Let's Make a C-Position Debut, My Heartthrob Xiu Dog!

The group portraits are excellent. In fact, I think each person's personality is quite distinct. The creation of the protagonist can be said to be relatively successful. The new book is already good, so please work hard ＾0＾~ The description deserves 5 stars. I really feel that these sentences are something I can't even write in a composition.

I really like the interactions between Yubao and others. They are all sweet. This is how cats and dogs want to save the world [shy][shy][shy]

The protagonist is so cute, everyone is cute, and the group portraits are so charming ('▽') The protagonist does not have much role, and the supporting characters also spend more time, but I personally like it quite a lot.

It's very beautiful. It feels like a hot-blooded boy. Each character is also very vivid and three-dimensional. The turtle makes my heart warm when I read it. I like the article very much. Can I all in?

Immortal product! ! ! Babies who love watching heartthrobs, don't run away in a hurry, there is a reversal! Although the deputy CP and supporting roles have been eliminated, the world line still revolves around the protagonist. The protagonist is more or less involved in each character's story, and there is no feeling of being excluded. Please support our puppy Shen Jiayu, please? OK! Who wouldn't like such a sunny, enthusiastic, kind and generous puppy? Www. Sincerely. Although Yubao is careless, he is really sensitive to the emotions of the people around him and is eager to provide help to the best of his ability. Seeing such a puppy, I feel like the sun has faded the spots on its body (ᐥᐜᐥ)♡︎ᐝ The first few chapters introduce a lot of important characters, which may seem confusing, but the subsequent descriptions of each character are very accurate, and you can distinguish them without deliberately memorizing them. In addition, everyone is relatively unfamiliar with each other at the beginning, and may have misunderstandings about the protagonist or have less communication with the protagonist. However, at this time, Pei Jin, who is in the same company, and Wu Yu, who is in the same dormitory, filled the emotional line very well, supporting the transition stage from unfamiliarity to familiarity between the protagonist and others. As for the role of supporting characters, since the tone is set to be a heartthrob and it is a talent show, I have a "the more lovers, the more impressive" attitude towards the characters with descriptions. For characters with their own settings and stories, the interaction between them and the protagonist will be more exciting and rich, instead of a simple background panel that makes people feel boring and homogeneous. Moreover, the author did not isolate the protagonist when dealing with the supporting character's growth line, so there will be no feeling that the protagonist is ignored. On the contrary, the protagonist occupies a prominent part in the supporting character's story line. This protagonist is a joy to watch! One last little suggestion: If you plan to write about the entertainment industry or live streaming, it is recommended that you replace the barrage with square brackets or other symbols that are different from double quotation marks to avoid confusion with the character dialogue. Update the reading time, the final stage is coming so soon ww it feels like it hasn't been long since I watched it

Tied, NO! ! ! ! ! ! The characters are very three-dimensional and vivid. When I first saw this book on a recommendation, the rating was very low (it only took me one day to tie it up🥰), so I just came in with the attitude of giving it a try. I read the introduction, and since it said it was a group portrait, I was even more curious about the content of the novel. At first, I read it with the same mindset I had when reading novels. I felt that the protagonist had too few roles. Why did it keep describing other people? But the subsequent image of each character slowly coming to life is like a vine that quietly wraps around my attention. When I came back to my senses, the corners of my mouth had already been outlined into a crescent moon by those smart details, and I couldn't put them down. While watching, I kept looking back at the previous stories between the characters, which was very interesting. This may be the charm of group portraits. No character exists to "promote the plot". Their very existence is the plot. Their love and hate are not footnotes to the fate of the protagonists, but real rivers of life flowing in parallel. Stop, stop, seems to be a typo, it means freshness, not life [crying]

