the way of heaven. The protagonist does not need to hide some things, he can tell the Sanqing! For example, why didn't Sanqing remind you to use the same spirit treasure when killing corpses? Even if you are really scared, you can still tell me in a guiding light.

It looks good. The author would like to work hard to update it, but there are still some details that I didn't notice. For example, Bai Lian said that it was already mentioned. I read it several times and couldn't see where it was mentioned that the Sanqing Immortal Master knew that the protagonist had this. It was only later used to let him know. Maybe I didn't see it [laughing] [laughing]

Real and objective, multi-dimensional description, clear structure

I can give it five stars. In fact, this novel is very strange. The description of the interaction between the protagonist and the female character is relatively petty, but the overall layout and plot design are much more grand than the average prehistoric fan fiction. The biggest poisonous point of this book is that the protagonist, as the son of the Sanqing Dynasty, takes Nuwa, Houtu, and Yuanfeng as the heroines (I don't object to the female protagonists in Honghuang novels, but the difference in seniority is really poisonous). However, there are many highlights, for example: the plot where the protagonist plants seven gourd babies is novel and interesting; both the lich and the lich have a happy ending, Emperor Jun and Taiyi are reborn as the Five Emperors, and the ancestral witch is reborn in the underworld. This book does not completely and radically deny witches or demons like other articles, but affirms the excellence of both (even the prehistoric beings)... At present, the prehistoric world is ascending, and all practitioners are united, and the scene is very shocking. All in all, I can still give it five stars.

When it comes to how the author upgrades the ancient world [eating melons], there are only three ways that I can think of: 1. The system gives rewards to upgrade. 2. It is to conquer the heavens and plunder the origins of other worlds, such as going to Western mythology such as Greece and Northern Europe. 3. It is to conquer the chaos demons and use their bodies to nourish the ancient world to upgrade. I have not thought of the others. Moreover, I think things like upgrading should require the help of external objects. If it relies on one's own efforts within the prehistoric era, it can only be regarded as internal material generating internal circulation. Upgrading should belong to external circulation to improve one's own personality. In my opinion, method 2 is currently the most reliable. And the author, can the human race write in a different way? After all, if you have already developed the mobile phone and Internet, why not click on human technology to the point where you can develop interstellar battleships, break through the prehistoric world and travel through the chaos to all the worlds [smile] After all, I see that many prehistoric literati races are prosperous within the prehistoric world. Speaking of the author, the main character has a son. I would like to make some suggestions for his cultivation in the future, which I hope the author can adopt. [Laughs] Author, if you look at the protagonist, King of Ideas + Nuwa's Law of Creation, I think they can produce a very wonderful chemical reaction. [Thinking] [Laughing evilly] I think this kid can think about science and technology in terms of cultivation, invent all kinds of fantastic equipment, create laws and prove the truth, and be a scientist. On the surface, he is gentle and has no power, but in fact, if he is provoked, he will punch hard. Moreover, the protagonist does not lack fighting power, but lacks a living treasure to liven up the atmosphere, and the prehistoric world lacks a bit of fun. [Laughing evilly] I think it's totally feasible for the protagonist's son to be an auxiliary technology player. He will definitely be favored by the protagonist when he is born. I think it is feasible to add some technological points to him. And the birth system of the protagonist's son should give some rewards, right [laughing evilly]? I suggest just using the etheric phase engine from Stellaris. [Laughing evilly] This is a big bomb. All the resources in the ancient world are gathered to build this bomb, and then it collapses and reaches the dimension. It is a radical way of upgrading the dimension, but if it is not controlled well, it may blow up the original prehistoric world. [Laughs] The protagonist's son had a special connection after seeing it and couldn't put it down. He wants to build this thing every day. As a group favorite, no one dares to mess with it and can only condone it. In terms of the character of the protagonist's son, we can refer to Keli in Genshin Impact. He plays a funny character and loves Tianfu. He thinks about building bombs with the etheric phase engine and throwing bombs everywhere, leading him to ascend to the ancient world. I first set up a scenario. I went to the West to test the Two Saints of the West in order to build a bomb, but I didn't dare to mess with them and could only cry while watching. The protagonist's son is getting into trouble everywhere in order to adapt to the etheric phase engine. The protagonist is well aware of the power of this thing, but as the group's pet, he can only pamper him. The protagonist wipes his butt and writes it as a side story. It's definitely a lot of fun, and his ability as a funny character is immeasurable. I think it's also in line with the identity of the protagonist's son. [Sinister smile]

Brothers, hold your hands high and hope for many five-star reviews. My book is updated, the logic and plot are good in every aspect If you have any doubts, you can ask the author. The author can explain. Please don't give low stars. Please

How should I put it? Although this article conflicts with the original article in some places, it is really good-looking. It won't be too tiring to watch, and it won't make you want to watch it. Well, it's still worth recommending.

Very nice, really fun to watch. The content is rich yet concise, and the plot is deliberately touching, giving people a sense of resonance. The characters are vividly drawn, with clear layers and an orderly plot. Every move, every word, every word is filled with warm sincerity, and the family affection, friendship, and camaraderie revealed cannot be said to be insincere. Personally, I feel deeply inspired by it and have learned a lot from it. To others, it is even more extraordinary to discuss friends through letters, express their feelings and speak to each other. I wish the author good health, all the best, happiness, a balance between work and rest, and a life-oriented approach. Go up one more floor, one more step up the ladder.

Not bad, you can read it in Shuhuang

I personally think it's okay

You're kind of pretty, brother, and you're kind of fragrant, brother.

It's very well written. It's the best book I've ever read.

Prehistoric times are not about love

Very well written, cheers

It's good-looking. It's similar to the book written by Dao Zun in the Great Wilderness. It's both good-looking. Please give your best to the author and your grades will improve.

I had read too many ancient books and was a little tired of it. Until I saw this book, my eyes lit up. It was very well written.

This book can be used as a guide, this book must be read

Not bad, keep watching

Personally I think it looks very good, and the heroine in it doesn't hold anything back either.

It's so beautiful. The author will continue to update it. Come on, come on, come on.

The background of the protagonist is so awesome. I hope to develop into the world and conquer the world. Upgrade the origin of ancient times

The plot is okay, and there's nothing wrong with the writing either.

Highly recommend a unique book

It's beautiful. Why is the rating so low? It's relatively relaxed and humorous.

It's well written and very innovative, keep up the good work! ! !