[Two Female Protagonists] [System Flow] Jonathan, an ordinary social creature, traveled to the world of "One Punch Man" because of a suspicious black box.
The good news is that it comes with a card draw system.
The bad news is that the system newbie gift pack only gives out ten consecutive bonuses once, and the guarantee mechanism seems to be a scam.
The better news is that with a flash of golden light, he won the [Mangekyo Sharingan· Kamui].
Facing the tornado, an S-class hero that fell from the sky and smashed monsters casually, he looked obedient and said, "You're right." In his heart, he roared: "It's a tornado! It's alive! It's so small! But I dare not say it!"
Reader comments
It's not bad. I can accept even minor poison points. The combat power is a bit underwhelming. Maybe it's because my resistance is too high or I haven't eaten good food. But I really think it's good. It can be seen later that the author is also making progress. The progress of the timeline is a bit slow. Come on, author.
Hey, Fubuki's emotional line is a bit of a failure... It's a bit rushed to be released on the shelves... It kind of ruins the character of the protagonist. Don't just listen to the public opinion. Forcing two female protagonists in this way really ruins the character and it's not very comfortable to watch.
To be honest, it feels pretty good and better than many of the same type I have seen before, but there are some things wrong. For example, the S-class was released some time after the association was established. But I still give 5 stars for my support [Thinking] After all, I think your writing is pretty good, and the update speed is quite fast [Like]
Is there a female protagonist? I hope Tatsumaki is the female protagonist.
It looks good, and the writing is okay~(￣▽￣~)~The author is also very awesome! There are 3 updates a day, plus 5 updates from time to time. Although they are all read quickly, overall, it is good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡
Come on (ง •̀_•́)งThe author is great!
@
It's pretty good, but I personally feel there are some flaws in the settings. Give me a five-star support
Not bad, but I remember that Kamui itself also has attacks. You can put half of the enemy into the space, so that it will be cut in half directly. Or am I remembering it wrong or do I need two eyes? [Eat melon]
The book is very good and there are many updates😋
(But why so few people watch it🤔)
The writing is good, but the setting is not very rigorous. You can check more information.
This meteorite originally created by the author, if its true strength is at least Dragon or above, even Tornado can't defeat it in a duel. If it can't beat Tornado, then it must at least be Boros or Explosion with full firepower. Only then can Demon Wolf have the strength to win.
Looks good, I hope the heroine is Tatsumaki
It is considered a high-quality product among Punch of Tomatoes. The author is very responsible. I believe the author will give a perfect ending [Like]
This novel is particularly moving to read. The writing is delicate and smooth, the plot is relaxed and relaxed, the characters are vivid and three-dimensional, and every move is full of fireworks. The story progresses layer by layer, the foreshadowing is clever, and the emotional rendering is just right, which can always easily affect the reader's mood. The lines are full of ingenuity, and it makes you feel emotional when you read it. It is really a masterpiece, and the more you read, the more interesting it becomes.
Chapter 35: The left brain attacks the right brain, which is considered a poisonous point
It's much better than the author's previous book, and I hope it can continue to be like this
Although there are some unreasonable things, overall it looks good.
It's pretty good. It should be at a level of 70 or 8. The ability to draw a lottery is a bit interesting, but there's no god-defying plot. It's a work you can watch to pass the time.
To add a little bit, sensory knowledge abilities, such as breathing techniques, should be able to be learned to remove the restrictions on skill grids.
Five-star review. It's a fanfic of One Punch Man. It has multiple female protagonists and is easy to read.
(An objective evaluation)
Not bad, very pretty
An ever-improving author
Still pretty good
Pretty good, okay.
Come on, give you 5 stars
There is something to see.
It feels pretty good
The content is pretty good, and the quantity is plentiful.
Very nicely written
You'll know just by looking at the score. Without further ado, I'll give it 10 points.
There are some flaws, but after all, I am a fan and my requirements cannot be too high. You can take a look.
It's not bad. I can accept even minor poison points. The combat power is a bit underwhelming. Maybe it's because my resistance is too high or I haven't eaten good food. But I really think it's good. It can be seen later that the author is also making progress. The progress of the timeline is a bit slow. Come on, author. Hey, Fubuki's emotional line is a bit of a failure... It's a bit rushed to be released on the shelves... It kind of ruins the character of the protagonist. Don't just listen to the public opinion. Forcing two female protagonists in this way really ruins the character and it's not very comfortable to watch.
To be honest, it feels pretty good and better than many of the same type I have seen before, but there are some things wrong. For example, the S-class was released some time after the association was established. But I still give 5 stars for my support [Thinking] After all, I think your writing is pretty good, and the update speed is quite fast [Like]
Is there a female protagonist? I hope Tatsumaki is the female protagonist.
It looks good, and the writing is okay~(￣▽￣~)~The author is also very awesome! There are 3 updates a day, plus 5 updates from time to time. Although they are all read quickly, overall, it is good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡ Come on (ง •̀_•́)งThe author is great! @
It's pretty good, but I personally feel there are some flaws in the settings. Give me a five-star support
Not bad, but I remember that Kamui itself also has attacks. You can put half of the enemy into the space, so that it will be cut in half directly. Or am I remembering it wrong or do I need two eyes? [Eat melon]
The book is very good and there are many updates😋 (But why so few people watch it🤔)
The writing is good, but the setting is not very rigorous. You can check more information.
This meteorite originally created by the author, if its true strength is at least Dragon or above, even Tornado can't defeat it in a duel. If it can't beat Tornado, then it must at least be Boros or Explosion with full firepower. Only then can Demon Wolf have the strength to win.
Looks good, I hope the heroine is Tatsumaki
It is considered a high-quality product among Punch of Tomatoes. The author is very responsible. I believe the author will give a perfect ending [Like]
This novel is particularly moving to read. The writing is delicate and smooth, the plot is relaxed and relaxed, the characters are vivid and three-dimensional, and every move is full of fireworks. The story progresses layer by layer, the foreshadowing is clever, and the emotional rendering is just right, which can always easily affect the reader's mood. The lines are full of ingenuity, and it makes you feel emotional when you read it. It is really a masterpiece, and the more you read, the more interesting it becomes.
Chapter 35: The left brain attacks the right brain, which is considered a poisonous point
It's much better than the author's previous book, and I hope it can continue to be like this
Although there are some unreasonable things, overall it looks good.
It's pretty good. It should be at a level of 70 or 8. The ability to draw a lottery is a bit interesting, but there's no god-defying plot. It's a work you can watch to pass the time. To add a little bit, sensory knowledge abilities, such as breathing techniques, should be able to be learned to remove the restrictions on skill grids.
Five-star review. It's a fanfic of One Punch Man. It has multiple female protagonists and is easy to read.
(An objective evaluation)
Not bad, very pretty
An ever-improving author
Still pretty good
Pretty good, okay.
Come on, give you 5 stars
There is something to see.
It feels pretty good
The content is pretty good, and the quantity is plentiful.
Very nicely written
You'll know just by looking at the score. Without further ado, I'll give it 10 points.
There are some flaws, but after all, I am a fan and my requirements cannot be too high. You can take a look.
It looks okay, why is the rating so low?