The author writes really well, the protagonist is very cute, and the CP is also very good. Although there are very few people, I hope the author can keep writing! There is actually a lot I want to say. It was originally a long review, about a thousand words long, but I have revised it several times since last night and it still gets stuck, so out of anger I decided to post more of what I want to say to the author and everyone in the comment area! Finally tied! The boss writes beautifully! Still waiting for food to be served. In addition, I would like to add that I think there are a small number of people who feel that there are too many people in the beginning and they can't remember them. I want to say that you don't need to remember everyone at the beginning. The boss's part is very well written. Whether it is the protagonist, several important characters or supporting characters, his personality is very distinct. Everyone has their own unique side, and the plot is also very well written. Everyone slowly reads later, and as the plot progresses, these characters will naturally be remembered! ^ ^ Last courtesy contribution: Jinyu 99 Yunyu 99 Lin Shen 99 Linyu 99 Pisces 99 Yanyu 99 Hangyu 99 Cheyu 99 Jingyu 99 Yinyu 99 Allyu, please come on and support Fa Wu, Fa Zong, Fa Paralysis, Fa Ma, Fa Pain, Fa Soreness, Fa Swelling, Fa Stuffiness, Fa Blockage, Fa Fatigue, Fa Tiredness, Fa Sleepiness, Fa Tiredness, Fa Impatient, Fa Tiredness, Fa Panic, Fa Palpitation, Fa Courage, Fa Fear, Fa Fear, Fa Sadness, Fa Sadness, Dharma worry, Dharma sorrow, Dharma anger, Dharma anger, Dharma hatred, Dharma resentment, Dharma regret, Dharma shame, Dharma shame, Dharma astringency, Dharma stagnation, Dharma sinking, Dharma heavy, Dharma deficiency, Dharma weakness, Dharma decline, Dharma exhaustion, Dharma cold, Dharma cold, Dharma hard, Dharma wood, Dharma dullness, Dharma stupidity, Dharma dullness, Dharma dazzle, Dharma confusion

How can I put it this way? I still like the character design of the protagonist, but why is the setting of the heartthrob not reflected very well? Moreover, it feels like there are a lot of foreshadowings, and there are too many characters and it's too confusing. It's hard to remember and there are so many sub-CPs. The author, please portray the protagonist well. By the way, please update quickly. I'm still looking forward to the following plot [Blow Kiss][Blow Kiss]

He has a cat-like appearance and a dog-like personality. He is not a heartthrob who falls in love just by looking at his face. The protagonist has a good personality. He was born in a remote village, unpolluted, and treats people sincerely (but it is more controversial - a hateful and miserable person who almost killed himself for his own selfish desires, he chose to forgive) Xiaoyu cannot satisfy everyone, and he also has his own decisions. [My personal opinion is good, about the character design! Another: The stage described by the boss is really shocking, and outsiders are quite excited to see it. What a group portrait! ! Anyway, I love watching group portraits. Although I can't remember the name of the meeting in the early stage, the characteristics are still quite distinct. The writing is very smooth (but I think there are a few repeated words that are a bit abrupt) There is a deputy cpx1, when, that pair. There isn't much plot but if you don't like a heartthrob with a secondary CP, you should leave, it will be a bit alienating. It must be all, extra single line ah ah ah Make a wish: I want to see Tuan Zong with relatives, and Modo Modo's Shura Field [Like] Love every one of them! ! Xiao Jiang, you are so cute! Brother Che, please work harder! His angel, Xiao Lu also smells so good! ! I was so hasty that I thought Xiaoyun would like her love rival Yuyu... After all, I pledged my life to save my life... But that's good too! ! Vigorous friendship is no worse than love! Boss, quick update To sum up: read mine clearance carefully, you can fall into the pit

It's very interesting, the author is very obedient, and the plot is quite attractive. The highlights are all marked in the introduction and the first chapter. Stop scolding the author, and don't hit the cook when eating! Please (I'm sorry for you Yuweishan) (╥_╥)

There are so many lyrics, and I can't imagine what tone they are sung in. If the author plans to create a live-action version of the listening book in the future, how will he edit it like this? I really look forward to it. I like the feeling of real people listening to books. I listen to books every day. The writing is really beautiful. I feel that our protagonist is the favorite of the group. This character setting really hit my xp. It is so perfect. Although there is a secondary CP, it does not hinder things. It's just that the main character's plot is a bit lacking. I wish I could arrange more of the main character. To be honest, there are a lot of 100 people. I can't remember their names. Actually, does it feel like the number of people who favor him is still five less? If you add more, maybe it will look better. I just like five people with multiple people, but it seems a bit easy to finish. How many chapters does the author plan to write? How many thousands of words?

