Star Dome Railway: Evil Haunts Oneself

It's a very different start, which is considered very good among fandoms. It's much better than those stallion stories. Based on the experience of the protagonist, if one of the protagonists dies in Yunwu, he will be haunted by dreams and wind and clouds [sneaky laugh]

It should be two heroines or multiple heroines, one Kageryu and one Little Black Tower doll. His imagination is also good, getting along with Yun Shang Wu Xiao is also very sweet, and the strength of the Lord of Extinction is also online. I just felt that the turning point was written rather bluntly, and it was immediately deduced that the future King of Extermination was going to be expelled from the country.

My favorite Bengtie fanfic at the moment, the protagonist setting is very novel, at least so far I have not seen a setting where the protagonist is the Lord of Extinction. The writing is very delicate, and the plot is also very good, but it is too short, Hajishe, even the cow next door doesn't dare to rest like that [laughs][laughs][laughs] But you still need to pay attention to your health [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] Only with a good body can you update steadily.

It's good to watch, I stayed up late to watch it and tied it ('▿'). The plot is not sharp at all, and the integration of Yun Shang Wu Xiao is not abrupt at all. The protagonist is a beautiful, strong and miserable type, with online combat power. The description after the darkening is very good, because the promises that are kept and the companionship around him return to relatives and friends again. If you don't have a knife, take a quick look\( ͯω ͯ)/

I have been following this book for so long. , Is one of the few stories in Bengtie fan fiction that can connect the stories together and change its ending to a better direction. The logic inside is also very clear. The protagonist Shui Neng has a foreshadowing, which is not too abrupt and has a sense of drama. The scenes are connected one after another. The plot has its ups and downs, but it doesn't have that sense of layering or industrial feel. The interaction between the protagonists in it is also very interesting. It is a very good fanfic. Very excellent. It's worth watching together. Very good, very good. The plot inside is not perfect or makes people feel regretful. Everything has changed and moved in a better direction. It's just that the pace is a little faster. He did it too slowly, he did it even harder and harder [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

I watched some of them and they seemed good, so I wanted to ask if there is a female protagonist? Is it no cp?

The plot is detailed and moving, which is my favorite type. It is well written and the author often responds. If he is asked to add more chapters, he will add more chapters, which shows that he has a lot of stock [laughs] and urges him to update more! I hope there will be more updates, maybe 9 or 10 chapters a day would be even better! [Laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

Indeed, the whole text is Wu Dao. The protagonist is positive and cheerful, optimistic and Wu Dao is slightly sweet.

Yes, it is a rare book that is well-educated and very strong. At present, it can be said that as long as the Star God does not take action, then the Dark Moon will never set and Luofu will never be destroyed. [Laughing evilly] The only problem is that Xingxiao has probably prepared a big one for the protagonist. [Facepalm] And, judging from the current situation, isn't Xingxiao also one of the female protagonists? [Sinister smile]

The book is good, the author's "creation" in creative ability is quite good, the plot is generally fine, relatively innovative, and I support it. But the "writing" aspect is a little worse. The relationship between the characters is sometimes a bit rushed, and the emotional aspect is also a bit fast, which makes the characters feel a bit separated (the characters are a bit OOC in short, but it is okay to build up the relationship in dozens of chapters). But it can also be explained as the special attraction of high-dimensional real creatures to low-dimensional false characters. Overall, it's worth watching. There are some minor flaws. I give it 5 stars.

In this novel, the author uses his unique talent and imagination to show us a vivid and fascinating world. The characters in the story have distinct images and vivid personalities, making people feel like they are immersed in their lives. The author uses words skillfully. The emotions of the story are deeply rooted in people's hearts and make readers moved. The structure of this novel is rigorous and the plot is full of ups and downs, making people want to put it down. The author's depiction of the characters' psychology is delicate and nuanced, showing the glory and darkness of human nature. At the same time, the themes in the novel are profound and thought-provoking, allowing readers to gain enlightenment and lessons while enjoying reading. The novels written by the second author have beautiful language and solid writing skills. Whether they are describing delicate emotions or showing grand scenes, they all show extremely high artistic standards. This work finds a perfect balance between literary value and entertainment, allowing readers to enjoy the pleasure of reading while also feeling the author's ingenuity. In short, this novel can be regarded as the pinnacle work of the two creators. Whether it is the storyline, character creation, or ideological connotation, it shows the author's superb literary attainments. We have reason to believe that this work will continue to inspire more literary lovers in the future and become an immortal classic.

