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I've been watching it for about an hour, so I'd like to give you some suggestions. The progress of the first few chapters of this novel still feels too fast, which is a bit difficult to follow. Secondly, the subject-verb-object structure is often used in early writing, which leads to a kind of third-person alienation of "he did..." And "she did...". This still needs improvement. There are also advantages. The psychology of this novel or the details of daily scenes are very well written, which is quite satisfactory. Last but not least, this is the easiest time for an author of 20,000 to 30,000 words to stop writing. You must know what you want to write. As a writer who has written 700,000 words, I wish you can overcome the most difficult hurdle [Like]

Good book highly recommended! This book is really hard to put down! The plot is compact and the suspense is high, making people unable to stop reading it. The author's writing style is smooth and the characterization is delicate, as if every character is vividly represented on the page. After reading it, I still have endless aftertaste. It is really a good book worth reading!

It's a very niche genre, but I often watch female videos, and I don't like this genre very much. The plot of a mortal cultivating immortality may be a bit cliche, and I always feel that the male protagonist is very carefree, and the politeness of the male protagonist seems to be a bit deliberate, as if he is deliberately covering up the bad side of the male protagonist. Also, it is actually best not to write that the male protagonist is thirty years old, because it will give people the feeling of a greasy uncle [face covering], but it is undeniable that the author's writing style is good [send heartfelt]

This book is about the protagonist struggling in the end of the law. The setting of being parasitized by strange mushrooms is novel. The unsystematic growth line that relies solely on exploration is very immersive. It started slowly but was full of foreshadowing, which feels really good.

The road to spiritual practice is long! But love is a race against time... The author's words! It makes perfect sense... I hope the author won't stop updating! Don't stop updating! Don't stop updating! Ahhhhhhhh! … Let's encourage each other!

The plot of this book is really good, about the difficulties of mortals cultivating immortals. Sometimes this kind of article is more profound than some fast-paced refreshing articles. Just like the biography of mortals cultivating immortals, I have also read it. It is really boring, but why is it a masterpiece?

This is a very nice urban modern novel about cultivating immortality. Overall, it has a bit of the flavor of "The Biography of a Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality", and the author's descriptions are very accurate. It can be said to be a rare masterpiece, especially the description of the characters, which is very vivid. I must give it five stars!

Tieba metaphysics, soul out of body? It's quite interesting [laughing and crying] and the author's writing style is also quite good. I look forward to reading more [laughing]

The author's writing is fluent, and the plot is compact and not procrastinating. It is a good article suitable to be savored in the cat's bed.

It's pretty good, especially for listening to books.

Okay, okay, the author writes very well, such a niche article can be written so well, it's really okay, give it a try.

The author has such a big imagination. This is the first time I have read a work on this subject. The writing style is smooth, the text is humorous and interesting, and there are many small details of psychological description. It is very interesting. It is a treasured author. I look forward to the future creations!

Good-looking, interesting plot, vivid characters, highly recommended!

The storyline of a mortal cultivating immortality is very exciting, and the design of Golden Finger is very clever.

The story concept is very good and the plot is well controlled. Worth recommending.

A very good work, keep reading! Excellent work! [Like][Like]

A very good work with a unique setting. The protagonist is parasitized by fungi. It is unsystematic and eye-catching. Good language skills, looking forward to the next chapters

This novel written by the author is quite interesting [top post][top post][top post] The writing is smooth and the storyline is interesting. Looking forward to better performance from the author and continuous updates

Very nice! Absolutely great article!

This is an urban cultivation novel. The protagonist's unsystematic setting is quite interesting. The story is very delicately described, humorous, and the writing is smooth. It's worth a read!