Good looking It is also a successful tie, the little fish is really cute! I like it so much! He is sincere and bright, friendly and honest So even if I forgive Zhou later, I will happily accept it, because Shen is such a very good person. I also like the group portraits very much. The author's writing is also very good, and each character has distinct characteristics! The character designs also really impressed me xp! ~ Although I still can't accept that the heartthrob Wen has a deputy CP, he is also a very good person. Lovers must be nice! Currently, I like Pisces and Goldfish, but I still support all. Because all in is the best! ! ! But now I'm a little worried about the exposure of academic qualifications, right? TT Still looking forward to the follow-up development! ~ (So please update quickly!)૧(●´৺`●)૭

There are recommendations for lightning protection↓ Excluding situations where the author may be banned or have a trumpet account, I think it's great that the first book can be written like this. After reading through all the reviews, I found that there was some debate about the character of the main character. The protagonist is a country boy and there is something honest and honest in his heart. Therefore, he is very friendly when dealing with fellow trainees. Even when faced with someone who wants to use the protagonist's life and safety to make annoying people angry or for other purposes, he still chooses to sign a letter of understanding. The main reason for this controversy among readers is the disagreement about the way to deal with things, which varies from person to person. But for readers who are slightly controlled or have no controlled attributes, it is still acceptable. (Mainly because the author's writing style is okay╮(￣▽￣)╭) Recommendation: The emotional pull between the protagonist and other people is very touching. Everyone is very charming, including but not limited to love at first sight, love for a long time, support in the years, tsundere and poisonous snake, sexy mature man, and dull personality that only likes one person. The story has a strong narrative. Lightning protection: Be cautious for readers who pursue fast pace, cool writing and sweet love.

The description of the stage at the beginning feels like there are too many people. It's only the first few chapters and I can't see the key points. I almost wanted to quit. I was afraid of forgetting the names of the people and I worked hard to make a lot of marks. It's so troublesome. But the later part is really beautiful. Yubao is really cute. It's very cute. The perfect contrasting dog sculpture. I like it.

🥰🥰It's very beautiful. I've always liked articles about debuts. 👅👅❤️This group portrait makes omnivorous people ecstatic. Everyone is a good baby. 👅👅😻Boss, I will always follow you👍😀, (I love puppies),😻

As for this cute fish, the writing is very good on the big stage. Hehe, the loyal dogs are Wu Yu, Pei Gou, Lin Long, and Jingchu. These and Xiaoyu are all very good at the moment. I look forward to the follow-up Xuan Cai Yun's really delicious hh. You are also fascinated by this fish baby❛˓◞˂̵✧

