After Becoming a Girl, I Felt Something Was Wrong.

Overall, the book is pretty good, but since the author is a girl and may not understand boys, I still feel there are a few shortcomings that need to be mentioned after reading it. First, the protagonist is too female from the beginning, in terms of personality, tone of voice, etc. After all, I have been a boy for so many years and there is a passage where it is said that the protagonist used to speak carelessly, so a transition should be added. Secondly, there is something wrong with the writing of the character Zhao Lei. The introduction is very short and I fell in love with the protagonist without recognizing who he is. I personally think it is strange. There is also the character Sun Jing. His personal information has been edited almost, and he is still a perfect man. The author may have written it according to the male protagonist, but the author directly wrote out what Sun Jing likes about the protagonist. The pace is too fast. They were brothers before, but now the identity of the protagonist has changed. The quickness of love is in line with his personality, but feelings need to be cultivated. You can have a good impression, and you can want to protect the protagonist. But as soon as you know that the protagonist is a girl, you immediately start chasing her. It feels a bit strange. No matter how beautiful the protagonist is, it is impossible to accept it so quickly, and it is still a very familiar relationship. I've seen so many so far In fact, the author's writing style is quite good. I have read a lot of transformation stories, but what I like the most is the psychological changes of the male protagonist after his transformation, the process of gradually introducing his new identity, and the story that happened in the process of hiding his new identity. The following may be a daily story, or it may be an emotional story. I like both, but the emotional story may be a little more difficult, especially in the early stages. If you don't lay the groundwork well at the beginning, you may not be able to read the rest. I would like to give some suggestions to the author. Transformation is not a trivial matter. The psychological changes of the protagonist should be bigger and the process should be accepted slowly. Parents are the main roles. Parents should slowly introduce the protagonist. The male protagonist should also help. It is okay to have some feelings in the process. The emotional line should be slower, easy to write and normal. I wish the author will get better and better as he writes more and get a score of 9.0 Or above! ! !

It's good to watch, but there are too many flaws in the plot arrangement. I feel like everything I say is a criticism, so I can only describe my viewing experience. Many plot arrangements are too contradictory and unreasonable. You may not know what you just said in the next episode. This feeling, and how to discover some events. The description of the truth is not good enough, but the interaction and setting between the heroine and Fa Xiao are very good. You can feel Fa Xiao's respect for the heroine, and I also feel that Zhao Lei is a bit disgusting. As long as the contradictions are ignored for the first time I wrote the work, I can actually see that the author worked hard to describe every incident and story that happened to Lin Bin [Sending Hearts] There are less plot flaws later on, it's very interesting, and it's so sad and painful [crying]

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