Everything about the plot is okay, and it's very sweet. It's pure sweetness without any knives. You can watch it with confidence.

It's a good story, although the writing is not that amazing, especially the plot of the protagonist's suffering, which I personally feel is a bit too cliche. Some of the explosive plots are not appealing, and some of the plot arrangements still feel like they were forced by the author. However, it is pretty good among Tomato fanfics and can be read.

Author, you write so well! I like Ruan Mei who appears here. Mirror flow is not easy. Heita likes it very much! The most important thing is that the little black tower is so beautifully shaped! The stars are also delightful!

It's so good, it's my favorite among all the Beng Tie novels I've read so far. There are also some good ones, such as those by An Ming/Ye Yanfeng/Su Mo, which are all very good, but I think I still like the plot of this book more. The author is too slow to update. When I found this book, it already had more than 100 chapters, but I finished it in a few days😭

How do you feel about developing more female protagonists?

Good-looking, full of bonding power. Kouya [punches] without swords.

The writing is okay, the updates are a bit slow, and it's worth a read, but if Bai Heng doesn't come back, your five stars will be gone [smile][smile][smile] Although the new version of Black Tower is very popular, don't forget about mirror flow. I read this book just for the mirror style.

⭐Ah, the legendary writer⭐ ❤️The gospel official of words❤️ 💔How long will it take for you to update a new chapter💔 📚Relive history! 📚 🌊Cross the ocean of text and data traffic🌊 ❤️Bring the latest updates right in front of my eyes❤️ 🤫The process of reading your text🤫 🎓Always reminds me of the happy time when I was a teenager studying🎓 🤲🏻If there is a one in ten thousand chance, you can update ten chapters a day🤲🏻 🥰My victory will be certain🥰 🥵In the name of readers, I will invite you to step into the prison of explosive updates🥵

It's beautiful, not sharp at all, and extremely sweet. I'll keep watching it.

Holy shit, this book is really good. It's basically the best Iron Iron fanfic I've read in the past few months. The author's settings, emotional descriptions, and plot foreshadowing are all very good. I don't understand why it only has a score of 7.9. Listen to me. If you want to read Star Iron fanfic, just open it when you see this book and finish it. If you don't read it, scold me if it doesn't look good.

It's quite interesting, but I just want to ask the author whether the ending of Cloud Five will be the same as the original one? Also, isn't it said that the protagonist is an army of annihilation? There should be only one life path to power, so why are there four? Please give the author an answer for me. I also hope that the author can write more. Come on.

Make a three-panel comic, with one line and one panel at the top, and two panels on the left and right of the bottom line. The character in the first picture is the protagonist in the top grid. The character is crying, but his mouth is closed, and he is staring at the camera resentfully. In the dialog box: "...". The second frame in the lower left corner still has the character in the first picture as the protagonist. The character sheds tears of regret and asks: "You, what do you have to say?". The third frame in the lower right corner features the character in the second picture as the protagonist. The character has a determined expression and a rope is tied around his neck from above. He closed his eyes and solemnly replied: "If you have nothing to say, please do it quickly!" The overall style is black and white. All conversations take place in dialog boxes, with no repeated content. All shots are shown in close-up. Pay attention to the characters in each box. I repeat it again. The first two boxes are the characters in the first picture I sent, and the last box are the characters in the second picture I sent.

Look! No Knife, the author's writing is delicate and sweet!

The author is very fragrant, very smooth and even calls me brother, and the writing is very sweet, so sweet that it makes me feel bitter.

It is very suitable for the second creation of the game. The character creation is very rich, especially the elements of Chinese style. I want to see more of the interaction between Jingmaomao and the protagonist hh. Who doesn't love big cats? I will continue to follow up with the author.

Very good fanfic, well worth watching

The book is very well written, but at first I thought it was about a single female lead, but then other people came and I was a little confused about whether it was one female or multiple, but overall it was very well written. I want to give the author a gift, but I don't know if the author wants a dollar knife or a pound. If so, I will go to the kitchen to get money for the author right away [smile]

It's not bad. If you like to eat knives, you can join it. There may be two heroines or multiple heroines. The writing is okay.

It's okay. If you don't have the setting of time travel, you can still substitute it. The setting of the protagonist is a bit difficult to say.