Tied! (T^T) I'm actually not used to writing book reviews, but! ! ! It's so beautiful! ! ! I just prefer to read the kind of heartthrobs and group portraits. Everyone should like heartthrobs! ! ! ! He should be pampered! Let's talk about the protagonist first, Shen Jiayu, Xiaoyu is so cute. He saw his father in prison at a young age, lived with his mother and sister in a small village, dropped out of high school and went to work alone (there seems to be a bit of a spoiler here?) It's obviously a disaster, but Ren can maintain a kind and optimistic heart. It's rare to see him. Moreover, if I meet such a person in real life, I will also be moved by him, right? (Actually, I was already impressed by Xiaoyu) Is this the charm of a heartthrob? She is so charming to me Σ(|||▽||| ) and she always treats people sincerely (I feel this is really rare!) She also has high emotional intelligence (has a sense of boundaries, understands propriety, knows what to say and what not to say, who knows is really a plus) This is the real heartthrob! ! ! Use your personality charm to conquer others, infect others, and warm others, instead of being cared for and loved in a one-sided, unreasonable, inexplicable, and sudden way. Speaking of other people, the characters in the author's works are three-dimensional and vivid. Everyone has his own reasons for the formation of his character and the way he behaves, and there is no such thing as simple good or bad, wrong or right. The characters in the entire article gave me the feeling that the plot serves the characters, rather than the characters serving the plot. It is their actions that promote the development of the plot, rather than the plot dictating their actions. And basically the experiences of most of the main characters are very clear, and the author knows how to write files! I can feel that Da Da is really caring for the characters he writes (actually I want to say that I love you, but I feel too numb...) The reason why I don't write book reviews often is actually just to express my thoughts... Moreover, why do I write so much nonsense! ! ! In short, to sum up, the big fans compete with each other, the small fish compete with each other, and the author competes with the big ones! ! !

This dog sculpture of Jiayu is really comfortable. It just shines on others with enthusiasm. I haven't seen a book that suits my taste for a long time. The interaction with other people is also very good. Xiao Jiayu must be happy≡ω≡

It's so beautiful. The protagonist with cat-like appearance and dog-like attributes really impressed me. The writing is also very good and the emotional line is very delicate. I feel that the author is also very cute. He is the most interactive author I have ever seen. I like it, I like it, I hope I can follow it to the end❤️

The score of this book is unexpectedly low. It is well written. I guarantee that it is really good with my nearly six years of reading experience. The proportion of the deputy CP is not too high. The two are similar to Hate Haiqingtian. The one who does not accept the deputy CP is Da Lei, but the one who can accept it is simply a piece of cake. But I like Qing Che very much. He is a very good boy. Even if he is not in the harem, I really like him.

This is the most satisfying draft article I've ever read, bar none. Moreover, this book is the longest among draft articles, but I didn't feel bored at all. 1. About the characters The author describes the image of each character very concretely, and you can truly feel that everyone is flesh and blood, not just paper figures. 2. About each team's cp What I think is particularly good is that the author has arranged the appearance of each attack in a very reasonable manner, and the types are diverse. You will not have to worry about not finding something you like in this article. 3. About writing style The writing is online throughout, with quite a few philosophical sentences, as well as some descriptions of the environment and character descriptions that you can accumulate and use in your compositions. It is very different from the many books on Tomato that are all about memes (I don't mean to say that memes are bad, I also like to read books with memes, but I just say that they are rare, so it is a breath of fresh air. I hope the author sticks to his own writing style) Finally, when I read the novel, I actually quite like Jiayu's innocent nature (not brainless and pure), and I sincerely wish this book will get better and better. Of course I forgot a little bit, maybe because not many people saw it, the author is very active, I think it's quite cute [sending my heart][sending my heart] Also, I saw that many teachers don't like the fact that there is a deputy CP in the heartthrob article, because I have already read it once (the reading time shown is not a reference, I have two numbers, and the times are crossed), so I would like to express my overall opinion. It is true that at first, like many teachers, I was not very accepting of the setting of a heartthrob novel with a secondary CP... But now that I'm on my second playthrough, I feel that the deputy CP only accounts for less than 10 chapters in total. It can be understood that about 97% are the protagonists and related scenes, and less than 3% are supporting roles, and those chapters are consecutive scenes, so those who really don't like it can skip it (personal opinion, mainly to express my overall feelings about the number of deputy CP scenes) Moreover, the existence of this pair of sub-CPs also advances the protagonist's emotional line to a certain extent (this is also one of the author's intentions in writing the sub-CPs), and I think the group portrait cannot only be about love (especially the subject of the talent show, otherwise it will be a story about selecting a concubine for the palace). This CP and the protagonist are cb friendship-oriented, which enriches the image of the protagonist and makes it more full. (I didn't say that the deputy CP is the background board. Their characters are also very delicious. I just objectively evaluate a few things about the deputy CP) Teachers, you can still give it a try. We really can't accept it and it's never too late to give up. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] Finally, I would like to thank all the readers and authors who have patiently read the long review [sending heartfelt thanks]

It took almost two days to tie it up. It's so beautiful! The emotional line is very well written [crazy], which makes me feel that the relationship between them should develop like this. Everyone's emotional opportunities are well-founded, instead of falling in love just by saying that they fall in love with nothing. Jiayu is very kind, but not blindly gentle, but a kind of clear firmness, not innocent and harmless. How to put it best, I think it is a kind of compassion with a backbone. His kindness has a threshold and an echo. It does not breed greed or weakness. It's normal to fall in love with such a person! [Full] There were a lot of characters at first, and I couldn't remember their names [thinking], but as the plot slowly developed, it's not confusing at all now! Each character is very distinctive, and the characters are also very three-dimensional and rich. While watching, I was moved many times by the emotional descriptions of attack and reception. [Crying] The author occasionally comes up with one or two divine sentences that really hit the heart. There is no need to worry about the scenes between the supporting characters and the protagonist! It was handled very well and I was very happy to see it. Whether it was the deputy CP or the main CP, it was very easy to beat! The character design is also extremely delicious [Adoration] This is the first time I write such a long comment on Tomato, so please give the author a big boost (the boss is a very delicate person, and he is always giving emotional feedback to readers, which is so heartwarming!)

I think this book is very interesting. It is also the first book I have read that is related to the entertainment industry. Then I think the protagonist's heartthrob is very reasonable. It's not the kind of person who falls in love with you at first sight just because you are good-looking, but the protagonist's personality is very good and is worthy of being liked. But I think the teacher's writing style is also very good, and the character creation is not cookie-cutter. It also made me feel the charm of group portraits. Don't worry, it's really beautiful.

Too! Good! Look! Got it! The character of the protagonist really impressed me, and the CP is also delicious. Teacher, if I can maintain this rhythm, I will follow [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration]

A particularly cute article. I am a serious fan of dog sculptures. I have read this book but didn't read it because of the cat's appearance. Now it seems that this is not the case at all. . It's totally a puppy, this sjy. The sunny, cheerful and heartthrob puppy is the one hanging. The only uncomfortable point is the pair of sub-CPs. I can't accept sub-CPs at all, but this one is too cute. The author also said that they don't have much plot, so I reluctantly accepted it, but around Chapter 89, they also have too many plots. . . Maybe the author thinks there are very few, but in total there are about six or seven chapters talking about their affairs. It's close to one-tenth, which I personally can't accept. I hope they will have less drama in the future.

The emotions written by the author are very delicate. Everyone is very vivid and has their own image characteristics, as if they are really watching a talent show. For example, Qing is passionate about designing clothes, Pei is grumpy, sincere and protective, and has the demeanor of a veteran cadre. The protagonist is also very cute. This author is also very good at writing. What a cute article [love]. Come on!

So pretty😍! ! I really like Yunyu CP! ! ! ! ! ! From the moment Xuan Cai Yun risked his life to save Yu Bao, I was sure that I would love this Yun Yu CP for the rest of my life🥰The author's writing style is really good, and each character has distinctive characteristics! Like it 😍! !

Here comes the turtle mother fan, I really like this kind of puppy character who is cold on the outside but lively on the inside. I look forward to the little turtle's C-position debut😘😘😘

The author's writing is very nice. Although the main character of [Love] is not too prominent, it still makes her feel like a heartthrob. Also, there are too few, not enough to watch. Don't be tired, author, and don't be idle! [Smile]

It's been a long time since I've seen a protagonist with such a big dog personality. Shen Jiaxia is so cute and in contrast! It looks like a cold kitten, but turns out to be a cheerful puppy. It's so cute to me, and the characterization is also very good! ! Everyone has their own story and characteristics! Pei Jin, come on! I'm optimistic about you!